CHAPTER 48
AUTHORS NOTE: As I said in my recent blog post, I need voice actors for the Audio Book of this story. Just see the post for details. Any help will be appreciated. Thanks in advance!
"*Yawn*" I woke up, groggy from all of the moving. I had to move all of my DJ equipment into the attic...I was aching all over. I had slept in my clothes. I started getting undressed to put on a fresh outfit. I took off my sneakers... And immediately fell through the floor of the cloud home.
"AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!"
Here we go again...
I was just about to hit the ground, when a purple glow surrounded me.
"You took off the sneakers, didn't you?" Twilight saved me.
"Yep."
"Don't worry, I have a spell to fix this."
"OK... But try not to nearly kill me like the last two times."
Twilight smiled sheepishly, and let me go.
"Alright... Hold still..."
"Maybe agreeing to these spells is a bad idea... Oh well."
ZAP!
I felt a tingling sensation, then I felt power surging through me.
"There. I've given you the ability to walk on clouds."
"Is it permanent?"
"Yeah. It's a much stronger spell then what I used when me and everypony else first went to Cloudsdale."
"No side effects?"
"None."
"Thanks Twilight... Can you float me back up to the house?"
"Sure."
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I sat on the bench outside of the jewlery store.
"Me and Dashie have done... It... And we are raising a foal now... I think I need to move this relationship one step further..."
I looked at the packet of proposal earrings I had just bought. I was thinking of all the ways this could go wrong...
"OH GODDESSES..."
I shook off the thoughts, and put the earrings back in their case, and in my pocket.
"Oh man... I dunno what to do..."
"I've gotten into so many serious things here in Equestria over the past month and a half..."
"Hey Kyle!" Derpy hovered over to me.
"Oh, hey Derpy. Where's The Doctor?"
"He's waiting back in the TARDIS. I decided to come back home for a little while!"
"Oh. Well, welcome back."
"So, what was with the wedding earrings? Planning something special?"
I blushed a deep red. "Ummm... Well... You see, I... Ummm..."
"I hope you and Rainbow Dash are happy together."
"Thanks, Derpy."
She flew off, teetering to each side from time to time.
"What have I gotten myself into..."
I got up, and decided to wander about for a little while.
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I sat in the usual restaurant, sipping a coffee, trying to think.
"Confound my uncertainty, it drives me to insanity."
"Hey, kid."
"Hey, Vinyl."
"So, what's eating at you?"
"Well..."
"Yeah?"
I lowered my tone to a whisper. "I plan on proposing to Dashie."
Her eyes widened, and she stared at me. "Kid, are you sure about this? I mean, that's a life conviction."
"I'm sure. I love her, and she loves me. Isn't that reason enough?"
Vinyl nodded her head. "Sound sincere to me. Go get her, tiger." She grinned.
"Thanks. I gotta go. Seeya Vinyl."
"Later, 1NS4N1TY."
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I stood outside of the door, not wanting to go inside. Just facing Dashie would make me nervous. Vinyl's words rang through my head.
"Go get her, tiger."
I nodded my head, and swallowed. I opened the door, and walked inside. Dashie and Scoots were waiting for me.
"DADDY!" Scoots threw herself at me.
"Ah!" I caught her. "Not today, Scoots. But mommy and I need to talk."
"OK!" She ran off somewhere in the house.
"What is it you wanted to talk about, Kyle?"
"Well... You see... I..."
"Come on, you're usually NEVER this nervous. What is it? Did you do something?"
"No... But there is something I want to do..."
"Oh really now?" She smiled seductively, and took a step closer. Oh for the love of...
"No, not that... Dashie... I..." I reached into my pocket, and pulled out the box. Dashie immediately knew what it was.
"Kyle... You mean..."
"Dashie, I want to spend the rest of my life with you... I love you, and you know that. Dashie..."
I popped the question, and she couldn't hold back the tears of joy.
THE COMMENTS! THEY MAKE ME CONFUSED!
Lucky Twilight was nearby. It's cute that Kyle is all nervous and everything while the ponies he meets who find out about his plans are basically "You two are great for each other" and the such. Scoots is still a big ball of energy it seems. At least she listens unlike some kids I know irl.
Now it's all for one, and All for Love!
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Heh. Thanks.
My D'aaws. Take all of them. D'AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW
yheah lets call them tears of "joy"
My my, you're a bold one, aren't you?
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They are!
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Yeah, sure. I'm actually REALLY shy. I can just muster up courage faster than other people.
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YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
I'm happy for you mate now , what seat would you like on the train straight to hell ? Oh I can get you a seat near Osama or maybe MJ , now we have a variety of seats : burning seats , spiked seats , shocking seats , oh and newly added singing seats [ mostly Justin Bieber and Rebeka Black ]
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If you don't like the story, then not read it, nor comment it.
I know that being a brony is means being friendly and tolerate to everyone, but in your case...
GO TO HELL YOU IDIOT!
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I don't know about you,but i'd rather take the HIGHWAY to hell
Somehow I find myself uncharacteristicly speachless.
Ah :)
WOW going two chapters in a row without any problems in the story... Thats a record.
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What did I ever do to you? Oh well, I still love and tolerate you no matter what.
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Heh, I knew I would leave a lot of people speechless.
SO.......MUCH....D'Awwwwwwwwwwww!
I would say D'awww, but that's overused.
I must think of a new way to express the cuteness and heartwarmingness...
...I know! I'll let my head smash onto my keyboard after I die of diabetes from this!
3...2...1...
B VHNDF
*pops back to life* I think that worked out well.
D'AWWWWWW
God, horse anus. I feel like exploding, no wait, there is something better than exploding.
FUS RO DAH!!!
Aaah, that feels much better. Nao, YOU SICK BESTIALITY FREAK!! You just fucked a goddamn pony! Have you no shame for your humanity!? Let the Gods have mercy on you. Azzazel might be right, maybe you do need a reserved seat to hell. First class with all the torture tools. Satan will personally cut of your balls. Then burn your shaft into a crisp. Then give it to Rainbow Dash. Seriously, burn in hell Kyke, irl.
Son...I am dissappoint.
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it is just a story
I have to say, this is the first Human X Pony fic I've read that has a marriage between them. Props for that.
78417 Exactly. Sheesh SureFreeD, why are you being such an ass?
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Thanks friend.
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I dunno... Maybe he is just narrow-minded?
WHOOOO! A PROPOSAL!
Congrats!
I like how because an author writes about something some people automatically think that they have experience in that or have done/want to do it themselves. Following this line of thinking there would be a lot of serial killer best selling authors out there, lol.
It's just a story, get over it. If you don't like it don't/quit reading it.
78424 You trying to mug me off mate? Don't try, your attempts are futile.
Sorry I had to. Actually your story is quite the piece, I like it. But marrige between a pony and a war investing human? The road cracks there for me, I'm not hating or anything. No harm done?
*extends hoof for a brohoof*
78430 Thinks for a moment,
*Very light brohoof*
78430 Thinks for a moment,
*Very light brohoof*
78406 Father, you are stupid
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Dude... I'm not "War Investing." I hate war with a burning passion. And again, if you don't like what I write, then don't read it. Do you really think I care if someone "Draws the line" at something? That's your opinion, bud, not mine. So either stop complaining, or get out. I don't want people like that reading my story.
78519 You hate war? War is what makes us human, besides, if WW3 accurred...nevermind. I didn't say I hate your story, and I'm not complaining about anything. Don't reply and this little 'fight' of ours will end.
Uhm kyle I forgot to you this in the chapter that you adopted Scoots but I went back and watched a few episodes of MLP FiM and I'm absolutely 100% positive that Scoots is RD's sister
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Well, it isn't officially in the show, so it isn't 100% true. And besides, if Scoots was Dashie's sister, they would look similar. And plus, why would Scoots look up to her so much and stuff? And plus, Scoots would have a larger role if she was Dashie's sister. I believe that the idol worship from Scoots, and Dashie's swollen ego, causes Dashie to act as an older sister figure to Scoots. It makes more sense.
GOD DAMN I HAVEN'T EVEN READ THE BOOK BUT WHAT IS WITH THE LARGE AMOUNT OF CHAPTERS
AND IT STILL HAS MORE COMING OUT
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This isn't even a book... Lol. But the reason there are so many chapters is because when I was about five years old, I started playing video games constantly, and shoved my imagination into a tiny box. I decided to try writing this story a few weeks ago, and that box burst open, and a load of ideas came out with it.
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Stories are for fun, part of our imagination. Don't care what neigh sayers think, instead write for us who enjoy the story :)
78844 I also shoved my imagination into a box. this is all i have to say thanks to that
FUS-DO-RAH
oh and..
CUTENESS OVERLOAD *ERROR* *ERROR*
D'AWWWING NOT ENOUGH
MUST FIND NEW CUTENESS VENT
*head explodes*
well that worked out pretty damn well
As soon as I saw the title, I knew just the song for this one:
http://m.youtube.com/?rdm=4ozmbjp2g&reload=3#/watch?v=4ujs255pllM
Kyle, there's one thing wrong with your story
I can't find anything wrong!!
Awesome story 5/5
Oy the amount of "hate mail" that showed up is insane. People you do realize that this and all other stories are fiction right? I mean it's even in the site's name. Of course everyone is entitled to their own opinion and all that jazz but throwing this kind of hate around over a story is insane.
I personally hate war. Doesn't mean I won't fight to protect myself or others I care about. I will admit that war seems to be a constant in human history but it doesn't mean that all humans are basically warmongers just waiting for their chance to start up a war.
Honestly I think that's one of the reasons Equestria seems so appealing to most bronies. It's a peaceful world that seems untouched by war and the strife that comes about due to war. It's portrayed as a utopia basically and as such already seems infinitely better than what we have going on here on Earth.
Of course that's also probably why so many fics seem to have wars popping up in Equestria. It's hard to think of a world where there is no war.
Now with that out of the way, can we go back to being good bronies and enjoy these stories about ponies?
so kyle needs to plan 2 weddings now? i would very much like to say that iget the feeling that all the crap that kyle is piling on is going to flying when it hits the fan and when it does i want it to be hilarious!
NICE!!! Congrats on your proposal. but you have adopted scootaloo, and you had sex with rainbow dash... You should get a pregnancy test for her. PLEASE BE NO!!! You already have one kid to look after!
79399 Human 'seed' can't inpregnate a pony, dude, biology n' shit.
Congratulations, i hope that you two have a wonderful life together and enjoy
79437 its a story......get used to it
just have to leave off there.. dont you...
DAMN DUDE FINISH THIS I KNOW IT IS NOT COMPLETE OR I WOULD HATE YOU
ENDING A DAMN STORY LIKE THIS
Please dont stop the story here, i love your style of writing. I want more.
Hmm Iv'e come back after 24 hours WHERE IS A NEW CHAPTER THE ANTICIPATION IS KILLING ME.