• Member Since 21st Mar, 2012
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FoxMcCloud7921


Not much to say except that I love video games, my favorite series being Star Fox and Mass Effect; reading, sports, etc. I have a separate FanFiction account where more of my stories can be found.

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Well congrats being the first to post this pick up idea. You sure give a promising start.

I read the blog. I will follow. Mothy has some great ideas.

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I appreciate it. :twilightsmile: I hope others aren't discouraged from doing their own versions. I just picked up the gauntlet.

Obligatory musical reference GO!

Is being telepathic turns into more perverted?

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We ALL have dirty thoughts from time to time. :trollestia:

The fourth wall crumbles down.
I got the Sunset Vs. Pokemon Go you did.

Well that went to awkward territories fast.

And Spike the dog is as snarky as ever. :rainbowlaugh:

That's why I avoid drugs of any kind.

Also I kinda feel that the Heavy Metal soudtrack Takin' a Ride would have been more appropriate for the hallucination scene, though that might be because I was thinking about that cat piss South Park episode.

Kids, don't do drugs, or you'll be a part of a shitty spinoff of TTG.

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I actually did think of that but the other seemed... I dunno more appropriate? You can play that tune too!



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Shitty you say? :twilightangry2:

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I understand why it's an insult, since TTG is already a shitty spinoff. My bad.

Still, don't do drugs, kids, or you'll be written into a fanfic about the fourth wall.

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GODDAMMIT!!!!!

So, Sunsets inner self is a Kamen Rider? Guess being a Magical Girl just wasn't cool enough for her.

Also Treehugger. Gives her the wrong stuff and then charges her for it. Dick move and bad service. I wouldn't buy at that shop again.

Okay was that first part Sunset's hallucination going on or Starlight drunk dream or some kinda joined dream thingy.

Anyway Sunset wanting to murder Starlight kinda make sense in some ways.
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And oh my- that song. :rainbowlaugh: That must have been one hell of a show Sunset perform.

Find a couple mistake.

and te only thing

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to be in the drive-thru.

drive-through

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It's...I have no idea what the hell that was. I just can't believe I made spelling errors.:facehoof:

But yes, I think we know who would win in a popularity contest.

You robbed me of the chance to say "BLAZE IT!!" Damn you McCloud, you'll need more than barrel rolls to avoid my wrath.

...was that first part a reference to the music video for Stylo? :rainbowhuh: ...I like it. :rainbowkiss:

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Part of me wonders if Soarin' should've been the cop. :derpytongue2:

You know shit is about to get real when the psychic of the group begins having blood related visions.

Wonder in what kind of bloody universe her vision as brought her now.

Oh ho, Sunset Satan is coming back.

she decided to switch to coke and whisky

Heresy! You don't mix Whisky and soda together.

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Bah :pinkiesick: I taste this cocktail, it's absolutely disgusting. Though each his own taste.

I mean seriously, who gives a shit about Starlight?

The producers and writers apparently since most of the episodes this season thus far has been focused on her. I think that they're trying to gradually shift the series and focus on her development like they did with her teacher.

Always amusing with what kind of crazy stuff and reference you can see when the 4th wall breaker queen is involved.

she was certainly glad that her parents were home because they’d only shoot her glares since the only car they had was an old minivan

I think you intended to have in negative.

Give Starlight a break and put yourself in her shoes with everything she's been through.

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Oh I like Starlight, don't get me wrong. I just find it amusing that so many don't like her. She's going to be in at least half the episodes this season. :rainbowlaugh:

I'm glad the author arcknowledges how the first time is always messy and usually short, and the guy shouldn't feel bad for not being a natural born semental, same way a newbie football player is not expected to mark 4-0 the first match.

Wow, this story is not only very good but has an effective and story based sex scene that feels right for the characters. I'm enjoying this story. I wouldn't call this full on clop as the action for the most part is off-screen so to speak. I look forward to seeing where this goes.

...Sigh.

If you're going to use aura viewing and chakra theory, could you at least do your research...?

Argh those pesky smartphones. No way to have anymore privacy. Well I'm sure Sci-Twi can easily hack the internet and have the video and copies erased.

Also could you avoid spoiling the episode aired on the Canadian network? Some people here are sticking to the US airing time.

My brain is exploding with laughter!

But there was…one other issue. Not only was Sunset hearing people’s thoughts, she was…feeling a lot more anxious than usual. Paranoid was probably the better term for it. She just couldn’t shake this feeling that someone was watching her almost nonstop, even when she was in the shower. Of course, maybe it was just the stress of the past couple of months getting to her but she never completely felt as ease.

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