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CaioCoia


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Heart`s and Warming Eve, a day to be with the families and the friends, and it wasn`t a very special for Spike, he still has Twilight to support him after he becomes rejected by Rarity, but his feelings of being rejected comes to annoy him, he decided two only things, to cook the meal for the party with his sister, and to watch the snow falling the sky, staying near from the fireplace.

But everything changes when one friend comes to visit them, for not spend the Heart's Warming Eve alone.

Winner of SpikeDash competition in 2016.

Edited by Sky Charmer.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 24 )

Hmm, not bad, but to be honest, I think you'll have some tough competition for the SpikeDash competition and the award money.

The story is solid, but ur grammar just throws me way off. In an otherwise perfect story, the grammar just kind of detracts from it.

Comment posted by CaioCoia deleted Dec 27th, 2016

7822295 Don't worry about that my friend, I will going edit next week, because I will go have a trip and I will not stay in FIMFICTION for some days. Sorry about that, but I'm glad you all enjoyed the fiction about that part anyway.

7821733 Sorry about that Brick, but I don't have much time, I will go to have a trip soon, have a good week and wish me luck.

Awesome story!!! I love it please make more spikedash fanfics. It's my favourite ship. :rainbowwild::heart::moustache:

Short but very in character and funny, I liked it, you done great, I await more.

Considering this story has a romance tag, shouldn't have some, you know, romance?

8053949 Hehehehe, it has romance but I need to edit all the othet chapters. There is 4 chapters being edit.

8054054 I only see one chapter though

Can't wait for next chapter.

Hello what happened to strongest swordman

Love the story so far man

Love it, very in character and a really heart warming and inspiring chapter, great job.

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Thanks dude, Sky helped me to edit, this winner of SpikeDash contest of 2016

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He's a great editor and writer. I'm eager to see more, surprised none of Spike's or Twi's family visited them for Hearth's Warming though.

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you know now Shining Armor and Candance had Flurry Heart, it would be more obvious for the grandparents to visit them, Twilight didn't went there because Spike needed her.

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Makes sense, and it's only the day before Hearth's Warming, not Hearth's Warming itself. Wonder if Celestia or Luna will show up.

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Actually not, they had to deal with you know who... the nobles. Sigh, I think that would be awful for the princess to deal with nobles in that day.

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I agree. Can't even spend time with their own son and nephew. Damn.

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Eeyup, anyway, I'm planning to do a sequell in the end of this year. XD

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