I write short romance and adventure stories. I post update blogs. I've been a Brony ever since July 2014.
When you moved to a new town. You started to go to the high school in Canterlot and you were greeted by seven girls but one of them caught your eye and that girl was Sunset Shimmer.
You X Sunset Shimmer
First Equestria Girls romance story
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Well, this was a rushed but nice story
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Thanks.
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Thank you.
The story was pretty great, although I thought the kiss at the end was a bit out of left field, as was Sunset's crush on the reader. I mean, I know that I'm hot, but I'm pretty sure Sunset Shimmer wouldn't crush on my. So for that, and a few grammatical errors here and there, I give this story an A-.
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Thank you for stating your opinion and enjoying the story.
7788073 Thank you for enjoying my comment. My sister always says that nobody likes critics, but I think that, so long as it's constructive criticism (meaning I don't just say I love or hate the story without providing insight as to why), it's okay.
This is so rushed, so rushed... SO. DAMN. RUSHED
Listen, I love the concept of the story and the main character (anon/me/thisishurtingmybrain) seems like a chill dude, but it's just... so rushed, not even after 24 hours both him and Sunset are crushing on each other and smooching and all that. and I knew this would be a rushed story from Rainbow's first line ''I'm going to take you to my friends''
like, no backstory of the character, no development of his crush?, nothing?!
Listen, with a bit more work this story would be great, but as of now it's just a rushed mess of a story
Sunset and Anon sitting in a tree! XD
Nice short Fluff-fic!
What? A guy gets invited to an all-girls sleep over? That just shattered my suspension of disbelief with a baseball bat.
This is so rush.
K.I.S.S.I.N.G
Would've been lovely if it werent so rushed and so short.