Discord Writes Fanfiction

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MLP: FiM
Comedy
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Slice of Life
Discord tells yet another one of his wacky, random tales
Celestia
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Starlight Glimmer
Sparkletop Rainbows · 961 words · 63 2 · 1.9k views

Discord Writes Fanfiction

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Twilight decided to teach Starlight some friendship lessons, but Discord unexpectedly barges in and takes over.

Sweet Celestia, this is going to be one long ride.

Feedback is encouraged.

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Vertigo22

Vertigo22 #1 · Jun 13th, 2016 · · ·

Very funny. Good job!

CL4P-TP

CL4P-TP #2 · Jun 13th, 2016 · · ·

Awesome, A sequel could definitely be produced

No seriously. Please

The Bricklayer

The Bricklayer #3 · Jun 13th, 2016 · · ·

Well that fanfic from Discord was exactly what I was expecting. Completely random. Good work!

Alchemik

Alchemik #4 · Jun 13th, 2016 · · ·

Here. All my "yes". Take it. Forge it into a pen and write more.

Sparkletop Rainbows

Sparkletop Rainbows #5 · Jun 14th, 2016 · · ·

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Do not fear! The sequel is on its way!

PrincessTwilightSparkle1

PrincessTwilightSparkle1 #6 · Jun 14th, 2016 · · ·

Oh my gosh! It was so awesomely random! I loved it!

Needling Haystacks

Needling Haystacks #7 · Jun 14th, 2016 · 2 · ·

Mmm... the framing story needs work and expansion. Ideally you want Discord's simplistic style (which makes some sense) to contrast with the frame story. As it is it kinda just looks like he wrote the whole thing.

Dark Chocolate

Dark Chocolate #8 · Jun 14th, 2016 · · ·

Forgot to fave your stories that I read. Very well done, I love Discord stories! Please do one that's just his story, that would be hysterical!

wlam

wlam #9 · Jun 14th, 2016 · · ·

Deep and complex. A masterpiece of our time.

Sparkletop Rainbows

Sparkletop Rainbows #10 · Jun 14th, 2016 · · ·

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Well it is technically from his point of view

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I'll try.

Needling Haystacks

Needling Haystacks #11 · Jun 14th, 2016 · · ·

7304149 Yes, but there's a difference between point-of-view and what the character writes (generally speaking). In other words, you could flesh out the set-up and the character interactions more. Keep it Discord's POV, but allow for more description both of the reactions of characters and of what Discord does in response to that.

It's just a suggestion, and I'm not exactly an expert writer myself, so take it as you will.

typervader

typervader #12 · Jun 21st, 2016 · · ·

Commence Comment review!

Such a random story, but it fits Discord so well! I love the fact that there isn't a plot to it and the fact that everything is random, its nice to have a story to laugh to. Its also funny that they knew what was going on but kinda didn't.

I would tell others to read this!

NightLord

NightLord #13 · Jun 21st, 2016 · · ·

This is a Commence Comments review.

Well, the humor was good, and the story seemed like something Discord would write. Also, you did a great job portraying the characters. All of their interactions were very accurate and in character. There were minor flaws, the main one being that the whole thing seems a bit rushed as far as pacing is concerned, which is fine in Discord's fic, but is a small issue in the rest of the story. Overall, a good story, and worthy of a sequel.

Hail King Sombra

Hail King Sombra #14 · Jul 9th, 2016 · · ·

Marking this to read later after work. I guess if it works for the Ice King writing fanfic, Discord can do it to. Dear Celestia, this is going to be INSANE