After being reunited with Spitfire and regaining most of her memory, Trixie attempts to get back into her old life. She finds however that in her wake the family had shattered and she must now pick up the pieces and try to bring it back together.
Trixie chuckled at the memory. She remembered vividly that her father wasn’t happy for the next month as her mother made good on her promise. That is of course until she went into an early heat, and then it was not fun for anyone.
I'm only glad that here the heat is meant in a way that doesn't makes sluts out of them.
Don't worry the Wonderbotl Academy will still happen, I just alternate between them as the days go by. So, onto the big questions, why is Trixie mother acting like she don't give a flying feather? Is she just that kind of pony, or is it something deeper?
I'm kind of affraid she maybe forgot about some stuff too, Trixies mother I mean and why do I have a feeling like you gave Trixie a sibling?
8103483 Uh, just to be clear, a rewrite of the chapter is edited. That's all. The original story for Wonderbolt my Heart is a completely separate story. Again, all rewrite means is the chapter was professionally edited by someone other than me. Don't worry you didn't miss much. Just a lot of fluff.
8104503 since I don't know how much would count as a spoiler, I put my whole answer in the spoiler box. You could say I would like to see that she got a new way to act or keep him in line, I'm not to sure what is bugging me of that situation sometimes, beside the incest itself maybe, but as long as it stays fantasy I believe everything can somehow written pretty good. From my past schoollife I'm often not exactly keen on those slutty acting characters, at least not if it is meant as a serious story, which is why I often ask about that behavior before I accept them. I noticed if the characters act like that right from the start I often accept it much faster as a part of them.
Well I'm glad I got so much right and remembered enough, I guess I let the other stuff be a suprise then again. About the sisters and their dear brother from the first story, do I remember it right and they were three sisters and one Stallion? This would mean that there still exist two of the girls, which is one that didn't had much to do with the whole incest thing they had going on, but was cutting his family jewels off or something right?
Long story shot I think there are 2 sisters and 1 brother now. Maybe I forgot that the other one died too, or I make them have more familly than they had.
8025774 I know what you mean, I have the same with many important details.
Great chapter as always.
8102629 Thanks! What did you think of Emerald Herald? At least the first impressions?
8102751 She left me very intrigued and wanting to learn more about her.
Have you rewritten it, or have I seriously missed this story?
I'm only glad that here the heat is meant in a way that doesn't makes sluts out of them.
I'm kind of affraid she maybe forgot about some stuff too, Trixies mother I mean and why do I have a feeling like you gave Trixie a sibling?
8103483 Uh, just to be clear, a rewrite of the chapter is edited. That's all. The original story for Wonderbolt my Heart is a completely separate story. Again, all rewrite means is the chapter was professionally edited by someone other than me. Don't worry you didn't miss much. Just a lot of fluff.
8104503 since I don't know how much would count as a spoiler, I put my whole answer in the spoiler box.
You could say I would like to see that she got a new way to act or keep him in line, I'm not to sure what is bugging me of that situation sometimes, beside the incest itself maybe, but as long as it stays fantasy I believe everything can somehow written pretty good. From my past schoollife I'm often not exactly keen on those slutty acting characters, at least not if it is meant as a serious story, which is why I often ask about that behavior before I accept them. I noticed if the characters act like that right from the start I often accept it much faster as a part of them.
Well I'm glad I got so much right and remembered enough, I guess I let the other stuff be a suprise then again.
About the sisters and their dear brother from the first story, do I remember it right and they were three sisters and one Stallion?
This would mean that there still exist two of the girls, which is one that didn't had much to do with the whole incest thing they had going on, but was cutting his family jewels off or something right?
Long story shot I think there are 2 sisters and 1 brother now. Maybe I forgot that the other one died too, or I make them have more familly than they had.
8025774 I know what you mean, I have the same with many important details.