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FlareGun45


Let's see what we got here.... OJ, Soda Pop, Purple Stuff, Sunny D.... *BOP* Coulda had a V8!

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Gallus' relationship with Grandpa Gruff (or Grampa Gruff as some spell his name) has always been complicated, but Counselor Trixie helps Gallus see a different point of view of the situation.

Follow the story narrated by Gallus as we see more into his backstory and his relationship with his guardian, Grandpa Gruff, and witness the very first counselling session of the new counselor for the School of Friendship: Trixie!

This story contains spoilers for S9E19: Dragon Dropped, and S9E20: A Horse Shoe-In!

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Comments ( 4 )

But...Trixie didn't help Gallus see things differently. Spike and Gabby did. I mean, sure, there was that story about her wagon, but that was it. :applejackunsure:

This has some good ideas, despite not matching up exactly with canon, but it could really use a proofreader. You should go find someone to look over your work for you, perhaps starting with this story.

I actually feel like I should point out the very problematic nature of this story: as the victim of a clinically narcissistic parent, I was repeatedly given the terrible advice of realizing that parent "loved" me and trying harder in our relationship. This story is kind of built around repainting an inherently abusive and uncaring relationship as secretly loving, and that's really not a good reworking of the message.

I ran to my dorm and slammed the door shut, and I hopped on bed and started to, errrr.... think. Yeah. I definitely wasn't crying. No, really, I wasn't crying! YOU were crying!

lol lmao :rainbowlaugh:

Trixie really is great in this

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