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I wonder how Tarnish will cope...
I hope this ends happily. Well, I know it ends alright, as Pebble is alive and so are they, but I mean Tarnish's mental state.
That's gonna be one hell of an orgasm.
Very interesting chapter if hints of Lord of the Rings in the crown getting heavier and heavier
7685313 downside of multiple stories already published that aren't all in teh same time period
7685332 I know right, it kinda ruins the mood.
What should happen is kudz should make an official timeline.
That'd be cool.
Ah HAH! I can believe that what happened while he carried the crown scarred Tarnish in ways that still make him fragile years later. That would explain the continuing self esteem issues perfectly. I don't think I blame him. But he needs to sit back and remember the he succeeded and no one can take that from him.
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Go and check the forums.
Not gonna lie. I would have told Helianthus to fuck off. I'm sorry, but, were I in Tarnish's position (and I hope to God I never somehow end up there), Helianthus's comment sounds almost patronizing.
"Stiff Upper lip?" Sure Helianthus, I'll definitely do that while carrying an artifact of reality warping pure evil-it's not like that's not what I'm trying to do.
In fact, based on my own real world reactions to fear, I would probably be cursing and damning everyone and everything around me with ever greater creativity.
Yep.Reality is breaking.
I have to wonder how Discord fits into this and what Grogar thinks of the Spirit of Chaos, past villainous version or current "redeemed" version.
Beautiful in that you're creating new life? Perhaps. However, beautiful in the pleasu-yeah I can't even finish that. Both Tarnish and Maud are royally fucked up, bruised, bleeding, and have multiple bones broken. Climax might be achieved-maybe even on both sides, but this will likely be the most unpleasant sex either of them have ever had in their entire lives. In fact, I suspect that Maud is going to have to go out of her way to even make Tarnish climax and employ every dirty trick she's learned to do so. Not even to mention the psychological damage both have experienced in the past few hours-days really- and the decidedly non-erotic situation they find themselves in.
In fact, I cannot see how this would be anything other than the most unpleasant sex of their lives. This is the lowest point, and they will always have the knowledge that, on other times where their sex was mediocre, at least it wasn't as bad as this was.
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It has also left him over zealously protective of his princesses, leading to his mistake.
Will there be a third story in this universe?? I love these characters you've created.
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http://www.fimfiction.net/group/210355/weed-world
There is over a dozen now.
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From time to time, the Stiff Upper Lip Society members remind each other what they struggle for. Think of it more as a secret codeword of encouragement.
7685349 I actually figured that, and I do get what she was trying to do. I was just saying what I would do in this situation, which would involve every creative curse I've ever heard or contemplated alongside probably pissing myself.
As it was, so it shall be
The only good things coming from this is the fact that they will get a child and grogar will be weaker. Plus an immortal fluttershy. That is always a plus. Praise the fluttershy. And tarnished teapot for taking this on and surviving.
This arc could be its own metal album.
Whoa, that chapter was intense. Tarnish has come a long way, and it looks like he's still got a long way to go.
Hm, 'annoyingly bright'? Or some leftover words?
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Missing D.
I have mixed feelings...
On one hand, I regret not picking up this story sooner. It and its prequel is fantastic and this right there is there very reason I want to read more of it.
On the other hand, I finally caught up and I'm so very eager to read more but so very sad it's coming to an end so quickly.
It feels as if his journey had only just begun yesterday, banished from Ponyville to this very moment.
Whatever is about to happen, I'm glad to have stuck around for it all.
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Oh, now I see it.
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I think it got edited out by accident.
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There is more!
http://www.fimfiction.net/group/210355/weed-world
I like how the last scene there is an inversion of the picture used for the story. You know, not counting the injuries and stuff.
I was a bit overeager in my previous comments, but I loved the different personalities Tarnish met during his journey. They weren't invasive, had their own agenda but made sure to give this story some life.
I loved how, despite everything, this story wasn't centered around Twilight and her friends, grabbing a hold of landmarks mentioned in the series, making them come alive for both our lovebirds to explore.
I love how Discord, until then, had no hand in whatsoever and how poison joke isn't just a manifestation of his whims but a way for this world to fight against oddities to put it lightly.
I'm sad that so little plot devices were used or many characters were only introduced but once throughout the journey. However, it leaves me hopeful that there might be a sequel where some of them might just resurface, having their use in some shape or form.
I might have said it earlier, but Thank you again, I really loved all of it.
Kinda wanna see a little 1 chapter spin-off of the weed-verse gender-bent edition now for some reason.
god, i wonder what poor tarnish is gonna think when, in a few months, hole are gonna end up torn open in equestria again. poor guy will think he failed.
course it is just gonna be h twilight doing stupid things.
Congrats Tarnished, you summoned Cuthulu, and lived. Among a shit ton of other stuff that you somehow lived through.
Sunset showing up was funny.
Thinking more about it i want to see how that conversation goes.
Sunset! Considering you probably will write to Celestia, would you question what you just saw? And if so, what specifically would you ask?
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Sunset: We exchange letters regularly. Princess Celestia is a little bit better about sending letters than I am. I, uh, get caught up in stuff. I'm sure she'll tell me all about it. Not along ago, I had some problems with a few tears in reality myself. I really need to write her more often.
7685836 hey Kudz, does this always on Q&A apply to the Verse', or just these 2 stories?
And that reply reminds me, i need to see EQG 3 and 4, haven't done that yet.
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The whole verse, more or less.
7685871 sweet! I didn't actually know that. I will
abuseuse this knowledge well.Wheeeeeeeeew... damn Tarny meboyo. What a mess.
Nice job!
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Oooo. Guess it'll be some time before we get to that point in his story. I have no idea what it might be (right now, later I might get one).
Tangentially, I have wondered if Fluttershy's ability to communicate with animals is a druid ability.
hi Pebble
He made Celestia watch.
He made Princess Celestia, the living embodiment of the Sun, the mother of the first ponies of Equestria, effectively God herself, watch himself and Maud do the horizontal mambo.
Tarnished Teapot might have just stopped reality from crumbling and prevented Armageddon, but I honestly think that's the most badass thing he's accomplished today.
Hell, she knew about the Manticore, she probably watched that too judging from what she told Tarnish in the Astral Realm. It'd be kind of funny if the prim and proper Celestia was actually a closet voyeur.
Flamingo lives
It might just be my imagination, but it seems an opportunity has manifested itself for this universe to cross with or at least glimpse upon the chase verse.
and Maledico, called it!
All's well that ends well...
Maud is imbued with druid fluid.
Hey, if Tarnish's magic can purge corruption, why they didn't de-stoned that crippled alicorn, and then give him a healthy dose of Tarnish's magic? And if it will make him Poison Joked, a cup of tea or bubble bath can fix it. And without wing and horn he is not "dangerously crazy", he's just crazy and helpless. They could try to heal his mind. And if they fail collect his seed (or ovums, if it's a mare) and with a little help of science and volunteers make lesser alicorns become a thing in Equestria again.
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One, it works on himself, and two, he can't cure madness.
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When Tarnish was a little colt, it worked on others just fine. And occasionally on him too (hi, manticoress!) - so why don't just shoot freshly unpetrified loony in the leg with raw, Poison Joke certified magic from it's licensed source - Tarnish's horn?
And "crazy" is ok, maybe they could make his/her "crazy" become less torturous for him/her, it's good enough too. (it wouldn't be Tarnish doing it, it would be doctors, psychiatrists)
And genetic samples, without corruption, will let them restore the fourth pony race, it would be great!
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His poison joke influence isn't the same as protection from Grogar's corruption.
And that stone alicorn has had about ten thousand years to listen to Grogar's song in the dark. Freeing him from stone would be a terrible idea. Just pause and think for a moment about what Grogar's influence did to an unworthy vessel.
Now, imagine releasing something keen to do Grogar's will.
Bad idea. Such a bad idea.
See, I really don't want to explain this because this sort of thing is better left to the imagination.
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Then why don't just turn him to gravel? This will stop mind torture.
Poison Joke magic purge corruption. It could work on this poor one too.
Or turn him back into flesh, de-corrupt him, then dreamless sleep spell, collect samples, and then stone him in dreamless sleep state. This will stop torture and let them re-create lesser alicorn pony race at the same time.
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Being an immortal alicorn, reducing him to gravel would free his spirit to wander. Bad result.
And I know you seem really focused on alicorn spunk, but you don't seem to be taking a hint that HE IS THOROUGHLY CORRUPTED.
Anything that comes from him would carry Grogar's taint.
Anyhow, I would have really been much happier leaving all of this as unknown stuff, as horror when left to the imagination is far more horrifying,
Edit: Did you ever stop to consider that he was left there as bait?
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He's immortal, not lesser one?
I'm focused on the opportunity of re-creating alicorns, duh =) It would be an interesting addition for your stories, with so much potential!.. Sorry if I'm too persistent with it =(
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He isn't immortal like Celestia or Luna, but he is designed to survive the ages. He's difficult to kill, ages slowly, and is immensely powerful.
And if he was somehow returned to flesh, he would continue his transformation to a draconequus. He's not an alicorn any more.
Oh look! A happy ending!
That's not allowed, Mr Grogar. You are not allowed that kind of power when you're dead.