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This is the story of a man named Alex Roberts. He is near the end of his life and he has rediscovered My Little Pony, Friendship is Magic. What will his rediscovery teach him?


This is a story answering the question, what if Alex Roberts from the Memoirs of a Reality Jumper, had never jumped. This story is a completely stand alone story, you don't need to read Memoirs to know what's going on.

Thanks to TyrellTheDragon for the last minute pre-read / edit.

Special thanks to Spect for the new Old Alex art!

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 48 )

The picture scared the shit out of me when I loaded the page.:rainbowderp:

I this... OMG this really made me feel something. IT was so sad :fluttercry: But the ending brought peace to my mind...

Hm, this is more like what if something had erased Alex from Equestria and kept him from jumping. You could actually integrate this in the main story as a short arc. A Twilight Zone kind of episode.

abso-fucking-lutely loved this.

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Where? I like to correct errors.

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Thanks! I'll take a quick look. :facehoof:

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Fixed!! Thanks for the help!

"This is what allows her to be creative, . " Think you missed something there :rainbowlaugh:

Loved it, loved everything about it.

Third sentence at the top of the page it says "Yet, despite this being a warn, perfect spring day" should be warm. Other than that great side story :twilightsmile:

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Thanks! For both! :pinkiehappy:

Hmmm, not sure I like this one. It's ok for a one shot but...I don't know, didn't do it for me.

This is, a great idea! love it!

I don't see the picture. Aside from that it is well written. It reminds me of some other stories I read on something both creepy, yet ends in a bittersweet sorta way that gets a bit sweeter as one thinks about it. I think I saw a story concept like this in the anime, Robot Carnival.

Anyways, it was a nice short story.

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It's an awesome picture. There is a URL in the description to the original. An amazing piece of photoshop. :moustache:

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Oh, you mean the title picture. I thought you were referring to a picture in the chapter itself. Whoops. That is impressive rendering.

Alright,you got me, I shed some tears, beautiful.

Holy Shit, that was...
damn.
I don't really have a way to describe it, but that was amazing.

I just have to say, you are an exceptional writer, and I can't wait to see more of your work in future!

WOW. :pinkiegasp:

...

KEEP WRITING!

how to say you pierced the soul of... wait...

"SHEDDING MANLY TEARS" :pinkiesad2:

Whats 'Memoirs of a Reality Jumper'? Can you elaborate.

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That's the main story all of my side stories are based on. The Memoirs Of A Reality Jumper is a continuing story / soap opera / adventure / slice of life thing I have a blast writing and is fairly popular (I think). Now with thirty chapters, updated weekly-ish (less in the summer).

While this story was Alex not going to Equestria (and Dash reaching out to find him), the main story is him in Equestria.

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Oh I see thanks for telling me I think I will read these stories afterall.

798216 HOLY SHIT! I need to hide again, FUCK!

So there will be a happy end...ah so glad to know. Thank you very much.
:coolphoto:

DAWWWWWWWWWWW!

He went back when he died! Very twilight zone-esqe, LOVED it.

so does he end up back in equestria in his youth when he dies or?.. loved it again tech btw :D

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He never went in the first place, but their love was so strong it crossed time and realities. In the end, they were reunited. :rainbowkiss:

And, thank you! I write to entertain.

:fluttercry: This was beautiful :pinkiesad2:

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Thank you. This is actually my favourite side stories. One day, I want to rewrite it and cause people to have their chests explode from sadness.

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Okay, I was under the impression that she somehow stole his soul and took him to Equestria, but you're saying that he ended up being reincarnated to another Equestria where there's another Rainbow Dash that had knew him and had been waiting for him there?

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Basically. This Rainbow Dash was being treated for a major depression by Twilight, using a spell that gives the patent happy memories. In this case, This Dash saw and felt what the Dash from the Memoirs Universe experienced. She realized she wanted her own Alex and the closest Alex she could find to the Ales she saw with this old guy. Twilight was able to create a spell for her friend that would transfer his essence (or soul, if you will) into a blank body. In this case, just in time before the old Alex died.

Please note that depression is treated like this in ponies, not humans. :twilightoops:

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So Twilight has been using this same spell on her to control that robot body from time to time?

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Basically, yeah. The more Twilight let Dash control it, the more it messed with it's hardware. Until the only decisions the robot could make were ones that Dash would make.

THE FEELS!

Manly tears have been shed

Right in the feels!!:fluttercry:

very nice story, I'm waiting for more similar, good job👍👌:twilightsheepish:

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