Ivory Piano
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Any Ivory Piano read is a must read. I don't usually put in for anthro, but I'm already enjoying the narrative. Im still smirking over Mac's shirt superpowers.
Okay, this story is interesting. I loved how Rarity failed at trying to seduce Big Mac into giving her his gloves and the part with the ripping shirts and Rarity's oath to create a shirt that can withstand his muscles was hilarious. Question, is the story harem style (Big Mac would go through each of the girls one at a time and keep them all) or is it AU where every time Big Mac gets a girl it's it's own unique story? Also, would this story be updated quickly or would it take some time? Anyway, I love this story so far, so you get a fav.
Interesting... will track and upvote for now.
Just when I think Rarity/Big Macintosh in the other story was golden enough. Can't wait for the other girls and how those work out.
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I can't wait for the chapters with Pinkie Pie. The chapters with them before were among the best.
Great start. Looking forward to seeing how it develops.
Big Mac is the MLP version of Alex Louis Armstrong. The powers that be demand that he be shirtless. No exceptions.
Well Ivory Piano "Keeping It Simple" earned my trust. So I'm willing to give a mature fic from you a shot.
I look forward to the first steamy sex scene in 2025
7415691 Ya asked for it!!!
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Explained the piano too
This really looks like it is going to be a lot of fun.
The comedy in this was great, Big Mac had really a great Charlie Chaplan routine going and his inability to wear any kind of upper garment was hilarious
I'm looking forward to seeing more of this version of Big Mac.
The interactions between the characters was brilliant, but your strong point has always been the interactions. This is also the first story that I've come across where Big Mac is mostly silent but still really engaging so kudos for that.
I am curious where you are going to go with this story, if this is going the way I think it's going is it going to be Big Mac has a small arc with each mare before coming to a conclusion and then moving on? Or is it going to be like Keeping it Simple where Big Mac had adventures with a constantly rotating roster and then at the end one mare come out 'victorious'? I have read enough of your work that I have faith that regardless it is going to be fun.
Long story short, this is a great opening chapter and I look forward to more.
ps I think I know where you got the inspiration for Rarity's outfit and Big Mac shirtlessness
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This is really good charatcer development! Love the way you wrote Big Mac, he's gotta be the quietest version I've seen
Okay, I'm very happy to see more of this story. I loved Twilight's interaction with Big Mac, especially with how they bonded as Mac made furniture for her. Likewise, I like how Rarity and Mac's relationship is developing as the incident with the strand of the shirt was absolutely hilarious. Still, Mac talking about his past with Twilight and Rarity, along with revealing why he likes the shirt Rarity made for him was very sweet. Rarity feeling jealousy because Twilight is spending time with Big Mac, along with her mistakenly sexualizing the conversation made me laugh. Thank you so much for this chapter, as the humor and the characterization is superb. Hope the next chapter comes soon.
What is with all this good dialogue, excellent characterization and subtly woven in clever jokes?
This is tagged Mature and Sex. Get to the porn dammit!
>You will never build furniture with Twilight Sparkle
Why does this not have more praise ? It's fantastic !
No idea if I ever said this but every chapter of yours I read (not just stories, even every single chapter) I enjoy immensely. They're all a gem.
And this was no exception. Great length, even better dialogue, and oh so very enjoyable.
Fun how Rarity always assumes she knows what's going and doesn't talk about her concerns. Misunderstanding galore... no wonder Mac likes to tease her so
And she thought Twi and Mac would have butted heads because she's inquisitive... well, the exact opposite. Yes, Twi's inquisitive, but she was genuinely interested in the conversation and wasn't assuming stuff without asking (at least it seemed so to me).
As I said, wonderful. This story (hell, you as an author as well) needs more attention aimed towards it.
Damn Mac, you a pimp
The terrible pun was what cinched it all together. Good job, now go kill yourself you horrible, horrible person!
Okay, this chapter was really interesting. I laughed when Rarity was ogling Bug Mac while he was dragging the cart shirtless and RD's annoyance about Mac acting nonchalant to her boasting. I also love the hidden depths you gave to Fluttershy as she seems more mature and confident when talking with Big Mac and Mac actually is more talkative around her when they're in private. I was also shocked when you revealed a bit about Mrs. Cake's past and how she could empathize with Big Mac. Overall, this is an amazing chapter. Hope the next one comes soon so that we can see how Pinkie Pie acts.
Rarity sure likes to balance out her fantasies of Big Macintosh with fantasies of her friends with him.
I have to agree with Rarity's assessment: Mac and Shy WOULD make a cute couple.
Nice Pinkie Pie will be in the house soon!
This has been pretty fun. Rarity certainly is an equal opportunity shipper.
Another great chapter.
Dash has been pretty... well, Dash here. A bit to the extreme. Well, she'll need to control her temper in order for Mac to accept her help. She might be meaning good, but she's saying it all wrong
I love how Rarity panicked there the moment she realized that Cotton is her responsibility now. Good thing Fluttershy is there. And good thing for 'Shy that Mac is there. Quite the circle.
He will run himself completely ragged, won't he?
Ok, the whole "Mac can't wear shirts" thing is pretty funny. I keep getting Terry Crews vibes. "This stallion is too powerful to be contained!" *Mac flexes, shirt detonates* "EXPLOSION!"
Thought this was a clop fic, glad i was wrong
Cant wait to read more
Welcome,” he said. He chuckled and added, “My little pony.”