Okay, I'm very happy to see more of this story. I loved Twilight's interaction with Big Mac, especially with how they bonded as Mac made furniture for her. Likewise, I like how Rarity and Mac's relationship is developing as the incident with the strand of the shirt was absolutely hilarious. Still, Mac talking about his past with Twilight and Rarity, along with revealing why he likes the shirt Rarity made for him was very sweet. Rarity feeling jealousy because Twilight is spending time with Big Mac, along with her mistakenly sexualizing the conversation made me laugh. Thank you so much for this chapter, as the humor and the characterization is superb. Hope the next chapter comes soon.

What is with all this good dialogue, excellent characterization and subtly woven in clever jokes?

This is tagged Mature and Sex. Get to the porn dammit!

>You will never build furniture with Twilight Sparkle

Why does this not have more praise ? It's fantastic !

No idea if I ever said this but every chapter of yours I read (not just stories, even every single chapter) I enjoy immensely. They're all a gem.

And this was no exception. Great length, even better dialogue, and oh so very enjoyable.

Fun how Rarity always assumes she knows what's going and doesn't talk about her concerns. Misunderstanding galore... no wonder Mac likes to tease her so

And she thought Twi and Mac would have butted heads because she's inquisitive... well, the exact opposite. Yes, Twi's inquisitive, but she was genuinely interested in the conversation and wasn't assuming stuff without asking (at least it seemed so to me).

As I said, wonderful. This story (hell, you as an author as well) needs more attention aimed towards it.

Damn Mac, you a pimp

The terrible pun was what cinched it all together. Good job, now go kill yourself you horrible, horrible person!

Welcome,” he said. He chuckled and added, “My little pony.”