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Her light purple skin was illuminated by the moon and candle light in her room.

Skin, not fur? I think you made a mistake there.
Besides that, I look forward to seeing how this story goes.


The story does have the Anthro tag...

Yeah, so that should have said fur.


No, I'm saying that since this is anthro, some of the rules about being pony are already out the window. I'd find it a bit weird, but bare-skinned anthro "ponies" aren't off the list if the author really wants things that way.

Well, it would be very odd if the character have all of the characteristics of anthropromorphic animals, but no fur when said animal does have. That seems to be the case here. Until the author says that is what he meant then it most likely was just a simple slip up.
That, or he is going for some mutant umamimis, like the Equestrian Girls abominations.


I messed up this isn't a FIM fiction. They're actually brain slugs from Zambambo Island.

But honestly I did kinda mess up. Thank you for your support though Shachza. I'll fix it presently. Right now I'm chuggin' away at the next chapter and wondering if I should drink this next monster. I'm always open for criticism and improvement to the story so don't worry about my feelings, they're not real =P

Also thanks for the fav's and upvotes everyone, hopefully I won't ruin this story with terribleness.

I just found this and I gotta say I love these types of stories hope you continue writing this for a while and I enjoyed reading it

Comment posted by Ajemuha deleted Sep 27th, 2016

Why do I feel that Twilight is absolutely destroy the Prime Directive with her inquisitive nature? Hopefully Jack can think with a clear head on his shoulders.

just read the discription...
A world of ponies... Oh and then he discovered intelligent life, okay seems legit. You think he would find intelligent life then declare the world a world of ponies, but I mean what do I know?

To be fair, just saying "a world of ponies" doesn't automatically mean intelligent ponies, even though we all know they are. I'm just looking at the wording of the sentence.

I feel like an idiot. Read first chapter and saw her friends passed away and was wondering when it happened. Then got to tile to see Set 200 years after the events of "Friendship is Magic".

Great chapter and the feelings were felt at the end all in all can't wait for the next one


Such sweet sorrow. I just cant help but love it.:heart:

I actually was crying and I'm choked up over this. That's a good story. so good. I'm still crying.

I don't think anyone I've ever known has rolled as many natural 1's on diplomacy checks as Jack has. :rainbowlaugh:

Wait, he made up the prime directive? Understandible, knowledge should be earned not given freely.

You're doing a great job, honestly :D

sounds similar to the advice i follow "although those we care are no longer with us they forever live on in our hearts"

That's unusual but I got a notification that this chapter was up but not the previous one. I get the feeling that Jack has not only had bad luck when it comes to women but several have taken advantage of him. We need Cadance stat to fix his broken heart.


Cadence will show up don't worry. And in usual fashion shit will hit the fan. it might be a bit though, got some more feels to get through so go get yourself some tissues.

7609009 Well that was a total bust:pinkiegasp::fluttershbad::pinkiesad2:

Kidding it was GREAT!!!:rainbowhuh::twilightangry2::duck:

Oh god no NOOO!!!!!:rainbowkiss::rainbowlaugh::rainbowwild:

7609009 Well that was a total bust:fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttershysad::fluttershbad::fluttershyouch:

I was kidding!!!:pinkiegasp::pinkiesad2::rainbowhuh::flutterrage:

Oh god plz no

No no no!!!!!!:yay::trollestia::rainbowlaugh::rainbowwild::rainbowkiss::pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy::ajsmug::coolphoto::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::raritystarry::raritywink::trixieshiftright::trixieshiftleft::twilightoops::twilightblush::twilightsheepish::trollestia:

7619872 Make him taste the rainbow!!:rainbowhuh::rainbowlaugh:

He is frustrating:twilightoops::twilightsmile:


Oooh hehe:raritystarry:

Help me!!!!


I actually had this idea back when Elite: Dangerous first came out. The ship I'm trying to use for inspiration is the Imperial Cutter

http://elite-dangerous.wikia.com/wiki/Imperial_Cutter (for your viewing pleasure =P)

I actually didn't like NMS that much. Was very disappointing after the first few hours.

This is absolutely amazing. I REALLY am looking forward to future chapters.

Seriously looking forward to more!!

In a world of magic his 'problem' can solved and he is in a future spaceship colonies/countries Ara which means they have at least a better medical Field then us right now, they probably have easements/prosthetics.
"Wow... now that I think about it, I feel bad for women in the future".:rainbowderp::twilightoops::fluttershyouch:
Even if it is just temporarily

Vicky: "Yes, yes she did."

Ohhh. This is good. I expect more, keep up if you can!

*sigh* Kids today. Gene Roddenberry came up with the Prime Directive. It's a Star Trek thing.

Hey, Ajemuha, you gonna update the story?


Bro. Broseph. Bromandude. (or substitute sis). I'm back. I'm alive, and i'm workin on chapter 5. Also sorry for being a dead guy.

7940026 I'm a Bro, a Broseph, and a Bromandude. And welcome back to the land of the living! i was afraid someone was gonna write on the tombstone 'Here lies Ajemuha, the douche bag who made everyone believe he is dead'. :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh:

I have a knack for reading unupdated stories, it seems.

And they're always really good!


It's not a dead story i'm just an asshole. I got like 90% of this chapter done it's just i get distracted by stupid stuff. It's 130 so i'm gonna release the next chapter Friday at the latest

ah back from the dead I was wonder if I was going to have to add this story to the dead good stories

Glad to see you're still alive
great as always and can't wait to read more and until that day thank you for what you have written

It's hard for us to hate you when you give us great chapters.

Still loving this story, so glad I put it in tracking

I'm confused, are they ponies or are the Human/Pony Hybrid

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