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Sparkletop Rainbows

Just a pegasister who's a huge fangirl on the inside. She follows back and would love to be your friend! (Avatar found at http://swa-oku.deviantart.com/art/Hetalia-Fan-Art-Samovar-Teatime-360787743)



This story is a sequel to Discord Writes Fanfiction 2

Scootaloo ends up writing a story with Discord for a school project.

Enough said, you know how this goes.

WARNING: co-authored with Discord

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Comments ( 14 )

Two stories!

:applejackconfused: What exactly did I just read?

So this was the third installment in the discord writes series. I love it!:pinkiehappy:

Celestia: Bananas! My favourite fruit!
Luna: Sister...do you REALLY want to have another stomach ache again?
Celestia: As long as I don't have to do any sort of work, yes. :trollestia:

Unless the spelling, punctuation and grammar was significantly worse than it is in this rendition, Cheerilee shouldn't have given the story an F. The plot meanders and doesn't stay on point, there's not much character development and most of the things that happen are nonsensical, but in my experience that's actually kind of normal for children's writing. If the basics of writing -- punctuation, spelling and grammar -- are handled correctly, she's getting at least a C.


The project isn't graded for grammar or anything, it's graded for how the story is planned itself.

7383528 That's the spirit!

Reasons why I hate Cheerilie
1: how she reacted to this story which is also the most amazing story in all of Equestria.
That's pretty much it. :rainbowlaugh:

An F? How?! :pinkiegasp: That deserves A over-9000-pluses! :raritywink: Best story ever.

7975909 Try telling that to Miss Cheerilee. But if I were her, I'd totally give that project an A.

7978260 So true. Sometimes I don't know what Cheerilee is thinking... :derpytongue2:

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