Her light purple skin was illuminated by the moon and candle light in her room.

Skin, not fur? I think you made a mistake there.
Besides that, I look forward to seeing how this story goes.

More please

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The story does have the Anthro tag...

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Yeah, so that should have said fur.

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No, I'm saying that since this is anthro, some of the rules about being pony are already out the window. I'd find it a bit weird, but bare-skinned anthro "ponies" aren't off the list if the author really wants things that way.

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Well, it would be very odd if the character have all of the characteristics of anthropromorphic animals, but no fur when said animal does have. That seems to be the case here. Until the author says that is what he meant then it most likely was just a simple slip up.
That, or he is going for some mutant umamimis, like the Equestrian Girls abominations.

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I messed up this isn't a FIM fiction. They're actually brain slugs from Zambambo Island.

But honestly I did kinda mess up. Thank you for your support though Shachza. I'll fix it presently. Right now I'm chuggin' away at the next chapter and wondering if I should drink this next monster. I'm always open for criticism and improvement to the story so don't worry about my feelings, they're not real =P

Also thanks for the fav's and upvotes everyone, hopefully I won't ruin this story with terribleness.

I just found this and I gotta say I love these types of stories hope you continue writing this for a while and I enjoyed reading it

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What type of story is that?