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You know... I've always wanted to see a character do that, go into the pocket space of their bag, I've never seen it, until now. I've always wondered if that was possiblbe, hehe, seems like it is.
NIcely written man, good job.
ONWARD!
What... it just seemed apropos.
Once again you have surpassed my expectations. I am still floored. He the shear amount that you have written. And is an impressively short period of time. We'll wishes for the future and please try to take care of yourself. We all worry about you and want your happiness first.
So... What is up with Maud?
Hate to say it, but Equestria makes crappy bags of holding. Sure they're roomy...but they don't negate weight? Kinda takes away half the point of a bag of holding...
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Anti-theft feature. A skilled unicorn would just negate the weight themselves.
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My inner RPG wizard scoffs at this and thinks an Iron Cobra set to attack anyone who opens the bag without the proper keyword is a much better security system.
Good chapter. Hmm interesting workings on a bag of holding.
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Maybe this bag of holding was somepony's student project. Maybe they went on to create magnificent artifacts.
Or, you know, they died in an animal den somewhere after falling in and breaking their front legs. Who knows?
so it's bigger on the inside than it is on the outside?? hmmm that seems familiar....
7193403 sorry, my assumption is the only way we are gonna travel in time is forward! Onwards and Upwards!
For some reason this chapter made me view ponies like hobbits.
I'm a little curious, why did you split the storey into 2 different fics
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Because I learned something from The Chase... people get SKEERED when they see a million word fic.
Odd thought of the day. Flamingo = Need from the Heralds of Valdemar series by Mercedes Lackey?
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Ahh I see, the only reason I even found the chase was because it was soooo long lol
Maud is, without question, the undisputed, undefeated queen of straight delivery. Not even Celestia can give a line with such conviction.
7193756 The monumental word count of 'The Chase' is what attracted me, at last a decent epic long story so well liked it has to be good and is still being written. But I'm curious to where Maud's sudden revolution enthusiasm is coming from?
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She was in the mood to tease Tarnish. Isn't it obvious?
I could see Tarnish singing back later in the story, "We WILL, we WILL, rock you!"
And then Pebble is born.
7194204 Starting into this chapter with that affront rattled me as much as Tarnish, she is a clever, devious one isn't she.
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That was the desired effect that I hoped for. I wanted readers to go 'WTF!' and feel exactly what Tarnish was feeling. See, you got to stand in his horseshoes for a moment You got to BE Tarnish.
7194246 Just shows you are a magnificent writer, keep up the good work!!
7194246 ...Waiting to see Celestia get into the joke. "Yes! Fight the Power!"
I think it would lead to excellent development as a couple if Tarnish caught Maud in a comprising situation and thought she had cheated on him. Having him figure out how to tell when she is being sincere and her learning how to ever so slightly give tiny signals that she is, would, in my opinion, lead them to a stronger relationship. As of right now, one would assume that if one of them were caught in a compromising situation, it would be Tarnish. Special kind of mind twist if it were the other way around. It would also lead to some possible hilarity when they relate the story to others. Just a thought.
Also, I would like to see the aftermath of some random kinky thing they tried, to be FAR from enjoyable and see how they both respond to it. A clop scene somewhere would not be unwelcome either. IF you do one, I would love to read about their awkward first time under the stars on the rock farm. If not, not biggie. I still love this story.
7193385 The way I read it is that the Bag of Holding has TEMPORARY weightless properties. Once that limit is broken, then ALL of the weight comes back in crushing force.
It's like a bridge. It can keep a ton of weight up all day long. It doesn't matter if there's 2 people on a bridge or two cars. HOWEVER, once that weight limit is surpassed, then all of the weight comes crashing down.
Though maybe it's something completely different and it just condenses the items into a smaller space, but all of the mass in still the same, much like Ant Man or The Atom.
.....you know what you did....
keep doing it.
That last bit about what Tarnish wanting to be away from civilization said about him as a pony reminded me of a bit from one of Lee Child's Jack Reacher books. In one of the books, Reacher puts forward this idea that in every generation, there are some people who feel it in them to leave the group and strike out on their own. He speculates that its some evolutionary attempt to ensure inbreeding doesn't occur. That bit came back to me as I read this lol