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I'll follow this story, for now... *Looks ominously at the cover*
why does the EMP not take out their cloaks?
Noooo stupid cliffhanger why must you torment me so
( bad cliffhanger you made fluttershy cry you must die now 
)
Oh god please moar!
This is bullshit it says the max words were 2,010 but the chapter says 2,011!
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.......Magic?
I don't know man, that's just weird.
5803862 There be strange sorcery at work here!
This is a great story. Please continue.
I like the idea. Good set up. Well done cliff hanger. F**K YOU!
Haven't read, but saw the description and this came to mind:
Enjoy your random Metal. \m/
Read it now, not bad. But you did leave an open tang somewhere because the last part is entirely in italics and it's annoying as heck.
5804615 Heh... Whoops.
I guess that one slipped by. Fixed.
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Looks like I did the same thing at the end too. After 7 years of taking various programming classes, you'd think I'd be able to end my tags correctly.
The short description was enough to build the hype, but that cliffhanger. Hype = >9000
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Hype. Second chapter soonish, please.
20'th of august? That's.. some release schedule.
5806398 Heh, yeah. Idea's been bouncing around in my head for awhile now. I've been playing around with the idea of typing up stuff on here instead of in Word, so that's why the date's like that.
As for updates, I've explained some stuff Here. I might find time to work on it in the interim though, so expect an update sometime around then.
YES! A story that takes into account how stupid it is to use a form of energy a being feeds off of to try and expel them from a city and, unlike the show, has a believable effect!
This is a terrific perspective on how things could happen
more please...
I love how the phrase "Citadel has fallen" was used before. Such a nice little world building.
This shall be observed.
Continue.
Interesting
I like this but if they don't go back to being unseen and heard I will quit reading this no pony questions no pony interaction besides what is necessary as they will have to learn the magic of friendship which happens in almost every good story I read and ruins it
It's excellent already, and the next chapter will decide whether this gets a fave or a simpler track.
Make us proud!
5830369 No pressure then!
5831400 Absolutely none at all.
5807370 Just because you eat meat doesn't mean that getting smacked in the mouth by a porkchop at high speed won't break your teeth off and fracture your jaw.
5831969 A pork-chop is a solid thing that can be used to smack anything that contains mass in the known universe, an intangible wave of energy held together only through the concept of an emotion that has no hold on the physical universe however, is not.
I like it. I hope to read more as it comes out.
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YES! I love that someone finally explained it simply!
Now people can stop mixing this up! You have made my day good sir
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If you think about it, Chrysalis was actively feeding off Shining Armor at the time, so, to put things in "porkchop" perspective, it would be like you're sitting at the table eating a porkchop, and someone places another porkchop on top of the one you're already eating. Now, instead of eating 1 porkchop, you're eating 2 (and might be slowly choking to death). Adding in the whole "I'ma absorb your love into my lifeforce" thing, it would make sense for Chrysalis to become stronger from getting slapped in the face by a "love-chop" (or simply explode from severe overeating).
5862071 So it's more akin to an electric charging process. The detonation just wasn't enough to go over her thresholds and overload her.
Noted.
5868499 Precisely.
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Hmmm.... Might have to see if I can implement that somehow. Something like a "Too much of a good thing" scenario...
We shall see...
Need more.....
Looking forward to more
I like your story, but the cliffhanger is too good.
I've been keeping an eye on this story for awhile now cause its brilliantly done, hope the next chapter comes out soon!
More, please.......
Don't make me break out the skeleton, who died waiting for OP to deliver...
Chapter?
I hope after this cliffhanger they vanish and hide in the shadows again.
6249679 you mean these young fellers?i.imgur.com/lPXKm.jpg
6452648 yup.
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finally
It Lives!!!
i.qkme.me/3ov3ip.jpg today was a goood day.
Onward!
Danke dem Herrn oben ! This story hath updated!
NEW UPDATE?!
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Well to me it seemed a little rushed with the changelings leaving canterlot immediately. Although I guess it could be because the queen was harmed. Other than that it was a great chapter, and I am looking forward for more.
And now, the year long wait for the next chapter begins.
6493054 Don't go off the date that's posted. The firs chapter was actually uploaded some time in April I think. Don't know why it says august.
So it's only a 6 month wait instead of a year