Sergeant Grimm (a dude) and Corporal Tali (not a dude).
Two American soldiers and best friends (without benefits) who are in a losing fight against insectoid invaders (not a crossover, sorry... and they're not alien ants).
One being of Chaos (maybe two).
A plan that boggles even his mind, or her mind, that could end well or might end the ponyverse for a few seconds.
Follow the tale of two people, turned ponies, who have no idea how to act in modern pony society, yet have to make a living on the fringes of Equestria while carrying knowledge of human society and technology that are mostly useless in a quadrupedal world without hands, opposable digits, and a population that doesn't believe science can take them to the moon, much less that pens are more efficient than a quill.
And what's up with parchment? There are more than enough trees...
Note: Contains language American parents will fret over. 
Looks good, can't wait for more.
Shouldn't this story have a human tag?
this is an interesting story so far and I am looking forward to see more of this story in the near future. One thing that I alway been amazed by your stories is how you manage to write such comical and random banter between your characters, how do you do that?
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Experience. When I was in the military I was the joker.
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It does now! I forgot about that...
Of all the things... right?
You know these are one of the times where I would happily smack the author's head for not at least have a basic understanding in color theory, so that they don't produce horribly clashing colors that would in fact hurt my retinas if I actually saw the oc; heck even imagining such chromatic sins against Vincent van Gogh necrotic soul would curl any professional designers hair; blue and red (or orange and blue for that matter)should never be put together with out a least a third color to attenuate the such a clashing visual effects.
ignoring that last part the chapter was good it seem that the two now have Discord and Eris as neighbors and will be their instructors for the foreseeable future. I wander why those two jokers are doing this anyway? I know that they will have their fun with this for a time , but why would bother doing sticking with this and take the trouble of teaching these former humans how to use their new anatomy?
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I don't like the colors SO much myself, but it's a collab. The other writer/advisor wants his OC to look like an orange with colors of the american flag in his mane.
Mine is Tali. Simple brick red with a brown mane.
http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/603892/a-twisted-change-new-story-collab
6989035 please don't bother to change the colors for my sake, in fact you can even make it part of a running gag of the story. I wont change my opinion on the colors, but this said I wouldn't say that their is nothing good that can come out of it.
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Colors dont change, his OC happens to be an American orange.
6989118 what the hell is American orange?
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An orange pony with a mane and tail the colors red white and blue.
For an E-rated story, there's sure a lot of war and profanity.
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Great point!
I'll teen it up.
Thanks, kinda forgot about that during the cowriting.
7001173 A-OK now.
dark souls?
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Just a fun story; no planned crossover.
Dark Souls is a lame game, in my opinion, and not worth copying. (Insert typical complaints about infinite deaths and little gains)