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Sup brah? The name's MegaSean45, founder of Shroom Films! I'm the writer of the Friendship is Epic series, its two short spin-offs, and the Alternate Season Six story! I'm also a YouTuber! :D


After the Mane Six, Spike, and Starlight Glimmer have a dream about a mysterious cave in the Everfree Forest, they journey out to discover it's secrets, including one of Equestria's oldest friends, who's also the brother of the most evil villain Equestria has ever had!

Learn of the backstory of one of Equestria's biggest villains, the return of an Equestrian historical figure, new bondings being made, destinies being fulfilled, and the possible origins of one particular dragon!

This is my FINAL fanfic in Fimfiction! Since I feel bad about leaving the Alternate Season Six story unfinished, I'm making one more story for Fimfiction, and it's the biggest MLP story I've ever made! I've already started writing actual novels, but this story is going to mark my departure of making MLP fanfics. I do hope you enjoy this one, because I really hope for a similar story in the actual show!

Chapters (32)
Comments ( 13 )

Wow... I'm surprised they like him but wondering why his father sent an assassin to end him?

If Scorpan was voiced, what would he sound like?

8129143 Good question! I'm not really sure, to be honest!

quick correction on spelling

“Yeah, Princess Celestia requested my presents!”

presents should be presence

8157599 Good eye! Just got it changed!

I know I haven't been posting any chapters in a while, but it's still being made! Just very slowly because I am doing many other things. Act 4 is LONG, but just a couple more chapters and it'll be done! Once I finish the last chapter of Act 4, they'll be published immediately!

Reading this arc, I got to say, Scorpan is a coward who makes excuses to avoid Tirek, the only brother who Scorpan betrayed since Tirek trusted him more than the love he never got from his father. Scorpan is trying to stay in Equestria since he backstabbed his brother, his family, his citizens and kingdom because of friendship. Before I reread your chapters again, I got two questions that I hope you can answer if its okay with you. One: I thought Gargoyles never turn on their clan? Two: Isn't Tartarus suppose to nullified all magic; good & evil? Plus if Scorpan does return to his kingdom I'm betting this will happen to him.

Just the part where their yelling and what was stolen


The answer to your first question, I guess I need to research gargoyles more, but then again, maybe he's different from other gargoyles, just like Gabby is different from other griffons, Thorax is different from other changelings, etc.

To answer your second question: you'll have to find out once Act 5 gets released! ;)

Thanks for answering my questions and the reason I ask about Gargoyles is because their is only one Gargoyle that betrays her clan. upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/thumb/5/50/Demona.png/250px-Demona.png
I picked her since she's an awesome anti-protagonist.

holy moly man the chapters you released

Sorry but BOO!!! I apologize for choosing to dislike the ending but I was a bit hoping it would be like this… 3:16

Book - Tartarus
Sarah Ravencroft - Tirek
Ben Ravencroft - Scorpan/spoiler]

Celestia looks over at Scorpan again, and she sighs and then smiles, “Okay, Twilight. I trust you! I trust Scorpan too! I don’t know what I was thinking. I guess… I just don’t want to see my subjects in Equestria get their magic drained again. I could somewhat tolerate Nightmare Moon’s or even Discord’s plots since they weren’t that dangerous to ponykind. Nightmare Moon just wanted forever night, and Discord just wanted to fool around and cause chaos, but he wasn’t physically harming anypony; but Tirek… he’s a monster.”

Because eternal night totally wouldn't be dangerous.


That would have made a better ending if chrysalis didnt make getting into tartarus as simple as she did. Hell, before tirek got the magic from discord and twilight, he was able to open a portal into tartarus and toss the other princessess in.

But yeah, i felt this story kinda tripped at the finish line for a good ending.

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