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Trixie Senpai FOREVER!!! Ship Trixie with anyone and you'll make your fic 500% cooler/awesome! Also remember to give the golden mares some love! Mayor Mare, Cherry Jubilee, and Harshwhinny!

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Shortly after Sonata tells the Rainbooms about their father Adagio has become restless. She has frequent nightmares and is madly working on a school project unaware she's being affected by her sisters tale.

She jumps at the sound of loud noses and is afraid of shadows. Everyone notices the change in her behavior. At the top of the worry list is Rainbow, Adagios now girlfriend. Everyone's worried about her newly, and worsening, paranoia as they try to unravel what has the siren on edge news of monster attacks across the globe had everyone in a panic. Adagio knows times ticking and she fears what the end will hold for her when her father finds her.

Godzilla 2014 corssover. Sequel to Legend of the Sirens. WARNING: Personalities may change due to AU canon.

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6979311

Called it? What was your prediction? :raritystarry:


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Hmm... Its... Decent. I'll give it that.

Well I write for fun so mediocrity isn't suppose to happen but not everything can be a masterpiece, right friend?:pinkiehappy: Still at least you didn't out right hate it. So I'm doing something right!:pinkiecrazy:

I really don't see why people are disliking this. The flow is good and the plot is clear. I just think you have to fix the pacing of the story- find a way to keep them on the story.

I myself would assume that the dislikes are here because there is no conflict yet. I mean, sure there's the search for Godszilla or the presentation. but no conflict that really stood out. Following that, I'm also assuming some dislikes would arise from the uninterest (is that even a word?) from the topic/plot.

I'm not all too interested in godzilla myself, the only thing that caught my attention was that Vinyl/Octavia ship and Rainbow/Adagio one. (lol because personal preference) but if I liked the topic, then I definitely would love your story. :)

Thumbs up

6980265 Oh no I got that. I was just wondering what your thought's were was all. Hopefully you'll like the next chapter. I put a lot of work into my fics and this one seemed like a good idea at the time.:twilightsheepish:
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Yeah I admit the pacing is not as good as my first one. Although I do plan on taking it easier then next chapter. And the romance part is fine too, BUT I won't focus mainly on the romance part. It will be there though so don't be discouraged.


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That was a safe bet.:scootangel:

Raindagio shipping???
I don't see it being possible.

6981325 Why not?

DagiDaash is one of the cutest couples ever! Besides they both like to take charge, they're both competitive to the extreme, and in my head canon (WARNING HEAD CANON FIRING!) both are loyal to their friends/families. It makes them perfect to me. Mind you this s AU we're talking about here so personalities may differ . :trollestia:

I admit I haven´t understood everything yet, or I´m not sure what is going to happen from only reading the description, but I finally noticed you have a few new storys, and I´m going to read it later, maybe I have an easier time to follow this story.

Your others aren´t really bad, but somehow I can´t follow just every story at the moment. I actually have less time int the future if I can work in one of two certain places. (don´t know the english word "Firma"; and I´m to lazy to look for it right now)

6981458 I suppose, but I don't remember seeing Adagio being sentimental to Aria and Sonata much. I prefer straight pairings, but I won't raise objection, on account I'm interested in this story. The Godzilla crossovers are getting good now. Have you read Tarbtano's story?

6981571 I've run across them but I never read them. Are they any good? And as for the personalities, well like OI said AU. I like Adagio and Rainbow and always wanted to ship them.

She glared at the former Crystal Prep student before a soft cough broke her attnetion.

Not sure if I need to see the movie to understand everything that is going to happen, I´m somehow kind of wary about some Mlp epispdes, and even if I kind of liked the second movie..., I think I prefer the episodes.
I think what I never really liked, the way they could transform even without Twilight and her magic, and I bet they got another transformation in the third movie right?

I accidently posted this comment earlier than I wanted, but now I can take a break. So far I like it, I haven´t seen anything that was really interessting for me yet, but I liked it. I think I would have a different reaction If I would know the prequel, and because of that I only judge it after I have read the other sequel, and see more from this story.

6982897 Oh they're fantastic, and the art and videos tied to it are great, too. I insist you give The Bridge a read.

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/121836/the-bridge-a-godzilla-mlp-crossover

"Rainbow said it and according to Sonata and Aria, 'Sirens are territorial creatures'." Sunset said in a mock Aria tone. "According to them since she views Rainbow as hers you are seen as competition."

aahhhh there´s the first interesting fact.
I like it if people try to write their storys with a bit of psychology stuff. That it looks like Adadgio could not do much about it without a lot of work, makes it interessting f you know what I mean. I have work today, maybe I can stay there if I´m good enough in their eyes, so I don´t look much at the quality of my comment right now.

I think I start to understand what this is supposed to mean, the thing with her father...
Could it be that Godzilla is supposed to be their father? It would be still weird somehow, but actually interessting.

6984592 Well I hope you get hired or whatever it is you're doing friend.

This sounds interesting....

6984669 thx, I think the first day went pretty good, it is a bit far away, but at the moment it is good enough.

ah no problem at least i can do to help ^^

now i wanna see how it goes next, ohh i could see a big monster fight soon

6993977 Soon my friend. Soon. Until then enjoy a chapter of long winded references! :twilightsheepish:
Nothing is sacred anymore.

6994545 You are a tough nut to crack friend. :scootangel:

6999023 HAH! Fair enough.

The fact you're here is already good enough for me. I just hope I can later impress and not underwhelm you.:raritywink:

I take it Adagio is bisexual in this?

7004662 I guess you could say that. It's a ibt more complicated than simple sexual orientation. But for simplicity sake, yes, she is.

7005831 'Thought so. I support straight pairings, but I find the idea of Adagio having a girlfriend AND a masculine vehicle "companion" enjoyably laughable.

7005933 Oh, you mean 'Tom'? Yeah I figured someone would. I always thought about Adagio being very masculine compared to most other characters in the movies. I'm looking forward to what Overlord Hasbro comes up with in later days for season 6. I just hope Trixie will be in it, even though she most likely won't be.

7006007 Ditto, as well as the later Equestria Girls movies. I have ideas about what'll happen, but that's different from what you have here.

Also, I noticed you used that anatomy phrase I mentioned. Lemme know if you want more.

Ever since they 'took a break' was when she realized Rainbow was taking a shine to this worlds Twilight Sparkle.

Don´t hurt Adagio Rainbow, she can´t help it.:raritydespair: (I strangely like to use that weird mocking sad face thingy)


7006007 I really don´t know why, but ince the recycled Villain Tirek, and the bad story I started to know him, somehow the Season 5 wasn´t my favourite, and I don´t like the Prince Charming Armor, and Disney Cadance, at least not in the show itself that much (even if I still somehow avoid a part of that episode) That exatly them had to get an Alicorn was a bit overdone in my prejudice loaded opinion on her. (Yes I feel like that shouldn´t make me feel that way since I don´t even know that MC Flurry yet.
What I mean is, it wouldn´t be easy to have it start with them, but I hope that season can stop my wary feeling about new episodes, that I got the way I started to hear about Tirek and what was desscribed in the story as a Dragon Ball fight.

To see Trixie as one of Starlights new friends would be awesome I think. It could mean that either Staright has an easier tme with some Ponys than Twilight, or that she has to befriend her, even if her new friends seems to hate her. That way she can probably make Twilight proud.

I like this story, sometimes if I feel like the informations aren´t needed yet, I read it a bit faster (the part with the Wonderbolt army), but I still took notice of it, and I have a feeling they are after either "that thing", or "Adagios father".

I like this story, I just think that I try to reach the end to be on track with the latest chapter makes me to maybe miss some important stuff if I don´t take a break.

7052731 I have to admit my feelings on the amount of alicorns in the series has been... I can't think of a word to describe it, but I think disheartened would be the closest. In truth I feel alicorns have lost their, "Feel" as we say in America.

Before alicorns were these majestic creatures of great power. When the introduced Cadence, (Nice nickname by the way, Disney Cadence) I felt that here was a huge gap to how alicorns came to be. Twilight's ascension was the best explanation I had ever heard since that point, but with the birth of Flurry Heart or whatever it's name is, it expands on the notion that alicorns can be born by natural means as well as magical.

Here's to Trixie and may she too one day join the ranks of alicorn hood.

Actually you should pay close attention to all groups in this fic. They're very important.:raritywink:

7052846 since I accidently closed the wrong tab you get the short version.

You ispired my crazy side of imagination, and I had to say something like "it looks like Alicorns are easy to get if the Mother was an Alicorn, and that maybe in the future the other pony races would be rare and you can only see Alicorns.
Then the whole Planet would be sort of die because of them, since they maybe won´t die and if there are always new Alicorns....
I think you know what I mean, sorry for this right now, but even if I like to write long comments, I don´t like to repeat it, if something like that happens and my comment is sort of vanished.

Hhhhmmmm Then I probably only said something like " I think I actually understood what happened, but I will read it later again.
Sometimes I only read black man, blue...yellow.., and even if you have to keept their identity a secret, it isn´t always easy to endure it, at least not if I really want to catch up with the lates chapter. Sorry if I should mix something up, I have read two different storys in an hour this morning.

There is some irony to this. I've heard about a survival-genre game where you play as a civilian trying to flee a city while a kaiju brawl kicks off.

"Don't worry Rainbow. That's him. That's my father."

not sure why I imaged them to act simply on some sort of primal instinct if they meet their father.

I know, this chapter is not the best of my work I know and my secret editor was not willing to help me anymore so I once again have no editor and have to painstakingly go through this miyself.

I think I have to agree a bit, but I still liked it, and don´t really need to complain about anything.

She paused looking down at Rainbow who was trying her to cover herself with the lab coat she wore. A strange smell ran though her nose and it took only a moment for her to realize what it was.

meeehh, I spend a few minutes thinking about what I should think about that part, but I ended upp laughing.
However, what exactly happened, I looked again to make sure I haven´t read to fast, but I think she wasn´t affraid or was she that affraid?

Definitely gonna take a look at this

7097094 I have achieved something I never thought possible. A person witting a similar type of fic to read one of my own. You have made my day friend. :raritywink: Hope you like this more intimate Godzilla fic.

not sure how much I like the solider part, but it is still something I like, I guess just a mean part for a cliffhanger.
I would like it if we would see her in her siren form a few times, maybe if she is really sad and should run away, or if Rainbow and her would be alone.
Part of me just wants to see that ability getting used, and another part of me just want's a reason Rainbow could at least consider that Adagio doesn't works like a normal person, but this time I don't mean she shouldn't be angry, no I just hope to see a scene where they actually look at her as a different creature.
I mean that they know that she maybe has a different psychology. ....yes I admit I really like psychologic stuff, and you chapters go into that direction the most. At least your storys are those who are getting the most updates and are somehow going into that direction.

I stop now, since I get the feeling I go farther and farther away, from what I actually wanted to say.

7185757 I know it's a lot of build up but it's just my style after all these years. I use to jump head first into action but I'm still trying to figure out what I want with Big G and Elechos.

7186378 Admittedly this is one of the harder couples I've written in a while. I thought Trixie and Mayor Mare were hard, but this is nerve wrecking. :twilightsheepish:

“Excuse me?” Spitfire’s brow twitched. “You do realise I am holding you by the cajones? I can ruin your life and Rainbows or, I could make what you did go away and have a clean slate if you help us.”

I'm not totally sure if Spitfire may still like her, but isn't used to not getting something, or if she actually hates her.

This time Spitfire takes the place of the character that I hate, (You know how I mean it till now, I like her as what she is supposed to be and whant her in the story, but her actions are supposed to be exactly what she did. I'm just curious about how much she is doing because she wants to do it, and if she maybe has a boss above her that makes her doing this.

I admit I had read a bit fast, but does Spitfire knows about her other live/lives, or does she just know about many things Adagio didin her recent live?

great story you have here!altough i think godzilla is going to put spitfire in her place! go adigio go rainbow and go godzilla! nicely done!

7210984 Aww thanks friend.

Well, let's just say the G-Force is not a bunch of pushovers. Cause you never know what they'll have.:raritywink: But if you like this I'm confident you'll love what's coming next.

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As with our other friend here, Spitfire has kind of an idea what Godzilla is capable of. It'll be a tough fight but will G-Force win or will Big G win? Not to mention they seemed to forget it's a three way battle not two. Hint Hint...


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Hopefully it will be. :trollestia: With the Super X what could possibly go wrong?

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I figured you would like that. :twilightsmile: I always wanted to put in a overconfident Spitfire into this but had trouble with it. Not to mention I have tons of other ideas at the same time. :pinkiesad2:

You need to run some spelling and grammar checks, buddy.

I rushed the fight a bit, but I knew where to read to get all the important parts.

I totally liked that chapter, and my first guess would be that again he is feeling that Adagio is there, probably taking her with himself or something.

I forgot what you said to me last time (I have an headache anyway), but Spitfire is really the asshole pocile type of character that is usually in such movies.

Wonderbolts against the Big G? This can only end so well...

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I was sure I fixed everything. Guess I'll have to check again. Thanks for the heads up. :derpytongue2: Yeah 100 meters is a bit big. Oops. Thanks for that catch. :twilightsmile: Twilight would be impressed. Unfortunately grammar is NOT a strong point for me. I usually really on an editor for that but I don't have one currently for this fic. But thanks for making me look it over again. I did see a few issues I do know how to fix.
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I forgot what you said to me last time (I have an headache anyway), but Spitfire is really the asshole pocile type of character that is usually in such movies.

She is, but as you know with me there's a reason behind her methods and feeling. It'll be answered again but it was also briefly mentioned in her debut to the fic. :twilightsheepish:

g- force so brave ,so professinal so over confident ladies and gentlemen be prepared for spitfires smackdown! fantastic chapter so much fun to read!

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Well, the smack down isn't quiet there yet, but make sure you see the next chapter. The smack will be there. Just a question of who'll get smacked.

Nice chapter, I was reading some parts a bit faster, but only those parts that where about Adagio typing at some Computers.
It is starting to get more interessting to get to know more about the different Characters and who has which type of relationship with one of the others. (I hope this was correctly written, or at least understandable.)

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Ah, so you like the interactions between them? I honestly expected you to bring up my other Spitfire in Wonderbolt my Heart and compare the two. :derpytongue2: (I like Derpy emote)

Well, let's say the characters are going to get much deeper in their backstories. Some more tragic than others. Poor Adagio has made a powerful enemy today.

7278397 Fortunately, she isn't the only one hating Spitfire right now.

7278397 I admit in storys where there are races with animal traits, that I like it if they have some habits they just have to follow and can't do much about it. Because of that I still sort of hope for Adagio to spend a day in her Siren form should they get a calm moment, and do what they want to do, maybe they rent a house on tsome sort of private beach.
Well I don't expect that to happen, right now she is in deep shit and I don't exactly know what I want beyond that.

Otherwise I have no idea what to say about that, I think it never crossed my mind to compare characters from different storys.

Have I already asked you if you like the army much? because of your avatar?

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