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Dang, so close to one I want to see. But instead of a human ghost it's a cat and instead of a truck it's a tank.
more plz
7141965 Those Who Hunt Elves eh? hehe I support that.
At first when I read the title I thought it had something to do with new Mystery Skulls music animation Freaking Out
7142291 is that a reference to something I'm not getting ?
7142296 no it's not, I don't want to spoil it for anyone (if I can that is) an eighteen wheeler is taken over
7142296 check it out so you can see what I'm talking about
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=tUYM5WNdNGc
You can skip to the ending if you want
10/10 would rather possess this
whatswithjeff.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/07/devastator-brawl-transformers-2007.jpg
So I can become this
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7142354 there will be no transformers involved with this story
i'm this getting this vibe from it
image.wikifoundry.com/image/1/poJHhudfUemf7gEnf9MXYQ24884/GW366H205
7142487 I was wondering when someone would get that there is also another reference in the character. I'll give you a hint it had something to do with Stephen King
7142549
oh okay but my reference is from supernatural
7142549 its Stephen King's Christine
7143510 the irony is delicious isn't it
* slowly raises thumbs *
7143519 yep
Wait, hold on. when did Christine the oldsmobile turned into an Optimus Prime? Mr King wrote something I forgot to read? lol
This seems a lot like the mystery skulls new song, freaking out - music video.
This is a pretty good idea, but the story is kind of sloppy. It's a bit rushed and that makes it a little hard to read. I saw a few spelling errors also, but that was just minor. I suggest finding someone on this site, or someone else like a friend, who would be interested in editing it.
7145166 do you have any recommendations I need all the help I can get
I always had think about that old "Bob der Baumeister" when I was seeing this story, and it is a bit strange for me, but I want to try it.
I honestly thought she was being the Truck for a while.
Why was that insane Trucker suddenly trying to kill the Ponys? I think it was rushed there. Rainbow was attacking and since she could talk withher, shooting would be ovefrreacting I guess. I mean she at least knows it would cause dead.
okay what happened? was she in ghost form in her Truck?, did Pinkie attacked her rusted Pony form? or where was that button to stop the whole truck?
I think this chapter is a bit akward (mostly from the moment of the fight), it could be that I just prefer something else, but I think that some reactions where rather off as well.
Good, more Rainbow punching things, misunderstandings and overreactions.
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This is my fetish
7145218 Well, what you need to do is this. For one, dialogue is good, but less is more. Try not to use it too much or it gets really repetitive. Secondly, make sure you go through your story and check pronouns, that way you make sure you don't accidentally change it into a different point of view. Third, read your story out loud. If you read a work you create you can find places where it might be a little awkward to read. Finally, try to stay away from run on sentences. If it takes more than two lines, then usually it's a run-on. That's all I can say, good luck with the next chapter!
I can see them there in the millions and they are all thumbs
7145218 when i clicked on the link, i was fully expecting this:files.supernaturaljess81074.webnode.com/200000612-82d3883d01/CyrusTruck.jpg
7145218 WHY WHY YOU CANCEL STORY WHY!?!?!?!?!?!
GOD DAMMIT JIM! IM A READER NOT A DOCTOR!
see what I did there?
noooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!! This was the only good story that used this concept I could find!!! While the story was rushed it was still great!!!! Waaaaahahahaha. (I would put rarity here but i am on my shitty little phone so.)
7145828 Don't you hate it when your comments don't get a response?
What is that episode?
7387319 I the the one with Ivan the terrible
I say go with Maxine. Like Maximum Overdrive kind of thing.
Ever seen "Ice Road Truckers", try using Lisa Kelly. She has a pony as well as a full-size horse and she's in to extreme sports like dirt biking, she also has other animal's at here home. she's tackled "The Death Road" in South-America, the mountain passes in India as well as the hell that is India's traffic, all of these while dealing w/ CRAZY BUS DRIVERS!! She also dealt w/ MOUNTIAN PASSES in which there were Blasting Charges setup and she had to go right through the BLAST ZONE!! On top of that she's driven the Alaska Ice Road's and the Canadian Ice Road's which are more than 2X as DANGEROUS as the Alaska Ice Road's.
I Recommend You Watch The Show A Little of Both IRT and IRT:Deadliest Road's to Get A Good Grasp on Her Character.
E-E-EPIC RAP BATTLES OF HISTORY!!!!!!!!!!
7387337 Idk about names but can u write a story where a Male teen possesses a dodge charger that's similar to this but different. Plzz
7642156 I have a title-The "Charging" Spirit.. Get cause the charger---No OK I'll quit
Any news on the reboot?