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Dusk Melody


I wish I was enough. But I'm not and never will be.

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I think we're finally going to understand what darkstar when though/is going though. This has the making of some excellent character building.

You're welcome. I'm glad you liked the description ideas I gave.

Huh. I did not realize this was going to be a multi-chapter story. It worked well as a one-shot, so I'm curious to see where you'll take it from here.

8111064 All credit where it's due my friend!

Well this starting to explain just why it's been so hard for Darkstar to heal, I'm so glad we know whats happen after this with the return of her horn and removing her from this nurse.

8126340 I hope Tempest and Airmail hear about this nurse....

Woa very interesting story so far about Duskstar. Very uptight with the beginning of the story for just two chapters. I should read more chapters for the future of this fiction I shall track it now.

I love this story. It really shows the struggle between ones own mind and their darker side. I honestly like it. the only problem I have with it; and this is just me; is that in the first chapter I tend to lose trace of who's talking and such. Your spelling is also a little off. But nothing too big. And again this is just me.

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