The Shimmer In Her Eye

by CaringSlash

First published

You have a crush on Sunset Shimmer. Will you confess your feelings to her?

When you moved to a new town. You started to go to the high school in Canterlot and you were greeted by seven girls but one of them caught your eye and that girl was Sunset Shimmer.

You X Sunset Shimmer

First Equestria Girls romance story

She Has That Shimmer In Her Eye

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You've moved to Canterlot and your attending there high school: Canterlot High. When you went to school at Canterlot for the first day you were greeted by seven nice girls.

"Your new here aren't you?" A girl with rainbow hair says.

"Yep. This is my first day." You say acting a little nervous.

"Well it's nice to meet you I'm Rainbow Dash." She shakes your hand.

You say your name. "It's nice to meet you too Rainbow."

She grabs you by your hand. "Come on! I got some other friends and I'm going to take you to them."

"Okay." Within a minute you are taken to Rainbows friends.

She says your name and starts to tell you there names. "This is Pinkie Pie, Applejack, Fluttershy. Rarity, Twilight, and Sunset Shimmer." They all started to surround you with greetings.

"Hi! It's nice to meet you we should throw a party." Pinkie Pie says.

"Hello there darling!" Rarity says.

"Hi." You awkwardly say.

"Canterlot high is a great place to- wait did you hear about all the things that happened here?"

"No. What happened here?"

"Nothing important darling. We tell you on a different day."

"Hi there sugarcube." Applejack says.

"Hi."

"Your going to have lots of fun here cause a lot of things happen."

"Ok."

"Um hi it's nice to um meet you." Fluttershy says to you.

You instantly realize what's up with her. "You must really shy huh?"

"Yes. Just a little." She replys sheepishly.

"Canterlot is a place you'll never forget." Sunset Shimmer says. You just stare at her like you hypnotized. She starts to blush. "Uh hello anyone home." She starts to wave her hand in front of your face which causes you to break from the trance.

"Huh what."

"You were staring off into space. Are you okay?"

"Yep um." Your face starts to turn red and Sunset takes notice.

"Your face is red."

You feel your face and it's warm and you know why. You have a crush on Sunset Shimmer. "Uh yeah." You slowly start backing away and bolted to bathroom. "I have a crush on Sunset." You say to yourself. "But how I'm I going to tell her. Boy I screwed up big time."

"Hey, are you okay in there?" Sunset asks you.

"Yes I'm just trying to relax."

"Okay. Cause you seemed nervous in front of me."

"I get a little nervous around new people."

"I see. Fluttershy has that problem. Well come back when your chilled out okay."

"Alright." A few seconds later you hear Rainbows voice.

"I think the new guy has a crush on you." Rainbow says to Sunset.

"No he doesn't Rainbow. He's just nervous."

"He's being nervous around you so he has to have a crush on you."

"Well he might."

"I see you blushing Sunset. Do you have a crush on him."

"Let's go Rainbow."

"Why."

"Let's go Rainbow!" Then you hear dramatic silence. Does she have a crush on you too?

Invitation to a slumber party

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You finally have the courage to walk out of the bathroom and when you walked out Pinkie Pie hands you something. "What is this?" You ask.

"It's an invitation to my slumber party tonight. Will you come?"

"We've only been friends for a few hours.....but okay I'll come."

"Yay!" Pinkie Pie bounces away.

You read the invitation and it says your suppose to be there at 6:30 and it's at Pinkies house with her address at the bottom. "Okay I can get a shirt and pajama shorts and bring my phone with me just in case anything bad happens." You walk off to continue the rest of the day.


It's the end of the day and your ready for Pinkie Pie's slumber party. You head over to Pinkies house and Pinkie lets you in and leads you to her bedroom where everyone is. You see Sunset Shimmer but to avoid screwing up things again you sit next to someone else.

"Tonight were going to play-" Pinkie gets interrupted by Rainbow whispering something into her ear. Rainbow smiles evily to you and Sunset Shimmer. "Truth or Dare."

"Oh no." Rarity says.

"Lets just hope Rainbow doesn't ask what I think she's going to ask." You say to yourself. For the first few questions ask on Truth or Dare until it was Rainbow's turn.

"Sunset Truth or Dare?" Rainbow says

"Dare."

"I dare you to confess your feelings to that guy." Rainbow points directly at you.

All of the girls gasp, you and Sunset look at each other, and sigh in defeat. "Okay. Can you girls please leave the room for a second." They all get up and leave and now it's just you and Sunset alone.

There's dramatic silence for a few minutes until Sunset breaks the silence. "So...do you have a crush on me?"

"Uh.....yeah.....do you have a crush on me?"

Sunset starts to blush. "I hate to admit it but when I first saw you I thought you were..........cute."

"When I first saw you I couldn't take my eyes off of you. You were beautiful." You cause yourself to blush.

"You think I'm beautiful."

"Yes I d-" Sunset tackles you and kisses you. You and Sunset stay embraced and kiss for over a minute before finally breaking the kiss and being released from the embrace.

"I love you." Sunset says to you.

"I love you too Sunset." You hear a sound from outside of the room.

"Rainbow I can't believe you got them two together." Twilight says.

"Don't be surprised Twilight." Rainbow says.