wow....not sure what to think about that. NOt sure if they both want that, but in one way it looks like him betraying his wife and on the other hand it looks like that was their presonal agreement for staying so long.

It was brief and it filled Spitfire with strong urges to pounce on the mare beside her and rut her till neither of them could anymore. She quickly caught these thoughts and averted her gaze and continued to wash her mane, and trying to keep those dastardly thoughts from her mind.

I like that, it's okay for ther to like others too, as long as she eats at home, or how you say it.

I really hate the version of heat, where they nearly loose all control and could destory their personal life. However in a universe where everyone reacts like that, it they maybe understand it.

Good work, I just like to think Trixies mother isn't exactly happy with her husband caring for the maids, it looks like Trixie was already angry. I just hope the maid from before that Trixie meet isn't someone like the one that had fun with her father. I don't want a full house of horny maids.

Good work again, I like it if I enjoy the characters enough to cry or get angry or whatever at some pieces of the story. However I really hope you don't make it that overdone, that everyone is a slut there.

8132183 Sorry for responding late. To be honest, I write from Spitfire the way she is because of my personal experiences in life. She is a literal reflection of myself and what I fear I may become as I grow older. I'm not a parent but the fear I have of being a parent one day is heavily reflected in Spitfire's character. Albeit in a more aggressive way.

I'm not sure if that'll make sense to you, looking at what I wrote it was very odd even for me.

The heat thing is something that's always bothered me too. Controllable vs. uncontrollable heat is always a deal breaker for some. I tend to sway on the side where ponies can control themselves, for the most part, during their heat. Not all obviously, but most can.

Good work again, I like it if I enjoy the characters enough to cry or get angry or whatever at some pieces of the story. However I really hope you don't make it that overdone, that everyone is a slut there.

Funny you should mention that, I don't like slut maids for the most part either. I like maids, they're cute, but I don't prefer the slut maid either. So, worry not there isn't a house full of slut maids... maybe one or two... maybe... I promise no more the three.

8137274 Thank you, now a part of me is wishing, that they have some sort of problem between well....husband and wife and that Trixie is maybe helping her mother or both of them. I mean.....I know that Trixie maybe could think she shouldn't intrude into her parents life that much.

However my moral view is acting up again and I kind of hope that her mother isn't actually just accepting the situation because she wants to if you know what I mean and if there is a chance, that she would act up again.

I think in a way it is the same for me, I mean with how I view that stuff. Well I try to focus my comment on the main thing again, I'm not good at describing stuff if I get to complicated.

I had no real problem with Spitfire after I saw well that it was only a dream part and I completely understand that other Mares can still be sexy for her, but that is why I need to ask you about it sometimes, since only you know how they mean it in the story.

I'm more or less sad for the mother and angry or mad with the father.
It would look odd for me to actually see Spitfire or someone else defending the kind of relationship Trixies father tries to have.

I think that is enough, I can't focuse well enough right now.