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Oh. My. God.

This...was an awesome chapter. Thank you based TheOneWithoutAName.

My reactions while reading
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The stallion grinned as he positioned himself at her entrance again.

“Yeah, you do. And good needy little whores always get their reward as long as they know their place. Do you know your place?”

Cadance nodded vigorously.

“I-I do! My place is beneath you sucking cock! Please use me as your personal cum dumpster! I’m nothing more than a whore that needs to be filled!”

Secret fantasy or not, somehow I have the feeling that the poor guy will get some sort of punishment once they're all back in the Crystal Empire. Well, either a punishment or a punishment.
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A little bit later
Okay, I think all of the Royal Guards are in for a punishment once they're back home!
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“It’s just like the good old times when we took that four-eyed mare for a ride. She couldn’t walk straight for a week after we were done with her!”

Wait, what? Does this mean that ... No, it can't be ...
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“Ahhhhhhhh! Y-You know him S-Shiny?” she asked unsteadily as her nerves were assaulted by an indescribable pleasure with every heavy thrust of the two stallions.

“Of course I do! We were good old fuckbuddies back in Highschool! Often teaming up to rut some wallflower sluts. We could make even the most prude of mares moan like a bitch in heat!”

Oh Shining Armor you sly bastard!
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“Yeah. It was my idea. My friend Abioye wrote me that he was the new leader in Zebrica, which made a perfect excuse to go there and meet up again after all this time, so I asked him to send a letter to Celestia, requesting our presence.”

He's so going to get punished as well ...
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“Then his little brother had a better idea, telling him about a peace ritual between tribes that would be the perfect trap for you. A few well-chosen words about the prude attitude of the pony race was all it took to make you offer your entire body to the zebra populace. I mean, shit, Cadance! You really must love being nothing more than a public cum dumpster if a slight provocation was enough for you to whore yourself out!”

And at this point I lost it completely. Everything was completely set up? Wow. Just wow.
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Leaving her in the hooves of the whole Zebra population at the end was maybe a little bit excessive though.
Nevertheless, t'was really fun to read

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Glad you enjoyed it! You can also call me Towan. It is a lot shorter than TheOneWithoutAName!

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Secret fantasy or not, somehow I have the feeling that the poor guy will get some sort of punishment once they're all back in the Crystal Empire. Well, either a punishment or a punishment.

Technically this is directly after their honeymoon and with that before the Crystal Empire. Sure, I was thinking on putting it differently on the timeline to match up with 'The Spreading Mare', but this scenario fitted best like this.

I'm afraid however that there won't be a punishment. At least I don't see a reason for it. The guards love dominance play, just as much as Cadance loves her submissive play, so there was no harm done. But you could elaborate if you want and share your thoughts on it.

“It’s just like the good old times when we took that four-eyed mare for a ride. She couldn’t walk straight for a week after we were done with her!”

Wait, what? Does this mean that ... No, it can't be ...

Ok, now you got me curious! What are your thoughts here?

Leaving her in the hooves of the whole Zebra population at the end was maybe a little bit excessive though.
Nevertheless, t'was really fun to read

I love excessive! And I was writing Cadance so that she loved it as well! So it is kind of a happy ending for her too!

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I'm afraid however that there won't be a punishment. At least I don't see a reason for it. The guards love dominance play, just as much as Cadance loves her submissive play, so there was no harm done. But you could elaborate if you want and share your thoughts on it.

Well, yeah, that's the point why there will no be punishment. As you said: Cadance loves being dominated. If it only would have been a "heat of the moment"-thing, I could imagine that the Princess of Love would be rather upset about her being treated that roughly.

Ok, now you got me curious! What are your thoughts here?

My first thought was "Wait? They banged Moondancer?". But then I focused on the "when we took"-part, stopped reading for a bit, thought about the story and if that meant that they both knew each other already, which was not mentioned before and revealed shortly after that passage.
Nice plot-twist.

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I was thinking about another four-eyed mare (the nerdy one from the episode Princess Spike) when I wrote this, but Moondancer is a perfect choice too! I was thinking about writing a sequel, or should I say prequel, with Shining and Abioye anyway. And this already gives me a new mare they could 'free' from her inhibitions!

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I was thinking about writing a sequel, or should I say prequel, with Shining and Abioye anyway.

"The Raunchy Adventures of Two Fuckbuddies". Yep, sounds like an interesting Idea.

I guess now that she has this successful "negotiation" under her belt, she'll move on to negotiate with the Diamond Dogs (getting passed around the pack, spending every single minute knotted and stretched to her limit), the dragons (Holy cum inflation, bat-mare!), the Griffons (those poor catbirds need a better outlet for their predatory instincts than greed), etc...

awesome you out did your self again!
dang *mumbles* now how am i going to beat this in my stories?
*still mumbling* dang it could you have put the bar any higher*NOT MUBLEING ANY MORE* OK well good job anyways\
-randomfastreader /rfr
note i'm stealing your short nameing ways (just because rfr is a lot shorter than random fast reader)
oh and my favorite part is
“It’s just like the good old times when we took that four-eyed mare for a ride. She couldn’t walk straight for a week after we were done with her!”
ha couldn't walk straight for a week (wait I still can't walk straight huh)

"..... just for them to drag her violenty into a room and have there way with her....."
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So if shining and Abyoie are fuck buddies does that mean they fucked each other too?