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"I could not help feeling that they were evil things-- mountains of madness whose farther slopes looked out over some accursed ultimate abyss." - H.P. Lovecraft, At The Mountains of Madness

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I wonder do they study the tumors after they are removed? Bet there's a use for them

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They are arcane cysts that can explode.

Of course there's a use for them.

Ahh~
The wonderfully stinky smell of teen angst and reconciliation.

Love it.

Yas.

Kinetic energy is a killer.....bwahaha!

Ah.

Young love, surrounded by those that would break them apart.

I predict that a certain blonde will come back in the future though.

"Sooo....will there be anal probing by little green men involved?" Asked Private Pennywee.

"I'll pray to the almighty equipment inspector and offer my left ear that doesn't happen." Answered Corporal Belts.

"Cut the chatter, you both know that in the vicinity of these dime gates anything can happen." Spoke Sergeant Seward.
"In any event, I'm still just trusting that you two remembered to connect your air lines on the suits so that you don't suffocate and burn to death from the lungs outwards like what almost happened last time." Quipped the surly human sergeant as he slowly edged over a blackened ridge that crested a deep crater.

Good chapter.

It reminds me of those old movies where there are two sides to every story and buried underneath it all is a terrible power just playing the strings.

You know I did not care to much for the boy untill this moment

Sabotage?

ITS A TRAP!

8105349 well mot like o hated him just how he acted
about all the glory he would get when joined the military I get that he was seeing it through rose coloured glasses that are youth but it still got on my nerves and im no rebel I will fight for the country but the government is not the country the people who live there are. (And if I can hate a kid in a story the writer doing something right)

Power corrupts, absolute power corrupts absolutely.

Take note young Altair, for you will see this first-hand should you force another to do thy bidding.

Now I have to wait for another chapter.

Damn.

Anyone else get a Philadelphia Experiment vibe going on?

So the family curse is back again eh?

Is half the chapter supposed to be in Italics?

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No it is not. I'll fix it.

8116346 I noticed your first story hit 1k likes. Congrats.

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Thank you! I appreciate it!

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You should listen to this:

Blueblood dead before the first chapter is over. lumiere-a.akamaihd.net/v1/images/open-uri20150608-27674-wiquhr_3528045b.jpeg?region=0%2C0%2C1200%2C600 Good. Gooooood. At last the coward is no more.

You know you got a good intelligence agency when all your agents can vanish.

This is one of those:

"What shall be, will be, and must be" isn't it?
Damn those strange dimensional/time paradoxes.

Comment posted by Mobile SAM deleted May 9th, 2017

Dimensional time paradoxical antidisestablishmentarianism.

One side seeks to overthrow and stabilize, the other seeks to reinforce and control.
These two cancel each other through time and across dimensional boundaries.

What has been, will be again.
What should be, should not be.

Can you feel it?
That low and deep pulsing beat that permeates the very soil and air of entire countries?

It reverberates through the feet all the way to the brain.
Where every heartbeat adds to the drummer's speed and force until even the young, those too young to read or understand the hushed tones and whispered plans begin to see.

It reaches a crescendo and falls to the deep resounding beats of a million marching boots, no missteps, all acting as a single instrument.

War.

All to the beat of a marching drum.

So it begins...again.

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This kinda sums up my feelings, at least when it comes to writing.

Doctor Merkwürdigliebe? Stallion in a wheelchair, with Alien Hoof Syndrome? That sounds familiar... ah, of course. I wonder if he's ever seen that old Earth film.

His name was Doctor Merkwürdigliebe, a unicorn raised by Thestrals. He specialized in ‘Dark Arcane Science’, especially portals.

how much smoother can you get

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The fact tha your profile pic is stalin makes this so much better

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Dont forget he is a thestrale or in this stories case a German.

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No, my profile pic is an OC.

Besides, Stalin was long dead by the time Dr. Strangelove was produced.

bipedal anthropomorphics cousins of their Equestrian cousins

Hans get ze flammenwerfer!

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