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Applejack awakens on a strange island full of strange creatures. With the help from her new friends her journey home will be long and dangerous.

Will Applejack make it home or will she end up like the rest of the people trapped on the island?

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 76 )

Ok. as an Ark Player you have captured my attention.

I look forward to more, thanks for doing ARK, I recently discovered the game as well :) stay frosty!

7770815 I'm gonna be very new to the game but I will be playing it on the PS4 and I'm using the Wiki to make sure I stay true to the game as best as I can.


7770824 Thanks, I can't wait to play Ark on the 6th!

I have it on PC and its awesome, being able to play on max settings thanks to having a good gpu, dude PC is the best xD but ps4 is good too, I don't have one because I used all my money on PC parts hehe.
I'm excited to see where this story goes :3

7770849 I play it on the comp, but yeah its gonna be an experiance, expect to die alot.

7770906 I don't have enough cash for a computer like that lol I've got plans ahead for Appejack *Evil grin*


7770922 I'm already expecting to die a lot in the game lol

Santa Deinonychus! (Deinonychus translates to Terrible Claw)

:ajsleepy: I make really bad puns don't I.
On the topic of the story, I've been looking for an Ark Survival story for a while, was even tempted to write one myself. Glad someone finally decided to write a fic about this game. I'll be looking forward to future chapters.

7771008 I got the pun lol Thanks, I'm looking forwards to seeing how many people like the story :pinkiehappy:

A young apple farmer stood in her apple orchard looking at the leaves changing colors. She was sipping on her warm cider.

A young apple farmer stood in her apple orchard looking at the leaves changing colors WHILE sipping on her warm cider.

The cool crisp air blew through her long blond hair as her emerald eyes watching the trees.

The cool crisp air blew through her long blond hair as her emerald eyes WATCHED the trees.

The wind picked up causing her hat to fly causing her to chase after her hat.

The wind picked up, causing her hat to fly, prompting her to chase to chase after her hat.

There was a flash of light blinding her, she felt her body become numb and her mind become blank as the darkness took over.

There was a flash of light THAT blinded her, AND she felt her body become numb and her mind become blank as the darkness took over.
Note: these are not all of the mistakes

7771025 Thanks for pointing these out. I'll make the changes tomorrow. Thanks again :pinkiehappy:

You hooked me with Applejack.

You intrigue me with this world.

So is it an MMO? Cause I swore off those.

7771116 No she's alive.


7771124 Well depends, you can play solo on your own or join servers with other players or host your own server for people.

7771143 No, you'll find out what happened in the next chapter :yay:

7771154 Tease.

Oh well, I'll be patient.

7771163 Good things come to those who wait :trollestia:

7771177 But all is lost if you hesitate.

7771183 He who hesitate gets eaten by a T-Rex in Ark. :trollestia:

Cool. I never played ARK before, only saw let's plays on Youtube, but I like the premise of this. I'll give it a read.

After reading-Keep it up. I really like this story now.

Well, this looks interesting...

Also:

The wind picked up, causing her hat to fly, prompting her to chase to chase after her hat.

Remove the second "to chase"

Lighting light up the sky as the wind pushed the trees.

Lighting lit up the sky causing the young man to look up

Its lightning

Quick question, what map is this on?

-Ahem- (shakes an empty bowl) more please.

7838831 I'm working on the next chapter as we speak. Trying to study the map layout the best I can to make sure I'm 100% with the pathway and layout.

Awesome! I'm so glad you continued this story. I wish the chapters were longer or more often because it's very good!

7970153 The next chapter is gonna be longer. Reason why this one was short was because I had this already done and chapter 3 already started. So no I'm working on chapter 3 and it will be longer :pinkiehappy:

This is cool and all but I am pulled out of the immersion when you name drop a dinosaur.

In a world where they are common place people would come up with obvious and common nicknames like they do for Cars or motorcycles. The Harley, Honda.

In this case

Pteranodon - PT's? (Pronounced Petey)

Triceratops - Trice

So on

7989483 Well I miss spelled Trice, the Triceratops names is Trace lol More of a reference Overwatch. As for Pete I couldn't really come up with a name for the it at the time soooo yeah lol

7990372 The name of the story is the crossover it is lol It's a crossover with a video game

So Applejack cuts a Compy in half and the first thing she does is, check the pokedex to find out what it was? You'd think she'd be a little more shaken up that she just killed something, and in such a gruesome manner to.

“Alright, if you want you can feed them to Trace and Sarah, Trace loves the purple berries and Trace also likes the purple berries.”

Wait, what? :rainbowhuh:

An Ark crossover!?! Holy crap I didn't think anyone made these! Definitely going to check this out.

7995362 She might have been forced to kill wild animals to protect her family and/or farm animals back in Equestria.

This pistol helped us in battle that day, this gun safed those who needed it most.

saved

“Grants past isn’t clean

Grant's

It might have came from the center but he ain’t there.”

come

Matthew saw a three mini gun turrets raining fire from the sky along with rockets flying towards the giga.

no need for the a

Ah think I might.

inconsistency, but that one's a quibble, considering that i don't know everything about Applejack's speech pattern.

The creature’s fur was black while it’s stripes were orange “What is that?” Applejack asked.

“Oh, this is Firebrand, she’s my sisters Equus.

its
sister's

Applejack knew her journey home would be long and dangerous, she would find away back home and to her family.

missing but

The man chuckled walking back into the building while Tapejara’s and Pteranodons flew around

tapejaras

Also the name for Friebrand was given by RainCrasher. Thanks for the name!

Glad to see the name i gave was chosen, and sorry for being so late for reading!

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It's fine, people are busy. Like I am with Ark's newest DLC lol Ark and Friday the 13th the game have taken of my life

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Omg ragnarok is awesome! what server you on? im on NA Ragnarok 14.

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