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PonyJosiah13


Just an adventure/mystery fanfiction-writing brony from the state of Vermont who hopes that you enjoy his work.

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Hearth's Warming Eve in Ponyville is always one of the most festive occasions in Equestria, a time for love to warm the chill air.

Today, two ponies will feel the same warmth in the chill air. Autumn Leaf is about to be presented his first gift from his distant admirer, Lemon Hearts: a sweet kiss under the mistletoe.

Short romance practice done in honor of the short but cute scene in A Hearth's Warming Tail. Edited by themouthofmush.

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Comments ( 15 )

Very sweet story, darling! Interesting use of present tense; many authors don't take the approach.

~Rares

7290110 Thank you kindly. The first-person present tense is something that I've used in previous stories, before I became a brony, so I have some experience in it; but this is one of my first real romance fics. Appreciate the fact that you liked it.

you forgot to create some space near the end, after the quote. other than that, everything seemed good. still an adorable story to read.

7290119 Fixed. Thanks for helping to edit it.

for once, the fandom disappointed me.

The fandom might have let you down, but you certainly didn't let down the fandom.
Excellent story!:twilightsmile:

It's not bad, it just has some brain worms. Here, have a lesson on brain worms, it should make your next romance much better.

I'm surprised it took someone so long to write a fic for those two myself. It was a cute little moment, and your story definitely does it justice.:heart:

7290605 Thank you. I'll be sure to keep this in mind if I write any other stories that have romance in them.

Very nice I liked it a lot. Just need to see what happens under the lemon tree. I just hope it ends better than this

Lovely! Impeccable Execution! Bravo!

Oh that was so cute I like it. :raritywink:

7617561 Glad to hear that!

Great little story. :twilightsmile: I too was disappointed at first, but now no longer!

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