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I will be honest...If I was to witness it...It wouldn't be that bad. But, looking at it from Tarnish's view point, from your words. It makes me really squeamish...
Reality sure is a slap in the face.
This was a good chapter. (Good, but very messy. ick. )
There was a lot of positive character development with both Tarnish and Limestone. They both realized something about them selves and the world at large. As for Maud, I don't think she came to any new conclusions, but we the readers, learned more about her, how she see the world and her place within it as well: that can be a nasty place to be sometimes and ponies like the rangers are needed and sometimes they need to be hard as well.
Tarnish is such a Puss-y
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I read it while eating breakfast. Fun times.
Of all the things to read while eating some oatmeal. Shudder
Ive had to squeeze th pus out before. The noise really is the worst thing about it. But i feel Maud is just immune to sqeem, on the outside. Like almost everything else.
Grossgrossgrossgrossgrossgrossgrossgross GROSS!
7259999 cept for the fact it wzs mentioend they were specifically diamond dog sized shovels.
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Diamond dog blacksmiths make everything diamond dog sized. Why make things pony sized? Too much brain effort. Bark.
*gag*
7260804 Here's hoping Trixie will get better soon--we need her healthy for the Princess Twilight Sparkle's School for Fantastic Foals and Trixie Lulamoon and the Horrendous Hypothesis!
...oh! And because it's the right thing to hope for too...
I wonder if he's crying due to the work he has done on Trixie alone, or rather if it is a catalyst.
Tarnish isn't the malicious sort, and I wonder if he isn't subconsciously doubting or coming to terms with what he did to the Dogs.
In fact, I wonder how many will die? Burns get infected, and the dog's medicinal abilities are doubtful. There's a very real chance he killed several people. Maybe not at that moment, but they will die. Even the violence of his actions could be getting to him.
7261621 that is only issue with bouncing back and forth within a timeline. Also part of teh reason I disliked the Star Wars prequels beyond details alot of things you already knew.. In this case unless kudzuhaiku brings in a doppelganger we know Trixie will recover. Events like this will have an impact and probably are a part of what wore Trixie not not counting just traveling
7261747 I don't see it that way. I see Kudzohaiku's work like that of William Faulkner's fictional county of Yoknapatawpha, where there are multiple stories going on set in different points in time that intertwine. The Weediverse has become just that.
Yes we know that Trixie will live to help raise Sumac, but we're seeing how she got there. It's like reading about someone's biography--you know of the person (that's why you picked up the book), but you want to know what happened in their life.
After all, in Romeo and Juliet, we're told the entire plot line at the very begining of the play--but it's a great story still...the Star Wars Prequels just sucked, and that's why people don't like them, not because we knew what had happened in A New Hope.
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Faulkner is one of my faves...
7261798 Love his structure and story-telling style--always thought he was an influence on you. Glad to know I was right.
Mmmmmm... puuuuuuus. Delicious...
*throws up*
Nice job man!
But Limestone still pulled through and didn't run away, even though it was insane and dangerous. Proud of you, Limey.
I love your version of her, by the way. A whole lot more than what we were presented in the show.
And somewhere, Pinkie Pie was hit with a case of the shivers for this comparison.
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Meanwhile in Ponyville:
Pinkie stared at the frosting tube, her face green and eyes wide with horror. "It's like pus coming out from a particularly gruesome wound..."
she evicierated a hydra from the inside....after leting it swallow her
i think this goes without saying at this point