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Tethered-Angel
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Much better cleaned up. Not that I didn't enjoy it before, but the typos were distracting.
7781584 Haha, I don't blame you, I was cringing when I reread it myself! Needless to say I am FAR happier with this version
Thanks!
I look forward to more.
7787565 Thanks! Hope it will live up!
That's why you ALWAYS have a pair of medical grade shears close to hand when indulging in BDSM.
7790125 Yup, I think these two need to do a bit more research in the future
7790300 Although, and to your credit, you showed an example of first-timers getting it slightly wrong and consequences for which I applaud you.
Too many times on here I read BDSM fics where the characters 'try it out' and are instantly experts.
7790925 Thanks! That's what I was going for! I wanted to show how they learn and grow in the future, but I don't wanna risk spoilers by saying more
7791476 Well you have a definite follow here! Would it be cool if I pm'd you if I have any questions about your story?
7791481 Sure, go ahead
I loved Adagio's inclusion in this.
To be fair, if Fluttershy looked up the shop online, she should know who runs it, but that's a very small niggle.
Plus side, Adagio's dialogue seemed spot on. I loved the little things, like how pragmatic she was with Rarity and Fluttershy and how she offered better positions to tie the ropes. It shows you know what you're talking about.
One of my pet hates on this site is people writing BDSM who've never ever tied or been tied up.
7804986 Thanks! Adagio was a lot of fun to write actually, even in exposition mode haha. I guess I just like writing characters with dominating personalities.
Adagio is in a bit of a unique situation, and she works in a kind of business that using an alias wouldn't be too strange. Still though, the name Siren's Song probably should have tipped Fluttershy off
7805754 I just love Adagio full stop
Will the other two sirens be appearing?
7841218 As much as I like them, I don't expect them to show up much, if at all. Odds are better for Aria than Sonata though. But Adagio will be showing up again after the next chapter.
Very good chapter!
I loved the natural feel of this, in particular the communication between Sub and Dom. This fic is an excellent example of safe, sane consensual BDSM.
Congratulations!
7842140 Thanks Im glad you enjoyed it.
7842352 I did, so very much! I can't wait for the next instalment
That was pretty hot. Fluttershy being the sub was a bit too predictable though.
8176230 Yeah, I admit I wasn't really trying for anything groundbreaking here, I just really like subshy. Glad you enjoyed anyway!
7804986 It's a little unsubtle when the shop is called the siren song. In hindsight FS should have seen that coming.
8176274 It works it's just that I'm usually under the impression that normally timid people like to be the dominant and vice versa you know.
8204008 Everyone's different, I think. There's no real set formula for it. I've toyed with the idea of them switching for a while later on, but it depends how it goes. This story is sort of on the back burner for now.
8204105 I guess one of the most appealing aspects about FLuttershy is how helpless she is. Regardless I look forward to the next chapter.
This is a really good story. Not only was it written extremely well, it also showed a good example of how bondage can go wrong if you go to fast without knowing what you're doing. Well done.
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Thank you very much
Very nicely done ✅I would love to see you add some new chapters to this.