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I am pretty certain you can't trigger a soulgaze with your penis.
Please do not attempt to prove or disprove this hypothesis.
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/Cue immature giggling
What did I just read? Really what did I?.... You know what I'm done for now.
Later-BFBL
11 months later...
"It's a girl!"
"Ouch. My foal hole."
"IF WE MOVE QUICK WE CAN REATTACH TARNISHES FORE LEG!"
Maud's realization this chapter reminds me of a slow-setting realization of mine: that even though I praise rationalism and learning, I am just as capable of feeling uncomfortable about ideas and some form of superstition (and other things like tribalism) as others are. Perhaps more guarded about it or not as strongly, but it clearly happens.
Overall there was a lot of "I thought I wasn't too emotional but turns out that's pretty wrong over the years of my life. For both 'positive' and 'negative' emotions.
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What's wrong, exactly?
...
*Ponders possible story idea*
Nice chapter man!
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Maturity is overrated.
Excellent chapter, as always
7424739 oh nothing really. I was... Well you know it was... My brain is dead right now. Had a long day at work guess I really did not think it through. It was a good chapter
Oh, I'm sure you're content to practice, Tarnish
Oh, and...
Really Maud? I mean, seriously? This is so damn sexual at this point it's pretty much a physical substance and can be used to carve dildos, and you still have to be just the tiniest bit coy and go with innuendo rather than just straight ask him to rut the living hell out of you?
In all seriousness, another cute chapter, and it's nice to see them settling into the idea of foals. Additionally, Maud's admissions of her own prejudices towards the unknown-in this case Tarnish's development as a full fledged unicorn-is an interesting development, and some nice growth for her character as well. Although, I'm not convinced she's not wrong to feel worried-the Blue Centaur Orb seems like a benevolent force, but it's displaced by thousands of years and seems to be coloring Tarnish's perceptions to the point that he hasn't even realized it. It may have good intentions, but the path laid to hell can be filled with "good" intentions.
What innuendo?
7424762 in case you do write that story... That poor bastard
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That poor bastard indeed, just thinking about it gives me shivers
In an abstract sense, the two do become one flesh--that flesh being their offspring.
A nice deep bit of mellow reflection into the shared soul perspective.
If I recall correctly, Maud's mum said that her dad was stoic like her, but he became more emotional after he became a father.
Methinks Maud's getting ready.
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In-you-end-o!
7424762 ouch it burns