A seemingly simple question from her lover catches Rarity by surprise: Will you tie me up? She had never expected to hear something like that from the normally reserved Fluttershy, though perhaps she should have seen it coming.
To be fair, if Fluttershy looked up the shop online, she should know who runs it, but that's a very small niggle.
Plus side, Adagio's dialogue seemed spot on. I loved the little things, like how pragmatic she was with Rarity and Fluttershy and how she offered better positions to tie the ropes. It shows you know what you're talking about.
One of my pet hates on this site is people writing BDSM who've never ever tied or been tied up.
7804986 Thanks! Adagio was a lot of fun to write actually, even in exposition mode haha. I guess I just like writing characters with dominating personalities.
Adagio is in a bit of a unique situation, and she works in a kind of business that using an alias wouldn't be too strange. Still though, the name Siren's Song probably should have tipped Fluttershy off
I loved Adagio's inclusion in this.
To be fair, if Fluttershy looked up the shop online, she should know who runs it, but that's a very small niggle.
Plus side, Adagio's dialogue seemed spot on. I loved the little things, like how pragmatic she was with Rarity and Fluttershy and how she offered better positions to tie the ropes. It shows you know what you're talking about.
One of my pet hates on this site is people writing BDSM who've never ever tied or been tied up.
7804986 Thanks! Adagio was a lot of fun to write actually, even in exposition mode haha. I guess I just like writing characters with dominating personalities.
Adagio is in a bit of a unique situation, and she works in a kind of business that using an alias wouldn't be too strange. Still though, the name Siren's Song probably should have tipped Fluttershy off
7805754 I just love Adagio full stop
7804986 It's a little unsubtle when the shop is called the siren song. In hindsight FS should have seen that coming.