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“You'll never amount to anything."
“It's all a waste of time."
“You're nothing.”
The monster's words course through Rarity's veins like poison, but were they true? As the two of them face off in her room, she's powerless to stop the resulting despair from taking hold of her heart. With her will to fight slipping, Rarity knows that this isn't a fight she can win on her own.
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6805413
Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it! *Humbly accepts cookie*
I liked it. Definatly a sad tale, but an interesting one. A pleasure to read. Also I liked how it is set before S1 starts.
Take a like. You deserve it for such a great story!
Good story. There aren't that many Rarity stories out there.
I like this. Good job.
6805930
Glad you thought it was interesting. Yeah, I thought it would be a good idea to set the story before S1.
Thanks for reading!
6806005
It's true Rarity doesn't seem to get as much love as the other girls. Such a shame.
Thanks for reading!
6806043
Thank you!
6806005 what? I wrote a FANTASTIC story fearing Rarity!
6807093 She doesn't appear as often as the other five. This is not to say she isn't popular, but I get the sense that Rarity's a challenge to write for. Probably less likely to get into antics than her friends.
6807411 hmmm.. Interesting.
Excellent portrayal of self-doubt. This was a very relatable topic to many people. The monster is Rarity's own portrayal of doubt in herself, and only when she gained confidence in herself did the monster retract. It remains within her, but as long as she has the confidence to succeed, the monster can't win
8894424
Thank you for this lovely comment! That is exactly right.
8899516
Btw, you mind if I read this on my channel? Credit is always given to the author
8899526
I'd love that! Thank you, and thank you for asking. Feel free to send me a link to it when it's up! Also, would it be possible to add a link to the story in the video's summary just in case someone wants to read it?
8899562
Always do
8899690
Awesome! I'm looking forward to the video
8899979
Three months later;
Good story ^^ https://youtu.be/xWR5CLLTe2Y
8899979
https://youtu.be/xWR5CLLTe2Y
9119557
Thank you!
9119638
Oh my gosh, I listened to your reading, and I loved it! You did an excellent job creating the mood. Thank you for performing the reading. It always makes me happy when someone likes one of my stories enough to read it on Youtube!
9123532
This story is a great example to many who struggle with depression. Thank you for making this as a way to help others!
No problem