You had me at Sparklecest.

8154806 Ayy, fancy seeing you here. I'm a big fan of your stories; hopefully you'll enjoy mine as well.

You had me worried a tiny bit near the end there.

Good story though!

8155198 Thank you. I totally could have taken a darker route with the ending, but I prefer to keep things somewhat lighthearted.

This is kinda cute, in a kinky, magic stealing sort of way. Great job!

8156857 Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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Levity is always appreciated

I always like fics where Shining is the bottom in the story. It was good hope you make more of those like this.

8157204 Most of the clop stories I write involve stallions being the submissive; I wouldn't have it any other way. Thanks :)

And the REAL plot-twist:.......it was Queen Chrysalis all along!

8157597 And then Chrysalis suddenly has lots of powerful unicorn changeling babies and uses them to take over Equestria. W H A T A T W I S T.

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I may need a cold shower after this one.

8172318 Lol, I'm glad my writing was effective.

Wow, this is fantastic! Ineed more of this stuff! Great job!

“Hello, Shining Armor. I’ve come to pay you a visit.” She whispered entrancingly.

His body: "Oh no!"
His mind: "Oh yes!"

Hopefully Twilight won't find too much of a liking in this, or we will have serious trouble...
Especially if she finds a was to use the stolen magic (and cum) to further strengthen herself.
We would end up with a villain even the royal sisters would struggle to defeat.