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Dusk Melody
I wish I was enough. But I'm not and never will be.
Dusk Melody
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And that's another story for my favorites :).
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I sincerely hope you like it.
Why thank you very much indeed!
When can we expect Part 2?
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Next Friday, the 15th, my friend
Ok random question time (Yes I was trying to sleep and these came to mind), will Cyclone ever tell Bluefeather what happen in Canterlot. Have we ever seen Cyclone cutey mark? (I don't remember if in "Wildfire: Lighting the Flame" it was described and in the name of every holy and unholy Alicorn could we please get this mare/foal a house in Manehatten and move her out of Cloudhatten ground side. 'Starts and fund to get Cyclone and Bluefeather house in Manehatten.' :P (Sorry when I can't sleep my mind to tends to think about thinks I read recently.
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1 - Yes she does, next chapter.
2 - Cyclone's cutie mark is a grey tornado weather symbol, like you'd see on a weather map.
3 - No. They will live in Cloudhatten. Cyclone will work in Manehatten though.
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Hurray :P at lest she get to spend more time ground side. :)
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chapter updates will be every Friday
You'll just have to keep reading
Sweet can't wait for the next chapter and to see how Cy and Blue bond.
Stay tuned! Next instalment will be up next Friday. Expect more sweetness and bonding
So just out of curiosity, will we be seeing any diaper sex at all in this?
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What do you mean by diaper sex?
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Oh well, I mean having sex while diapered haha. Rubbing a hoof into her diaper until she cums etc. Stuff like that.
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There was a brief mention of it in Chapter 3, and I believe there will be something like that in a future chapter. However, as a rule, Bluefeather tends to keep the nappy and sex separate.
Nice, wished there was more stallion ABDL
I'm not sure "pedophile" would be the right word to use for the stallion ABDL who tried to molest Cyclone given that all of them are adults.
That said, the idea of an ABDL club is a cliche but it's done well here.
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From an ABDL standpoint, pedophile is the right word. Foals are foals, but if one becomes an adult to sexually assault a 'foal' thrn that is what it is.
And, as my good friend says, all stories have cliches, but it is the telling that separates them. Plus, Trixie's Place isnt just a ABDL club, it caters to most fetishes and kinks.
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Stay tuned, there may be side stories coming up that feature more stallion ABDL.
You've captured Age Play really well in this story. It's really well written, it's not over the top or weird. It's perfect
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Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. You should go and give my co-writer Zervon Tora some love. He's partially responsible for the Wilyverse being as good as it is.
This chapter was really heavy. Really emotional, it added a lot more depth to Cyclone. I'm honestly impressed with you and your co-writer. This has become one of my favorite AB/DL Pony stories.
I detected two minor typos at the end:
- "dam"
- "seeing"
I like the reveal of Cyclone's past and the heavy emotional chat with her father.
But there is one thing that's does bother me: the references to the real world like Thomas the Tank Engine and this particular passage from the previous chapter: " Dodge Vipers line up alongside Aston Martins and BMW". It honestly makes me wonder if this Equestria is linked to Earth if those items are present in Equestria.
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Thanks for picking up the typo's my friend, I appreciate it. Now, why we included the Thomas the Tank Engine, as well as references to vipers, Astons and BMW's. in the case of Thomas, it's a cute thing for foal Cyclone to like. In the case of the cars, we chose the makes we did because we thought they were incongruous and not 'earth' specific. Plus, they're kinda familiar, so we don't have to waste words explaining to the reader what they are.
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Thank you, mate! I'm sure your sweet comment will make Zervon Tora happy. In terms of adding the depth, we really wanted Cy to be a fully fleshed out character. There is a companion story to this one, called "No Place Like Home", that details Monsoon's last moments.
So cute.
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Thank you! What did you like about it, please?
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I thought it was just cute in general. I think we all sometimes want to reverse back to our younger self and be an infant again. This story fits into that.
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Aww well thank you for your kind comment. If you chose to read the rest of my stuff, i'd be happy to hear what you think of it
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Sure thing