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Trixie Senpai FOREVER!!! Ship Trixie with anyone and you'll make your fic 500% cooler/awesome! Also remember to give the golden mares some love! Mayor Mare, Cherry Jubilee, and Harshwhinny!

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Octavia finds a peculiar pegasus at her home in her birdbath and asks why the pegasus acts like pigeon. What she learns is a dark secret about pegasi and their origins. After a misunderstanding Octavia must now pick up the pieces of her fallen relation ship with Thunderlane and seek Pigeons help.

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"Why? If you love me then why did you give bread to Pigeon? A WHOLE LOAF AT THAT!?!" Thunderlane cried flaring his wings. "I thought you loved me!!"

Okay at first the story was giving me kind of the wrong idea again, but maybe it can be something I like. I mean I enjoy drama the way you write it.

I think that you probably have a certain way to work around problems like "that they could simply tell that it was a missunderstanding right?

Sometimes it can be still difficult but that would probably end the story rather fast.

Do you know any good storie`s with a Human woman?
I have read a nice Human X Thunderlane story, where the main theme of the story is her adopting the little Griffon Lambert.

Till now I like the story, I just don't know if I'm one for to sad stuff or whatever. You could say I try to find out about my personal taste with this story.

7545332 I recommend the Human in Equestria group. They might have something. Otherwise look up a story call "Sonata's little Aria." It's a story about Aria in teh EGs world when she turns into a pony. The prequel is about Sonata turning into a pony for a week. It's a cute story but may or may not be dead.

I worked on the idea for a while with pegasus traditions. I'm not sure where this will go, this is what we call a trash fic. A place to get ideas out to open up better ideas for my other stories. Not that I don't care about this story but its more of a fun silly thing than something serious even if it has a serious theme.:rainbowlaugh:

Oh! Which reminds me, have you read the story Moonie Shorts? http://www.fimfiction.net/story/195222/moonie-shorts-filly-nightmare-moon

7545793 well as long as that moonie story is the same and not a collection, then I like the idea. Which means thank you for showing me that story.

Oh and it is good to know that this is some kind of "test-"fanfiction.

“P-princess! I’m so sorry, I didn’t know you were coming!” Octavia blurted out.

I always thnk why should they suddenly bow, but then again maybe they like to be polite.

7552681 It is. In the old days a commoner would always bow to royalty. It's what's considered an unwritten rule when addressing royalty. I's an old tradition that's kept to this day. In japan it's still a common practice to bow to others you meet and elders/peers to show respect towards them. To many not doing so is considered disrespectful.

It most was a European and Asian tradition to bow to royalty and elders.:scootangel:

7553913 I understand both points, but guess you can admit that is seems odd sometimes, maybe because Celesta and Luna or even Twilight are supposed to be friends too, not just important. I guess that points makes it a bit weird, I mean to bow before a friend or someone you knew before.

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