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Shortly after the Super X was destroyed by Godzilla Adagio and Rainbow went on with their lives. Rainbow went to College and Adagio continued to work as an independent researcher. Now with their friends coming together for a school reunion and Camp Everfree the two lovers use it as an excuse to rekindle their dying relationship.

But Camp Everfree has many secrets, and with trouble lurking by there's no telling what will happen next, in Camp Everfree.

Sequel to Legend of the Siren: A Fathers Return.

Character Personalities may change due to AU Tag.

Chapters (20)
Comments ( 54 )

I actually hoped to see that happen pice by pice and not all in a timeskip.

Oh the everfree camp. I guess I need to force myself through the friendshipt games and then this movie, but I don't mind reading it here, at least I don't expect any bad suprises from you.

I onyl saw some pictures but I can't get over the fact that they seems to earn new transformations every movie or that they probably even had some sport transformation power to, just the stuff that seems to fit to the situation.

It is like Twilights presence would have created magic for the whole world, I always thought they should only be able to transform if Twilight is there, or maybe even because of the new Twilight once she got in contact with the magic.

Okay nice chapter anyway.

Really nice, do you still plan to make Adagio teach her how to be a Siren? Maybe it could be what Rainbow could do to make it up to Adagio. I mean asking her to teach Rainbow how to be a Siren could ma her feel somewhat special, special as herself if you understand what I mean.

I can't help it, but I really enjoy the psychological aspect or something like that, about a Pony/creature acting like some wild creature. I guess I like to see other characters acting curious about it.

7678161 Oh I was always planning on Rainbow and Adagio having, "Siren Time". But I have to say acting like creatures is a bit more out of what I had planned. I mean don't expect them to go around and devouring people and other animals, if that's what you meant. :rainbowlaugh: But I did do one thing already. Remember at the beginning how I described Rainbow abusing her powers?

7679062 Don't worry, it would be akward for them to act totally stupid and animal like after everyone knows well enough how intelligent they are. No I just was explainint it generally.

Right now I only expect Adagio to maybe show Rainbow some of the aspects of being a Siren or something like that, making her understand what it means and stuff like that. Meeehh it is more a wish then something I really want, it looked good so far without it too.

I admit I rushed through the chapter a bit. In most fighting scenes or technical stuff I just look if something could be important and well the most fighting scenes can be skipped. I guess I only do it if I shouldn't understand the descriptions sometimes and stuff like that.

Honestly I somehow thought the godzilla stuff was over, I don't mind but I forgot that it is still the same universe.

Well nice chapter.

and then they transformed while telling horror storys !!!!!!!!!, sorry had to say something like this, you know the usual "Equestria girls starts to imitade the winx stuff". Then again I have no prove to back that up, even if I'm somehow sure the movies are like a background story for future Marvel Heroes.

This chapter was pretty good, at least a bit more my taste than the last one, however they were both good.

7706975 Funny you should mention that I've never seen Winx club or any variation of it, BUT Equestria Girls always reminds me of the show WITCH. Great show. Kinda old though. If you can ever watch it I recommend doing so.

7715424 Witch huh? sounds familiar. Well while I mostly watched it as kids, the girls in the show have probably around 20 transformations so far and I'm wondering why they aren't already considered gods.

7715483 20? Damn that's a lot. Also don't worry if you forget something. I'll always be willing to remind you if you forget anything. Just remember this is a Godzilla crossover so there will be lots of kaiju fights to come.

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7715488 ohhhhhhhh yes, that was actually not a bad show, I believe I only could watch a few episodes and had trouble to find the rest or something like that.

I wonder why is he suddenly attacking the city?

Okay I enjoyed what you did with their natural form, but I didn't had much time and was reading a bit more quickly through the chapter.
However it was nice and I believe this maybe is something like that metal Gozilla? I probably missed something, but I think that this creature existed in the movies.

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Oh, he's just on vacation... :trollestia: No, not really. There's a legit reason.


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glad you enjoyed it.

Poor Aria. Let's hope Spitfire will not hurt her.

7874479 Maybe now it's Fleetfoots time to help.

“It’s time to destroy the invaders.”

Says invander.

7898207 Hey now, invaders aren't forced to go somewhere. :trollestia:

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Oh i see. Only one of them is invader. The flower lacks some information. That's the problem when you vegetate in one place and don't read newspapers.

Why didn't Aria say something? Why was she only hissing? They can talk in siren form.

8026454 Without spoiling too much she was just deep in thought and doesn't like talking to strangers. :twilightblush: Not sure if you recall cause it was said a whiel ago but she doesn't really trust humans too well.

Oh, how she hated the silent treatment that human gave her everytime she did try to speak to her. At first Aria was sure she was being rude and giving her the silent treatment, but after being accepted back to CHS Aria learned that the girl, Vinyl, was actually mute.

Wasn't Adagio talking with Vinil over telephone in the first chapter of Legend of the Sirens: A Fathers Return? Also why would Vinil be there and why would she help with research of someone she knows? I thought she was interested in music.

8111050 Oh, she is. :raritywink: But how would Dagi know what she does behind closed doors? :twilightsmile: And yes, SPOILER it's the same Vinyl. Plus, in case you forgot, LOS: A Father's Return has a several year gap (Time skip) in the story in which Adagio left school and everyone graduated and did other things. Remember this trip was a school reunion. Roughly speaking 5-8 years time since they graduated high school. There is no exact time lapse so it's all estimated.

Also why would Vinil be there and why would she help with research of someone she knows? I thought she was interested in music.

All good questions and I promise they will be answered soon. Vinyl however has a really simple reason for being here.

So now we have a name for the Tank Commander! His name is Kyle!

I never reall knew how to feel about the most guys in mlp, since I wasn't a fan of most of the Stallions that existed so far, but is this the commander from one or two chapters earlier?

It would be actually nice, but I hope this situation doesn't exactly means we have a new shipping. It just happens to fast sometimes no matter what the situation is. I would accept if this situation makes them friends already.

Nice chapter and now to the other four.

Only thing i find strange is, they don't worry about Aria.

8121367 Oh, Silly, this is Aria we're talking about. :raritywink: Who does she need protection from? :pinkiecrazy:

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They are her friends, they should worry. They behave like she doesn't exist. She runs away into a fight, doesn't return and they don't ask what could have happened to her.

8121409 You do make a good point. I guess this was a big oversight for me. I'll try to amend it in the next chapter. Thanks for bringing it up with me. This will help me in the long run. :twilightsmile: I mean that sincerely.

man this is good ! but b i sure wish kyle and his crew would sneak up on spitfire and her group and knock them out for a bit. aria needs to see all humans are not bad and they have compassion and the will to do the right thing! great story, great chapter!

8134308 Aww, thanks friend. I was beginning to think you left the story a while back. You haven't commented so long. I'm glad I was able to please you. Also, you're not the only one who thinks that way about Spitfire and the G-force, but they have their reasons that aren't unwarranted for their hostility against all kaiju. :scootangel:

Nice chapter. Spitfire is quite a psycho.

“Because I want to know what you what your stance is on the existence of aliens,” Kyle replied.

English isn't my language, but shouldn't there be "Because i want to know, what is your stance on the existence of aliens"?
Does he think Aria is an alien? Technicaly she is from the same world, but in different reality. Also she lives there for so long, she could be considered native.

After I started to just enjoy it and not question it to much, I started to enjoy the Soldier being one of the love interests here.

I bet at first I didn't exactly liked it to have a character appear that Aria suddenly started to like without really knowing anything about him, you know the way many characters are suddenly put into a romance with nothing to like about them?
Now after I see it a bit different I have an easier time with that.
Honestly I'm still trying to figure out his personality and just hope it isn't one of the usual 5. Like him feeling to cool for his own good or something, I hardly see a modest and serious guy or something like that.

I'm not sure yet, I just noticed that he was at least a bit smuck in the end, I don't remember the last chapter that much, or more him in it.
It didn't helped that I had a more or less broken character (Changeling Queen), in a story I have read the last two days.

Otherwise I enjoyed it, but I'm tired too, so it probably isn't my completely honest opinion.

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No, he's asking if Aria believes in aliens. It's worded in a typical American way. Because we Americans can't simply ask yes or no questions. :scootangel: we're silly people. Mostly because aliens are a big part of the Godzilla franchise. Aliens are actually in like 1/3 of all the original movies. Fun fact. :raritywink:


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So, you Commander Kyle? Awesome. :rainbowkiss: Don't worry it'll all start with freiendshipping before it develops if I decide to do that.

thank you so much for these great stories! but if aria is going with fluttershy would not fluttershy be a great help in making aria give humans a chane? and if you indeed paired them up i for one think they make the best couple! well done to you!!

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Cool1 I'm glad you liked it so much. Honestly I was expecting a lot of flak for Octavia. Glad it was received well. :twilightblush: Spitfire's gonna be so mad though.

Does this mean this story's gonna have Biollante?

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Kinda. It's Biollante in a sense, but it's still Gaia Everfree. :twilightblush:

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Maybe Biollante and Gaia Everfree are working together.

“Or maybe you see something in the Commander that you like?” Miki hinted.

hhhmmm someone it didn't trigger me this time, but .......I guess this makes me remember Cadance and her meddling with the others love lifes (no matter if it is her "real" job or not), not my thing.

Oh god I start to hate her now. I just hope he doesn't think that everything Miki is saying is the true. I kind of dislike it a bit if other characters force a certain someone to act on their feelings sooner than they are ready.

She glanced over at him once more then back at the road leading to Canterlot City. She sighed with a deep throat gurgle that made him look at her. He smiled and hesitantly reached out to her with his hand. He paused just inches away when Aria growled at him, turning her eyes on him, but not he rhead. He chuckled and rubbed her cheek calmly, throwing caution to the wind, and the sensation of his hand rubbing her cheek made her heat up with embarrassment. She instinctively started to purr at the touch. She both hated it and liked it at the sametime.

She glared at the male human and his stupid silly grin he had at her purring in his hand. She huffed, but allowed him to continue all the way to the City.

That's cute again, I think I finally really warm up to Kyle if you have more such moments, maybe even give him....something bad or a real...weakness in his psyche. I want something that locks my opinion on him on "nice character".

Nice chapter, Mikki was the only thing I didn't liked, she was teasing Aria a bit to much, first hating and then somehow annoying her.
I think me disliking some characters are maybe somewhat personal experience with what either happened to me or others, at the same time for all the trouble I had these weeks, I feel like I'm somwhat more patient with other things like Kyle.
I mean I honestly like it, I'm just a bit suprised that I suddenly do.

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Yeah, in the Godzilla movies Miki was a psychic that could sense feelings from monsters and people. She was always a little awkward which is why writing her is odd for me too. Like I said in my blog, I was going to jump head first into the Godzilla cannon. Like literally head first. :twilightblush: That's where Miki and the G-Force came form. I'm glad you like Kyle though. :rainbowkiss::heart:

If anything I want people to like him more than anything. Ironic because I tried to keep Miki like she was in the movies.

thank you for letting kyle and his men step up.and mikki compliments aria perfectly!with mikki and kyle aria doesent stand a chance,they will show her dontlive in the past but live and enjoy the present with new friends v who really care about her.once again thisis so good!

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I think because of the amount of storys and groups, I don't always notice you blogs, but maybe I try to remember that I look at your userpage once in a while.

Like I said, I'm only a bit against the feelig or her telling him in the open that she is in love with him or something, maybe I dislike that it is kind of putting a leash around Aria.
Nor sure if my wording works here.
I have thought about it and a while and yesterday I got the feeling, like I would write one or two things I often dislike in a pretty similar way if I could write that good. I mean I got a similar idea and had the feeling that maybe some stuff only looks good for the one that is writing, since I often take it a bit more seriously if I read it somewhere else.

I think it is because of Arias personality that I don't want that teasing with her, it is more something for Sonata or to hold Adagio back a little bit. Sometimes it seems like Adagio could be much more dangerous than Aria or Sonata with her decieving mind.

I probably will understand it if it doesn't happen, but maybe you could at least think about avoid doing this to Aria or just making her psy powers less acurate. It is always a bit odd if they know this before the person itself, as if they would accidently manipulate said person because they feel only the primal feeling and assume it is this or that way.

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I'm glad you liked it. :raritywink: Miki and Kyle were hard to write. I wasn;t sure about it at first though. I'm just glad it was taken well.

Comment posted by jaroslav deleted Jun 28th, 2017

Nice chapter, I was only wary of Mikki in the last chapter, since I kind of hate it if they mess with the others head, feelings or whatever. It is the same with Cadance or certain interpretation of Cadance, where I get the feeling it isn't their business to get involved "that far" in personal matters.

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Yeah, having those kind of powers can be both good and bad. Lucky for me Miki is only telepathic when it comes to kaiju. Humans too, but she usually doesn’t have to use it on humans. I feel like I’m writing a Lyra/Human fic with how many times I’ve written human in the last few days. :facehoof:

i have my large supply of butter popcorn and diet coke at the ready!letthe excitement commence!!

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LOL, someone’s excited to see this five way smackdown. :scootangel:

DOES BIOLLANTE EXIST IN THIS?

Baring her teeth she hissed in a deep gurgling growl, “If you ever touch me and use your powers on me you will not live to regret it.”

With her warning given she threw the girl to the side and continued her search. Miki slowly recovered and was helped by Rainbow Dash as they ran to catch up.

:heart:

“BAh, he’s just another human out to get something from me! He means nothing to me!”

“Sure he doesn’t.”

The romance between him and Aria is a love/hate thing for me, I like it but hate it because of Miki.

No matter how much I try it, there are just some fan versions of character or someone like Miki, that I dislike in combination with mlp. That and I believe to me Miki reacted kind of like she knew everything....arrgoant?, as far as I remember and probably embrassed Aria which I just didn't liked that much.

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