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Trixie Senpai FOREVER!!! Ship Trixie with anyone and you'll make your fic 500% cooler/awesome! Also remember to give the golden mares some love! Mayor Mare, Cherry Jubilee, and Harshwhinny!
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Glad to see this :)
So, you finally got around to this, huh?
There seems to be some kind of formatting issue towards the end of the chapter? A huge block of nothing.
7859377 I know. It feels like Dukenukem Forever. Took forever to get out. I know the wait has been long and tedious, but I finally got to it at least.
7859414 Blank....
Blank flank?
How would you rate this first chapter?
7859414 working on that
7860100 I believe there's a page worth of empty space in the story. Unless there was a formatting error for a picture.
7868024 That was intentional. I've used such spaces in the past.
My, I may need to go back and read some of the early chapters of the original... Its been so long.
Love the story, keep up the great work!
8025433 Yeah it takes a while to remember cause it was so long ago. Hope you remembered the OCs from before.
Glad you like it still.
8025510 Yeah, I still remember the OCs, its just been a while, and I tend to have a very bad memory, its funny when I'm talking to this author of another story and he's constantly having to tell me things that happened, whenever we're talking about past chapters lol
8025774 Don't feel bad. For my story it was a few years back. I don't expect everyone to remember everything.
Just glad you came back to this one.
maybe its just me but I never really hated lightning dust or understood the hate she got she kinda reminded me of a season one rainbowdash
This was definitely one of my favorite episodes from the show. Glad to see you're still continuing to write!
8078133 Always gonna write my friend!
8077591 Too bad she probably won' be in the next season. I really hope she is. ON a positive note ,she was in the last season.
8086148 I had no idea she was in the last season. When?
8088159 Look back at Top Bolt and watch that guys back story and watch for the little filly in his family. Or this photo. Bottom right corner. Tell me that doesn't look like Lightning Dust.
Plus look at the cutie marks of the family. Sure not all members have the same kind of cutie marks but they tend to follow a theme.
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8088324 I guess i never noticed that... good eye mate.
8088900 Well, of course until something happens or said its all speculation. I could be completely wrong too.
I'm a huge nerd. Like when I noticed Trixie in season 5 finale.
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Great chapter as always.
8102629 Thanks! What did you think of Emerald Herald? At least the first impressions?
8102751 She left me very intrigued and wanting to learn more about her.
Have you rewritten it, or have I seriously missed this story?
Hhhhhmmm okay so it starts with their lovely sexy time yes?
Well I don't mind, but I kind of hope it isn't overdone this time, I think I remember a different story, but I wanted to say it anyway since I think it looks better if it appears more rare.
aaahh yes I forgot you have that talent to make a perfect story and make us feel like they are in deep shit at the same time.
Well good job, but I still wish I would have found this sooner, I like to have a chance to tell my opinion before to much happened, no matter if they listen to it or not.
of course Vector, i know you are desperate, but Trixie being the one you could trust?, or the one that likes to help you?
I hope our decision back then doesn't means that she is going to join their herd. Maybe I would be okay with that later, but right now she has to do some good stuff First.
I think Spitfire doesn't wants Buttercub in the Guards right? I only remember so much, but I feel like I felt the same as Spit about that matter.
I only forgot why.
HHHmmmm for now I decide this is an interessting turn of events, but I keep remembering that you could have some sort of suprise for us at every corner, which makes me a bit wary.
However not neccesary wary in a bad way, I just keep thinking there is maybe going to happen something.
I can understand her wanting to have some fun, but I hope she kind of means it and that Trixie and spitfire aren't raising someone who is easy to have.
Ahhhh okay, now I have a more or less image of Buttercup in her daily school life.
I believe Batponys aren't exactly liked in this town right?, okay that maybe means that Buttercup kind of grew up a bit defensely, keeping up a tough act and Peanut being her litte brother was able to stay more like a kid.
This maybe is leading to Buttercup kind of making some more daring moves on the Colt, I mean maybe she thinks she has to fight for it or something.
I know how I'm always talking, but I can't help but wondering how it would turn out, if that guy Buttercup seems to like, is going to be some kind of "player", no matter if he has to many hormones, or if he is actually like that and not seeing the harm in it.
I was just suprised Trixie wasn't talking to Velvet about it, i kind of expected her to kind of speak with her, without talking to Twilight, but it seems I finally get to see Trixie meeting Rainbow and or the others in the future, probably if she is invited to a party and Spitfire takes Trixie with her too.
I'm only glad that here the heat is meant in a way that doesn't makes sluts out of them.
I'm kind of affraid she maybe forgot about some stuff too, Trixies mother I mean and why do I have a feeling like you gave Trixie a sibling?
8104021 Well, the colt, Scribble was the same Scribble from the first story. The one Trixie saved him and his father, plus Lyra at the Flightless Pegasus Inn where she first met the Starfalls. The horny insect unicorns, or as Crowscrowcrow said, the unicorn brother with his "rapey Sisters".
Who knows?
Maybe? 
I DOOOOOO love drama!
8103483 Uh, just to be clear, a rewrite of the chapter is edited.
That's all. The original story for Wonderbolt my Heart is a completely separate story. Again, all rewrite means is the chapter was professionally edited by someone other than me. 
Don't worry you didn't miss much. Just a lot of fluff.
8103502 Of course! Lovely sexy times! And as many chapter as I'm in no incest yet! Though I make no promises that won't happen later with the Starfalls.
You know me so well Texus.
8103999 Of course! Nothing like a little sexy playful banter between potential friends. Also, I'll give you a bone here, Buttercup was trying to make Thorn Rose jealous.
You are definately correct about batponies not being liked. That part I'm sure was very clear.
AND you'er correct about Buttercup growing up defensively, but not on the reason why. I haven't gotten to that yet. I don't know if you recall but nothing was mentioned about Buttercups true parents. Her biological ones. More mysteries. 
8104503 since I don't know how much would count as a spoiler, I put my whole answer in the spoiler box.
You could say I would like to see that she got a new way to act or keep him in line, I'm not to sure what is bugging me of that situation sometimes, beside the incest itself maybe, but as long as it stays fantasy I believe everything can somehow written pretty good. From my past schoollife I'm often not exactly keen on those slutty acting characters, at least not if it is meant as a serious story, which is why I often ask about that behavior before I accept them. I noticed if the characters act like that right from the start I often accept it much faster as a part of them.
Well I'm glad I got so much right and remembered enough, I guess I let the other stuff be a suprise then again.
About the sisters and their dear brother from the first story, do I remember it right and they were three sisters and one Stallion?
This would mean that there still exist two of the girls, which is one that didn't had much to do with the whole incest thing they had going on, but was cutting his family jewels off or something right?
Long story shot I think there are 2 sisters and 1 brother now. Maybe I forgot that the other one died too, or I make them have more familly than they had.
8025774 I know what you mean, I have the same with many important details.
wow....not sure what to think about that. NOt sure if they both want that, but in one way it looks like him betraying his wife and on the other hand it looks like that was their presonal agreement for staying so long.
I like that, it's okay for ther to like others too, as long as she eats at home, or how you say it.
I really hate the version of heat, where they nearly loose all control and could destory their personal life. However in a universe where everyone reacts like that, it they maybe understand it.
Good work, I just like to think Trixies mother isn't exactly happy with her husband caring for the maids, it looks like Trixie was already angry. I just hope the maid from before that Trixie meet isn't someone like the one that had fun with her father. I don't want a full house of horny maids.
Good work again, I like it if I enjoy the characters enough to cry or get angry or whatever at some pieces of the story. However I really hope you don't make it that overdone, that everyone is a slut there.
8132183 Sorry for responding late. To be honest, I write from Spitfire the way she is because of my personal experiences in life. She is a literal reflection of myself and what I fear I may become as I grow older. I'm not a parent but the fear I have of being a parent one day is heavily reflected in Spitfire's character. Albeit in a more aggressive way.
I'm not sure if that'll make sense to you, looking at what I wrote it was very odd even for me.
The heat thing is something that's always bothered me too. Controllable vs. uncontrollable heat is always a deal breaker for some. I tend to sway on the side where ponies can control themselves, for the most part, during their heat. Not all obviously, but most can.
Funny you should mention that, I don't like slut maids for the most part either. I like maids, they're cute, but I don't prefer the slut maid either. So, worry not there isn't a house full of slut maids... maybe one or two... maybe...
I promise no more the three. 
8137274 Thank you, now a part of me is wishing, that they have some sort of problem between well....husband and wife and that Trixie is maybe helping her mother or both of them. I mean.....I know that Trixie maybe could think she shouldn't intrude into her parents life that much.
However my moral view is acting up again and I kind of hope that her mother isn't actually just accepting the situation because she wants to if you know what I mean and if there is a chance, that she would act up again.
I think in a way it is the same for me, I mean with how I view that stuff. Well I try to focus my comment on the main thing again, I'm not good at describing stuff if I get to complicated.
I had no real problem with Spitfire after I saw well that it was only a dream part and I completely understand that other Mares can still be sexy for her, but that is why I need to ask you about it sometimes, since only you know how they mean it in the story.
I'm more or less sad for the mother and angry or mad with the father.
It would look odd for me to actually see Spitfire or someone else defending the kind of relationship Trixies father tries to have.
I think that is enough, I can't focuse well enough right now.
Oh I bet he would love to have "the talk". Him betraying his wife whatever or not she accepts it is some kind of big no go for me, as an aspect of his personality.
Well thank you for that part, at least it looks like it could have been more one of the maids fault and he looked like a good father at least. He is still on my ...."list", but like I said a story needs such characters, they make others look good or the story itself.
Not sure if you had planned this already, but thank you really. I love it if I see some kind of justice in there.
wtf Trixie!?
Once there Emerald Herald gave the papers to Euphoria. I have to look again, but I believe that is the maid I liked so far?
I liked that they gave him a chance, but you made it sound like he should go to a therapist, like he would need help to get over his needy behavior to the maids. It sounded like his mother or someone like that didn't loved him enough.
a very good chapter, to be honest I was a bit affraid to see something different. I know like in the other story where Trixie has met her travelling mother that we have similar thoughts on this stuff, but like in the other storie I thought it would come to a slightly different scene.
However like I said I'm pretty gratefull for that outcome. Hhhmmmm maybe they should talk with the maid about it too, or let her go with some bits to keep her safe till she found a new job if Trixies mother likes her so much.
Nice, but for a moment U thougt Trixie would command Link to attack Spitfire. I forgot what happened to him, the Tinberwolf I mean.
8168105 He's still around. Just doing Timberwolf puppy stuff. Sleeping during the day and only awake when the masters are trying to sleep.
1. I have read everything, but I still need to read even slower, so I actually remember the little and maybe important details a while later.
I was quite excited to read this chapter, part of that was because I honestly thought Rainbow would accidently speak ill of Trixie in front of Spitfire or something like that, you know how long I wait for Spitfire to defend her Mare.
I don't say Spitfire can't understand the main six too, but I believe we talked about it already and we more or less saw it the same way,...that Trixie wasn't the only bad guy in what happened ( or we even said that she had no fault in what happened between them att all).
Nice chapter.
Do you want to use Mrs. Harshwinney as a main char or romance partner in one of your new stories if you can think of something?
I still wait for a more or less normal story about her, where her bad mood maybe even has a reason, you know something psychological or even some kind of illnes that let's her act like that if you know what I mean.
I would like to see her slowly warm up.
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Sorry it took a while for me to respond to this. Yes, I do want to use Hashwhiny in a story, but I don't have a concept for one with her in it at this time. Maybe in the future but for now no. I like her, but I have too many stories as it is and I can barley fit time to do the ones I have.
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a good decision, to many stories would only make someone angry and you wouldn't be able to keep up with everything, that and the hype for a story would be already over by the time you would finally manage to write a new chapter for a certain story, so I can wait.
That is a good question and one that she should have tried to answer.
Good work Trixie.
Damn it Lightning Dust.
Isn't he a major and above Spitfire.