Jake Shadow Wings
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Well...
This is not how you do a self-insert. For starters, the amount of 'I' at the start of your sentances really killed any chance of me reading this past the first paragraph.
Oh I just love fics that reform you Moony. a fourth wall breaking Discord said.
STOP CALLING ME THAT!!!!
Oh I can do the Royal Canterlot Cap Lock too but I can do one better activate [size=9em *gasp* AAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!
...ow...
*<>* should we tell 'em how right they are with the timey whimey theory cause both are plausible possibilities ...
~ nah let the author have his fun
So when in the season is this taking place???
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The story so far is taking place at the beginning of Season one though Jake won't be in ponyville for everything from season one. I'm going to have the ticket master take place shortly enough, but the two weeks that the next chapter covers are before the ticket master cause they never said when it takes place only that it's long before the gala.
7226479 OK, but just to clear it up here since I'm a bit confused, since nightmare moon is there now, how come the mane 6 don't take immediate action on this?
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She's disguised herself as Moonlight, The mane six only know moonlight not that she's nightmare moon. She'll reveal who she really is to Celestia and Luna with Jake backing her up. She's hoping she won't be killed on sight, but we'll see.
i love this story so much its so fun to read
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Glad you enjoy it, Next chapter we see the first drama of the series, or at least expected drama. I'm working on it right this second, my muse finally has something she won't let go of, it's terrifying, I don't even get to go to sleep when I usually do because she tells me this story must be continued.
7229794 hahaha oh my god well the sooner the next chapters out the sooner you get to sleep properly i guess have fun with it and take your time don't want a major PLOT holes now do we. that was bad and i shuld feel bad but i don't
Holy, that was a long chapter to read. And now we wait to see what the princesses will do.
Great story, can't wait for the next chapter.
...FUUUUUCK YOUUUUUUU, and your fucking cliffhanger!
You know cliffhangers make me angry and crazy almost makes me want to make cupcakes out of you you wouldn't want that, would you?
But other then the cliffhanger the chapter was awesome if I could I would give you over 9000............ thumbs up
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Thank you for the thumbs up, and as for cliffhangers, this is most likely the only one. no promises though. also if you made me into cupcakes you wouldn't ever get an update.
what gonna happen next?
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I will spoil nothing other than to say Jake and Artemis will meet with the princesses and only say that much because it's in the title.
what happen next chapter?
Weird.
If Jake is a brony, there is a group to fit this story in.
Link: Bronies in Equestria
Too much yawning. Making me feel sleepy.
More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more mmmmmmooooooorrrrrreee!!!!
Well the magic that changes his body probably drains alot of energy which makes him sleepy for several days/weeks.
I wonder what gonne happen next?
yay new chapter i loved it
Great as always
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Glad you Enjoy currently working on Chapter 8
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Glad you liked it I didn't know how everyone was going to react to how Jake healed Scoots.
7361354 it's enjoyable because you are one of the few like wolf blood that add their emotion and are truly passionate about their story's
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I try my best. I'll have to check out their stories and see what they do. Thanks again.
7361582 no problem but I'll just say wolf has long chapters the longest is over 20 thousand words . I have to warn you though his story wolf among ponies can be quite dark and the wolf among caribou have implications of rape and is just as dark .
7361598 20 thousand words isn't long. 97 thousand words in one chapter is long. Plus, it didn't alter the number of digits for the entire story, despite being the single longest chapter I have encountered yet. Legacy by NFire is a good story despite its length rather than because of it, unlike Wolf Among Ponies, which suffers from poor grammar and a meandering plot that should of ended at three points at least. Don't get me wrong, I did read it entirely and consider it one of my guilty pleasure stories, but it has plenty of problems.
7388708 it's not the biggest I've read the biggest I've read was 127k and wasn't horribly drawn out and boring
7388726 So a story about sapient nuclear weapon using super tanks is drawn out and boring to you... So, Mr. Bay, what is your next movie about?
7389054 what I'm saying is that most writers don't put their heart in their work which effects how well written that chater is an usualy the author has most hooked by the Time it reaches 5-7k and some story's are to advance and seem rushed so I'm saying most writers don't take the time to truly do their best so they if the lack motivation then the story suffers. the athuors that have long chapter are usualy have great stories
7389096 Except when it's 11 thousand words and it's the first chapter and reads only slightly drier than a textbook. I didn't even finish the first chapter of The Lost Element.
7389110 exactly
7181143 NO
These story is all over the place with no clear direction........but my curiosity is peaked
Wow. First time I make the first comment.
Anyway, yeah you do need some work on this... badly.
7403818 You two think you can do the Royal cantorlot voice the best you are foolish to think you can do so better than me!
it sure was
If Jake Wolf was voiced, what would he sound like? Also, if you need help on finding out how to split your chapters, try Authors Helping Authors.
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Jake would have a slightly smoother voice, maybe a bit low but not so low you'd think he was a smooth jazz singer. A little city slicker rather than a country twang. Why do you ask?
Umm its...
Alive?
Holy shit yes!
wait, that thing is jack father? WHAT THE F$^^&*^K!?!
battle between him and heartless look a-like
who he go see next the dream?
Nice story like it so Far