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Dusk Melody


I wish I was enough. But I'm not and never will be.

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Dude please, why did you have to release it now? I'm at school.

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Because it's 15 minutes past midnight and it's my birthday :twilightsmile:

Can't help but notice that the "Tragedy" tag is still there. Does that mean you're getting ready to kick our hearts in again like you did with the first story?

Happy birthday to you. I'm excited to read this... once I finish up the last one... the last few chapters still need to be edited. 'm excited.

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It's posted! On the 28th as promised!

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Thank you for the birthday wishes! You make it easier to be 38.

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The tragedy tag will come apparent with time. I don't want to spoil anything, but Wily and the herd are and will be fine.

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Thank you both for the birthday wishes!

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I cant wati to see more of the chapters.

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Chapter 2 will be up on the 11th August

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Happy birthday.

May the body grow old but the mind stay young and act like like a foal.

Happy Birthday, DM!!
(38? Hey, nice to know that another author besides me is in the >30 contingent)

I'm a bit busy right this minute, but I'll get to reading this as soon as I can (I may not be able to use most of the sites's features 99% of the time, but I can and do still read stories).

I know I'd like a pegasus but I wouldn't care what Fireflight was as long as she’s healthy

Yeaaah... healthy...

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Thank you! My mind's so young it needs diapers, like Cyclone :rainbowlaugh: I know what I mean... :pinkiegasp: :pinkiehappy:

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(I may not be able to use most of the sites's features 99% of the time, but I can and do still read stories)

Thank you! And I feel you on that comment, I'm the same.

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Wily meant it too, 100%. Do you doubt her?

And so the final chapter in the saga begins... Let's see what happens in this story...

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Who says it's the final chapter? :raritywink: There will be a 5th book. :raritystarry:

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I'll be sure to send some brain sized nappies and formula.:twilightsheepish:

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Thank you, I need them. So, do you like the 1st chapter?

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Yup and Wildfire's five point plan I assume is your five book plan?

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Yay me!!:pinkiegasp: Have to head to work have a nice day.

I'm going to run with a rather blasé assumption here, that if you're reading this comment, you're a fan of this series. Unfortunately, much of this series is unedited. So, if you're a fan of the series who is willing to edit it, please contact Dusk via PM and let him know that you're interested. I am leaving my position as Dusk's editor this week, at the same time that I am leaving the fandom. I ask that anyone who is interested in editing Dusk's works, please do not hesitate to contact him, it would be greatly appreciated by myself, and I'm sure Dusk would be more than happy to have more sets of eyes looking over his horsewords.

Thanks.

I'm glad Emerald and her lackeys got what they deserved....

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emrald is willys step mum did u mean amythest and lackies

I love meeting new characters I'll forget.

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You're assuming i'll let you forget them. They'll show up again.

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Thank you!

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Don't worry abut it my friend, I get confused all the time, and i'm the one writing it.

i cant for the next chapter its great to see willy is getting more and more excited in the upcoming events

After basically being trampled by a qurtar ton horse this was a VERY nice chapter to relax with.

Keep up the good work.

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Wow...I can imagine being trampled wasn't much fun my friend. Still, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!

i though this was going to be on the 25 its the 24

doesn't matter what date it's posted to be as long as I read it and love it. So far it's awesome there are some things that I like and there is stuff that is a little bit but, I ain't saying anything till it fully done though. I like that it's more what I can chew for... 13k words per chapters is very high chapter which this person is doing something right. I love the details so far in this, I like the structure on where it's going, and I like the third chapter.

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the writer is in different time zone

willy just keeps getting better and better cant wait for next chapter

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It was the 25th in the UK when I published it, my friend

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Thank you my friend. This chapter was a whole lot of fun to write, particularly the pegasus tag scene.

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Thank you! Anything in particular stand out for you?


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Quite right my friends. Thank you for reading! I appreciate it such a lot.

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willy is no longer in the little cage that she had when she was afraid or unsure of what to do. she has almost taken down that wall completely the game of tag had a small spot of panic but she pulled through willy has come a very long way from where she was i cant wait for the next chapter to come its defiantly going to get really interesting at caffy's place and if i can remember correctly luna was gonna try to get twilight and rainbow to join and the rest of airmail and tempest's familiy on game night will be there

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She does do that, you are quite right. However, the gaming night party at Caffy's place takes place in a side story that my co-author Zervon Tora is writing as we speak, called "To Be Herd".

This details Air Raid and Darkstar arriving in Manehatten, settling in, and ends with the big gaming night. Staaaaaaaay tuned!

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We decided to separate the events into it's own story because Air Raid and Darkstar appearing in Manehatten, as well as the huge multi-pony gaming night isn't focussed on Wildfire and the mini mares herd.

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