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wonderful side story seams like darkie will do alot better here with extra help
Yes, she will. Everypony - Air Raid and Darkstar - move on from here.
Love this chapter nice to see Air Mail having more to do than worry about Darkstar after all those years, yet I still feel Air Mail will always be there to catch Dark Star should see ever fall.
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I'm sure you meant Air Raid instead of Airmail. To many names that are close to the same. I do agree that it is nice to have Air Raid move forward with her own life out of the shadow of guilt and responsibility.
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And this is why dyslexia sucks :( I can't even re-read a sentence to spot errors. Yes Zervon Tora I did mean Air Raid.
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Don't sell yourself short! We're just happy you remember the names at all. That you commented at all is very nice.
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I agree with Dusk. Thank you for the comment!
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i feel you there on that i have dyslexia as well but i try to deal with it and move forward and by the way great chapter dusk and zervon
Yay more Darkstar I love seeing them go to the park and start to help her :D can't wait for more.
40 bits for a dog. 50 bits for fries. Damn inflation much. Good thing she didn't ask for nothing to drink.
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Aaah, that's just our conversion rate. I think - not entirely sure, mind you - that when Zervon Tora and I planned the Wilyverse we said the money was 15 £ / $ = 1 Bit. So 45 Bits is like £ / $ 3.50, ish. So, yes it sounds a lot, but it's really not, if that makes sense?
This chapter was amazing. Well worth the wait!
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Thank you for saying so. I can only apologise it took so long.
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Don't apologize. Quality can't be rushed. ;)
I loved the scene in the museum. The character interactions are my favourite thing in all your stories.
A few errors though:
Also you spelt Wily as Wile and Wiley
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Thank you so much for catching those little errors. I've been the chapter and corrected them.
The scene in the museum was a joy, actually, as was anything involving Darkstar. I'm glad you liked the chapter, and thank you for sticking with the story for so long. I'll try and get the next instalment up quicker than this one.
Yay wilyverse stuff!
Yay new chapter :)