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During the events of Celestial Advice, Twilight sends Starlight to the Dragonlands where she befriends Princess Ember, Lord of Dragons.

Written for the: ScifiPony's Writer's Training Ground Celestial Advice prompt.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 10 )

More please!

8109054 You know what? Sure. I'll make a bit more. Just for you. :scootangel: I'll try to get to it soon.

8109805 thanks! Didn't expect that to work!:derpytongue2:

8109845 Ask and you shall receive. As long as I have time of course. Older fics take priority, obviously. :twilightsmile:

8110015 makes sense. Respect you elders! :rainbowlaugh:

I'm currently halfway into it, so far:

Two spelling mistakes: continued and brow ( continue and bro ).
I had a cringe spasm when I read this line:
"Starlight, we need to talk"
That's a line from my one shot that I'm maybe not going to release because I can't bring myself to finish it:facehoof:

This fic has potential, I can see it, feel it (Scottish accent, if you catch my drift:raritywink:).

Okay, I've just finished the chapter, and there's three more spelling mistakes, IN (in), greta (great) and herf (her).

Not saying it's bothering me too much, it just feels satisfying to point it out.

8110622 Cool thanks for finding these. :raritywink:

Starlight nodded in silence waiting for twilight to finish. Already though she could see where this was going, and she wasn’t liking it.

Twilight


I like where this story is going and I hope to see more:heart:

8139685 Sorry for the late response. I plan on expanding the story a bit in the next few days. I just have to finish other stories first to a degree. :scootangel: Glad you liked it.

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