Sulliman
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Wat.
Great story. Very well done.
Not bad, not bad.
me gusta
lol
wait a minute.
*notices human tag*
ohgodwhy.jpeg
In all seriousness, I did not notice the human tag first time around.
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I'm not sure if I'm happy or horrified.
Then again she wasn't really your daughter, so that makes it seem less incesty.
This wasn't bad at all. Human x Pony, who gives a damn, anyway? It was a nice story and the sex was only out of a father/daughter relationship and pure caring.
...You know, I can't believe I just fucking defended this. O_O
pretty gud stowy you getz 1 like
ಠ_ಠ Damnit... WHAT AM I BECOMING
EDIT: "My mind was tearing itself apart."
I see what you did there. The room.
Then she said, "Hoof me! Hoof me so hard!"
I thought that the whole time.
I don't think ill be able to think about p***y the same way again.
Vaginas don't swell up like wtf tho
701847 Actually, during the late stages of the Estrus cycle, the vaginal area will begin to swell. Plus she was rubbing it all the time, so that made it swell up more.
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........
Not sure if want.
What happens when you put Beating the heat, Scootalove, and My Little Dashie in a blender.
The results are sour, with a sweet aftertaste. Fav'd my good sir
Charming, adorable, sexy, and funny all at the same time. Well done!
There's absolutely no gripe I have with this fic. It's definitely a charming one, and I applaud you.
The best is remaind in silent
Same here. I felt it was, a little bit wrong. But it was sooooo good.
WAIT A MINUTE.
WASN'T THIS EXACT SAME STORY DONE WITH BEFORE WITH RAINBOW DASH?
Well...it's not great but it's not bad either.
I dunno.
plz no
Nice work on improving the pacing.
............................................Was? (What in German)
Okay..I gotta say that Scootaloo is my favorite, which is why I looked at this. I don't enjoy clopfics or gore (killing ponies) whatsoever, but the writing style is good, I'll give you that. I wish to see more of your writing style, just focused on other..less mature fics. You have great grammer and I can't find any spelling mistakes. So basically, keep on writing, I'd be glad to read more of your work that is in other categories.
702410 You can blame my friend for making me write a clop. He is giving me lessons and is only making me do clop because I've been uncomfortable about writing it. Thanks for the feedback, and I hope you'll enjoy whatever I put out next(if my friend can get his mind off clop)
all in all great story, i found it very enjoyable
Oh no, how did I miss the Human tag?
My thoughts threw out the story
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Thumbs up for questioning social ethics.
@Sulliman
Oh wow, I did not know it worked that way..thanks for the lesson?(hawkward moment)
No but seriously, this was a pretty good story and has potential to be something more than a clopfic. Something maybe in the thoughts of My little Dashie, if you get what I mean, like the whole "daddy of a mare" thing. Id like to know your thoughts on this Sulliman, comment back or PM me.
703054 I just can't see myself writing that to tell you the truth. To me, it would be too similar to my little dashie, even if it was different in ways. This is sort of a parody if you couldn't guess by the title, so I really don't plan on taking it any further than where it is.
*EPIC GENTLMAN GLOVE SLAP*
you deserve that.
703269 You are absolutely correct sir.
703310 *EPIC GENTLMAN CROTCH KICK*
and that.
I'm going to pony hell for this.
703341 okay...that was a bit too much
703346 See ya there!
703348 ...nah.
just lightly confused but other than that THUMBS UP
Uh der fuq?
702266
where did you see this story.... i want to see if you are correct... i am just going to compare the two... *obviously lieing through his teeth and wants to check it out*
702136 I think you nailed it there. Might want to set the blender to "just add water later" at the very least...
And now for personal thoughts...
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Feels so right and it feels so wrong to like it and hate it at the same time anda0 isjfojsdofkmsdg9ruto BRAINFUCK
Dafuq did I just read?
Aw well. Not bad. I liked it. Fav'd, m'boy.
errr...kinda expected this but WTF DID IJUST READ!?
706012 "I have no idea!" -Medic