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Trixie Senpai FOREVER!!! Ship Trixie with anyone and you'll make your fic 500% cooler/awesome! Also remember to give the golden mares some love! Mayor Mare, Cherry Jubilee, and Harshwhinny!

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In Ponyville, Trixie and her companion eevee, or Charlie as he is called, take a trip to Ponyville Elementary School. There they fond the CMC's being bullies and decide to intervene.

There Charlie explains to the bullies how special the CMC's are despite not having cutie marks.

Featured in Pokemon fan club 4/7/2015!

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I just wanna say that the pokemon in the coverart is actually a Flareon.

5838082 I know...:fluttercry: I'm sorry. I t was the best I could do until I get a commission or until I make my own. Sorry. Hope you liked it otherwise.

5837659 I might add more. I had plans to make it a one-shot but it feels cheap.

5838097 that is a cut picture tho. I think it should stay put.

5838097
Yo, no need to be so sorry! I really digged the story. Scootaloo is so sassy! I like it! Besides I love Flareon, and the picture is cute as hell!

5838134 Thanks! I was worried no one would like this story . I tried to make it to show how a connection between ponies and pokemon as a whole. Silver Spoon and Ember specifically. I figured the evolution and cutie mark thing was a nice twist. What did you think/what did you like? Besides Scoots. Everyone loves her. :scootangel: If you don't mind me asking.

You know? I applaud this story. I love adventure as much as the next guy, but it's REALLY nice to see a story that just focuses on how a universe where pony and Pokemon coexist together and how that works. Now to be fair, I did notice a lot punctuation errors so I'd recommend sending this to a good proofreader to fix that, but aside from that? This was a sweet, well told story.

I also love the universe you have set up here. Big a Pokemon fan as I am, I gotta say I'm more of a fan of Pokemon existing as their OWN thing and no humans really involved(Like the Mystery Dungeon series... WHY WON'T THEY MAKE THAT A SHOW?!:raritycry:). And if ever there was a place for this to occur? It's MLP. I especially like the connection you make with Cutie Marks and Evolving being similar, but ultimately different, concepts.

And the mentioning of just how hard it would be for a pony/horse-like Pokemon living with less than informed ponies who may not know the ins and outs of being a Pokemon.

Now that being said, I really WOULD like to see more from this. A prequel showing how Trixie and Charlie's first interactions and how they met in detail perhaps? I mean I bought the romance, JUST saying I think it could stand a little fleshing out.

Anyway, great story and I look forward to more if you do it. :twilightsmile:

5899541 i honestly never thought another pokemon fan would ever say that. I won't lie, I WAS a gen-oner and I loved it! When I saw episodes involving multiple eevee evolution I always wondered if the eevees ever had family who thought they were better because they were evolved.

In fact, the topic of power in evolution was an argument that's been around since the fandom/games existed. And during the episode Troubles Brewing where a family of sisters all had eeveeloutions except the youngest who wanted to leave and go on a journey. (Inspiration for the eevee sisters):raritywink:

Later a group of brothers had a set of them and said that eevees were weak because they didn't evolve or were inferior in some way. (Inspiration of the plot of story).:rainbowdetermined2:

I especially like the connection you make with Cutie Marks:applecry::scootangel::unsuresweetie: and Evolving being similar, but ultimately different, concepts.
And the mentioning of just how hard it would be for a pony/horse-like Pokemon living with less than informed ponies who may not know the ins and outs of being a Pokemon.

You mean no other pokemon crossover ever made this connection? Really? :rainbowhuh: I was sure someone did by now. Well, if I was the first to do it then I am really surprised. If not, then I'm glad I made it that memorable. I really wanted to do this since I became a fan and honestly I was afraid of writing this, as I might have upset people. Don't know why I thought that.

Anyways, thanks for the comment and don't worry there will be more eventually. I'm just going to finish one story first then after that I will add to this story some how.

Later gator!

6020597 And there will be lots more! I plan to make this a short but not two-three chapter long story.:scootangel:

5899541

I also love the universe you have set up here. Big a Pokemon fan as I am, I gotta say I'm more of a fan of Pokemon existing as their OWN thing and no humans really involved(Like the Mystery Dungeon series... WHY WON'T THEY MAKE THAT A SHOW?!

i think i can agree with that, it seems to be more interessting that way.

I especially like the connection you make with Cutie Marks:applecry::scootangel::unsuresweetie: and Evolving being similar, but ultimately different, concepts.

And the mentioning of just how hard it would be for a pony/horse-like Pokemon living with less than informed ponies who may not know the ins and outs of being a Pokemon.

You mean no other pokemon crossover ever made this connection? Really? :rainbowhuh: I was sure someone did by now. Well, if I was the first to do it then I am really surprised. If not, then I'm glad I made it that memorable. I really wanted to do this since I became a fan and honestly I was afraid of writing this, as I might have upset people. Don't know why I thought that.

i think i never really saw it the way you are doing it with your story, there are maybe some storys, that get close to what you have, but not a story, where they accepted them that much, or a problem like that with the ponyta.

Not my favourite story, but what i read is good, more personal preference, and the knowledge that i know how long the story is supposed to be, are mostly the reason why it isn´t your best story for me.
I give you a thumb up for the story,

Yay update. Cant wait for the next update.

Keep it up.

6244140 Aww. Is somepony mad?:trollestia: Starlight isn't that bad. :scootangel:

6233188 Thanks for the inspiring words. :rainbowlaugh: I think you'll like what's next.

Huh... You know part of me wants to say Twilight would have tried something, and given the nature of Starlight's spell would have full legal backing, to cast something that either blocked out all knowledge of that spell or at least bind it so she can't use it at all.

That being said this is a fine use for Starlight. :twilightsmile:

Also, somewhat related topic, but have you ever heard of Pokemon ReBurst?

6354868 No I haven't heard of Pokemon ReBurst. What is it?

And thanks for the compliment.:scootangel: And Twilight's a princess she can do whatever she wants. :trollestia:

6354908 It's a manga, that while hasn't been released in America with a proper English translation.... You can find fan translations easy enough.

It's a totally unconnected from the main Pokemon universe story, sort of an... Earth 2 if you will. The story follows the main character, Ryouga, and his friends Miruto, Yappy, Karuta, and Rug as they fight the Great Gavel organization. In this series, Ryouga and many others have the ability to turn into a Pokémon-human hybrid by using a special technique called Burst.

In order for one to perform Burst, they will need a special item known as a Burst Heart The Burst Heart is a small, pocket sized jewel that actually holds a Pokémon inside of it, sealed so that its power can be used by anyone wishing to fuse with it. The Burst Heart can be compared to a Poké Ball in that it holds a Pokémon inside, but is also different due to the fact that it doesn't store a Pokémon to be released for later use. If a Burst Heart is broken, the Pokémon inside will be freed. It is not known how a Burst Heart is made, but Artificial Burst Hearts have been created by Great Gavel though with a clear power difference in most cases as they tend to be slightly weaker.

Once Burst is activated, the user will have their physical traits increased greatly. Whatever abilities the user will get depends on the type of Pokémon used to combine; for example, a Ground-type Pokémon will make the user immune to Electric attacks. It is stated that in order to use Burst, one must go through rigorous training or else their life will be in danger if they attempt it. Ryouga having been able to lift large boulders easily enough even WITHOUT using Burst.

It is later revealed that a Burst Heart—like the Pokémon they contain—can become stronger as they get involved in more battles. This allows the Burst itself to become stronger at the same time as the Burst Warrior. Evolution still applies to Bursts(Unless the Burst uses a Legendary Pokemon) if a Pokémon inside of a Burst Heart evolves, so does the Burst of the user.

Ryouga's Burst? Zekrom, my personal favorite of the Legendary by far.

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The brown pokemon rolled his eyes at his fried

rolled his eyes at his fried

fried

*snort* :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

A heart warming story. Very much worth my favorite.

Cute. The pony and Pokemon world is awesome, btw. It's like Equestria just got a major upgrade. :raritystarry:


It needs something, though... I wonder what?:trollestia:

6777310 I think it needs more Kitsune. :rainbowlaugh: :trollestia: I'll add a Vuplix to it! Or maybe Rayquaza?

6778251 I think a Ninetails would be even better! No idea why...:trollestia:
And of course a Rayquaza. There's always room for him.

Cheerlee is actually matanga
:derpytongue2:

7677489 I am never sure really. Thanks for that.:derpyderp2: Thanks for reading also.

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