Great as always TOWAN. This was one hell of a hot chapter.

Ho ly clop.
That is hot. But still, the degradation theme lost some of its appeal in this chapter, mainly because the climax of the story seems to be in the previous chapter and public use.
Thats not saying that the chapter isnt hot. IT IS!!(hot)
Thank you for this story, and i hope you continue to write

You know that tradition has it that mares stretched like that are allowed to be used by anyzebra or pony here, as a gaping cunt counts as an open invitation of a mare to any stallion.

Basically: Mare is stretched -> Mare will be used -> Mare remained stretched while being used -> Mare is used until not stretched anymore
=> Mare is used indefinitely
(Did I get that right?)

Not enough to harm her, mind you, as he wanted her mind to break with pleasure and not to inflict physical damage or pain.

Quite the gentlezebra.

Her once fragile and slender frame was now turned into a fucktoy that even the dragons might have fun to use as a cum dump.

: "Proof it!"

It made him kind of sad that the Princess of the Sun was such a prude stick in the mud, if she had such huge potential to be a grade-A slut!

Be careful what you are wishing for. Maybe she isn't as submissive and will dominate you!

Good story!
I liked it! We need more zebra-stories like this (zebras, sex, potions, etc.)!

Will there be an epilogue or additionally bonus-chapter where Celestia get her banana trade agreement (she will be happy), featuring her reaction when she learns just how she got it?

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Glad you liked it!

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Also glad you liked it! Might be that it was losing some appeal, but then again, this was just a Bonus Chapter and I technically only wrote this since I found the idea of Cadance negotiating while riding Abioye appealing. The cock growth wasn't even planned and came to me while writing it. But back to the topic. Yeah, not a planned chapter, so maybe less appeal but I'm glad that it was still enjoyable!

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Basically: Mare is stretched -> Mare will be used -> Mare remained stretched while being used -> Mare is used until not stretched anymore
=> Mare is used indefinitely
(Did I get that right?)

The stretching means basically the REAL BIG stretching. Normal is not included and the stretching that happened here will go back to normal after a while. So technically a mare might be used by the whole town if she walks around like that, but it will turn back to a normal size regardless!

Quite the gentlezebra.

That's Abioye! This character was created while writing my first story and I really like this about him. It's just some nice consensual domination play!

Will there be an epilogue or additionally bonus-chapter where Celestia get her banana trade agreement (she will be happy), featuring her reaction when she learns just how she got it?

Currently planned is a Prequel with Shining Armor and Abioye, and I was thinking maybe about a Sequel there Cadance has fun with her guards. I haven't had an idea yet where I use Celestia, but then again I have so many plans of stories I want to write, as well as a few requests, so it might be some time before there might be more of this.

need a sequel with Celly and/or luna to join in

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Thanks for clearing this "stretched-mare-confusion".

I haven't had an idea yet where I use Celestia

I thought something like this:
: "So, the negotiations were successful?"
Cadance: "Yes. Very successful."
: "I'm glad to hear. Please, tell me more about how it was going."
Cadance: "Well, when we arrived there..."

But now I have another question.You showed us two zebra-potions:
- An aphrodisiac to turn on mares
- The cock-growing-potion

Any idea what else could they have? Considering their culture there is probably more...

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I was thinking about letting him use a multiple cock potion in a story where he foalsits Flurry Heart, which he seduces, along with Cadance. So a different story with the same zebra yet again, but I like the character so can you blame me?

Other than that I haven't thought all that much about it. Sure there are possibilities about a virility one for broodmare purposes (no idea where to use that yet), or one for creating futanaries for a limited amount of time, but other than that I'm not having all that much ideas at the moment.

7340063 yes totaly^^ Even more so as it was stated that Celestia at least is prude as sin

I'm interested to see what would happen if she does hit her limit.

Will there be any tender moments with these three ?

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Abioye is tender in his own way. He would never hurt a mare and has always her pleasure in mind. But yeah, he is into domination and loves to pleasure mares that love to be dominated. So with that it might be hard to get any 'real' tender moments. Maybe aftermath moments. I had one in 'The Spreading Mare', the first story I used that OC. In that he cleaned Scootaloo lovingly after her use as a public cum dumpster.

So, he is a good guy and tender moments are possible, even if they aren't happening too often, due to his domination fetish. But rest assured in the knowledge that he values every mare, and I will use tender aftermath moments when they fit. Here in this story it just didn't seem all too fitting as Cadance was always craving for more. Sure, I will admit that the Bonus Chapter had the possibility for tenderness at the end, but I wanted that chapter to end with a banana line for the sake of humor. I kind of like humor every now and then!

Edit: Oh! I almost forgot! About the limit thing... I really haven't anything planned for that. For two reasons: One, I'm not all too creative and lack often ideas. Two, I'm not sure if the Princess of Sex should really have a limit, with her being the embodiment of it and having a durable Alicorn body to back her title up. But I'm willing to hear out ideas. So if you have an idea for that, or any other things for future prequels and sequels of this you can tell me!

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I'm glad.

He kinda reads like a misogynist dick in parts, so it had me a bit worried.

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Really?! Wow. I didn't think he would look like one. Only shows that I maybe should have given him a scene where he acts more casually. But I guess, what's done is done.

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There were points where it got difficult to determine whether he was playing a character or not

It took two more hours of constant use, before they finally had Cadance's brain fucked out sufficiently for her continued attempts to "negotiate" to trail off into incoherently stammering "B-ba... bana... na... NAAAA! naa..."

The barely conscious Princess of Sluts was then put out into the street to parade her cavernous, widely gaping fuckholes for all to see and use, while Shining and Abioye followed at a discreet distance to watch. After hours of cum-drunkenly stumbling through the zebra city and being pleasurably used and abused by dozens upon dozens of zebra stallions and mares, Cadance finally fell asleep in an alley, resting in a puddle of cum and covered from horn tip to tail tip in every type of sexual juice. Her husband and their host lovingly transported the exhausted cum dumpster back to their quarters, where they cleaned her up and let her rest in bed.

Shining was surprised the next morning, when Cadance insisted on going right back out again immediately. She had no intention of ever letting her gaping fuck-holes close up again. The Princess of Whorishness instructed him firmly that while she was out working on increasing the goodwill between their two nations, Shining was to continue negotiations with his old friend.

In addition to the banana trade, they would have to hammer out a massive exchange of mechanical sex toys for sexual potions. To encourage him to get this sorted out, she winked salaciously and whispered in his ear that he and the entire royal guard under his command would need a lot of alchemical assistance to keep her new appetites sated - otherwise she would just have to wander out into Canterlot and ruin her princessly reputation by enlisting the entire populace into a massive gangbang of her slutty plot.

As Shining watched his beloved wife saunter out into the city, tail hiked high and loose holes on display, he grinned and knew they were going to have the best marriage ever.

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That's actually kinda awesome and hot to boot! to write clopfics.

You might have talent for this kind of stuff. Ever thought about writing clopfics?

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No, they are only teaming up on mares. I'm not really into M/M, so you won't see me writing it.

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Yes, I have toyed with the thought of writing an actual story, rather than a condensed "plotbunny" comment like this. If you'd give me permission, I could try my hand at expanding the comment I wrote into a sort of omake/tribute chapter for your story.

I believe I have a fairly good handle on your style of story - it's mainly Mdom D/s with bondage elements (e.g. stocks) but no hard s/m and a heavy emphasis on fantasies (or the reality) of degradation, humiliation, and (semi-)public use, am I right?

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Seems like you know me all too well!

And I would be honored considering it would be the first time someone would actually expand a story of mine. So I can only say, go ahead! I would love to read it!

Welp... this got pointed out to me and the person asked me to apply my usual snark and disdain for clop in my also always charming and loveable... and am afraid I'll have to disappoint. No jokes, but I have had thoughts

Zebrica was not a land of equality.

Probably haven't done much in the way of social structure or even economic and infrastructure consider much of their day is spent fucking

It was a land where females weren’t seen as equals.

I'll touch on this a little more in a bit

At least not in the leadership department.

Which is why zebra stallions need themselves chugged and railing some random broad in the middle of the road. Its very stressfuly being the head of a household! Honestly, I'd imagine the mares are grateful that their not on the top of the totem pole. Then they'd have to be an example and a pillar of the community, which means a lot less fun.

And hence a country with only females as leaders had a rather hard time to get around any sort of agreements, even if it were for some simple trade.

What, why? Okay, I can see zebras different ideas where a mare should be, but that doesn't mean its a matter of viewing females as lesser, just their own duties in society. Also, all males adhere to the rank and file. Also... yeah, mama Tia is a lady who hefts the powers cosmic. Keep slinging that dick their fella's, she'll be impressed with it one day!

Abioye is still young, correct? Actually, this shows a cunning and connecting with outsiders that would serve his nation.. but not to drag a pretty pony princess out of being Mommy Eternal to be railed by your local populace. Also, he risked the couples guards careers and very lives with that stunt! Mind you its less a moral failing on his part then it was experience. Sure, fun was had, but any future dealings will be started with the words "You know you choking on transport, handling, ad license fees entirely, correct? Its part of the fine print that comes with railing one of our matron goddeses."

And now onto "Equality"... Simply put, males do not put any stock in sluts. We like the idea of sluts, may even partake, we'll even pay a a few bills, but respect or love, hell no. Inj this scenario, the mares regard their actions as a means of currency, and since most enjoy lives of comfort before they hit late twenties, they think rarely past spending their fertile years being sexually available and then more then likely shackling some sucker when they knock her up. Rape though, as a side, would probably be more harshly punished since it turns mares of dick entirely, and really, if you can't get any without shattering some filly's psyche, then fucking anyone should be at your desperate matter in need of attention.

And thus we turn to the ones in true power, the older mares. As the fire dims and ones flesh grows less able ro be stretched and inflated, or even holding a stallions attention for a time, a girl must develop faculties in her day to day lest she be abandoned entirely. And more then likely, those mare would be the ones being courted and being held in regard and even loved.

Why? First, in Zebrica, death would be fairly more common and most not living past fifty or so, and given the rampant fucking, what would they need for some old woman? First, an older mare is wiser, making for someone who you can spend a few minutes after railing her and the conversation be actually the most enjoyable part

Second, attitude. All a young mare there needs to put out and some tail reveals, and you got them at your feet. In short, on little to no effort aside from being a jizz dumpster, your immediate needs are met, and you wouldn't need a good heart or even being pleasant.

In the third, utility. As beauty fades and ones body succumbs to hard work being schtupped near constantly, one must adapt and offer other faculties as a companion and head wife, a hard worker and stern mother, and rare is an older zebra mare who is not also kind and compassionate. Cooking and book keeping would also be valued assets since here males seem to largely leave the purse in the ladies hand.

And in an older mare, ones chances of siring are lessened and thus one less headache.

And thus the fourth, discretion. An older mare would be valued as a companion abouve all else, an ear to offer and a soft voice to ease ones turmoil with the cooling of the years then with a young one whose still in the emotional throws of maidenhood.

And of course, a stallion should ever seek to tend the fields most often plowed, correct?

So.. pretty much very arrogant and unfathomably idiotic mares of the stripe variety, in pursuit of parity with stallions, took a commodity, namely their sexual assets, and analed themselves euphorically into great depression level of future hardship since their availablity is so encompassing as to be worthless. And now, any smart stallion will scope up a nice older sugar mama who can actually run things and take the pump and dump as a mistress or as under his head wifes hoof

This is pretty much all the young mares theme, where they should either be silent by choice of their words stifled by dong

After I read the first chapter I just felt angry. Like in a killing mood angry. I won't give this a thumbs down cuse their people that like this, but its not for me.

... Welp, I'm now possibly inspired to possibly maybe one day consider the not so likely idea of perhaps doing a clollfic (a troll clopfic) of a meet the parents scenario where Velvet and Night Light enact their own form of holiday ...

To the expected, at least coming from me, results....
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NL: Well Velvet dear I'd say the first annual High Holy Day OF Fuck Zebra's Stupid was a rousing success!

V: Indeed my stud!

Random zebra slut#43: raaappppeee....

V: Dear... we all heard you. You first swung your big illusory dick with a smug yes like you were doing him a favor and ended up begging to pound you up and down the garden path, we all heard.

43: Disagreement... internalized misogyny...

V: What... Wait... Uh oh

RZS#24: Socialism... works....

NL: Eh... its not that bad love. After all, fucking them stup,,,

Abioye: Freddy Got Fingered... is good....

NL:... OH GOD, WHAT HAVE DONE! SPIKE, GET A LETTER OUT!

Spike: FUCK YOU! WHY DO YOU PEOPLE BRING ME TO THESE THINGS!

V: WE BROUGHT YOU TO TAKE DICTATION!

S: DAMN IT, I TOLD YOU, I DON'T SWING THAT WAY , NOR ANYWAY AFTER THIS FIASCO, THANKS ALOT YOU PUTZES!

I usually don't comment on this sort of thing more then once, but I think I've found a distributor for Abioye