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I need to write, dammit. STOP(KEEP) DISTRACTING ME.

Aaaaand number 45 on my read later list. I'll never get this down to zero. :ajbemused:

Bronydragon:moustache:

This had promise as a NOT clop fic.

This was the most convoluted excuse EVER for a Clop Fic.

I don't care how you get your jollies, but I really hate it when something with potential becomes needlessly sexualized. I would encourage you to rewrite this WITHOUT clop/heat/etc. Stalkerloo would work really well as a secret-agent-type-character, and you clearly have the mechanics of writing down, so I can definitely see this going in the write direction (again, without involving clop).



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If you DO decide to do a non-clop action/adventure fic and need help doing worldbuilding (inventing reasons behind Stalkerloo's appearance and backstory), I happen to be pretty good at it. You can reply to this comment or PM me.

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I am down to 16...

It will probably be 42 again when I go to bed.

Mmmmmmm, this was deliciously sexy. Loved all of it, love Stalkerloo. I just didn't expect a Stalkerloo fic to be clop. Since Stalkerloo is pretty SFW, but it doesn't matter. Also. I CAME!!!!

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...45? :ajbemused: this would've been #1066 for me. not to mention the 445 chapters from stories i'm currently following.

great story, btw. :twilightsmile:

1398316 wow.. you're like how i am going to be in a month

Edit: I'm at 300 read laters and 200 chapters from stories I'm reading

i have 1128 chaptors to read for my favorits
btw great story

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2790 unread chapters for me.

I liked the story until it got to the sex part, then I got creeped out. I stopped at that point, but otherwise the story was well done. I won't be upvoting or downvoting, though.

I have like... 1 unread chapter. How the fuck do you guys read so much?

....that was good actually.
:unsuresweetie:

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While I was writing this I actually saw a bit of potential into turning this into an awesome fic. I'm considering writing another version without the clop, but then there'd be some violence as well xD. :pinkiehappy:
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5151 unread chapters on my end lol. :pinkiecrazy:
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I think it's because everytime a fic gets featured, we get the urge to read it later. I save all of it for later, but in the end I end up piling them all up *shrug*

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Ok the total word count I'll have to read to get through it is about 150k words.
I think that's something too.

Bronydragon:moustache:

1399617 Shit... And I thought my 900+ unread was bad...

1399159 1398562 1399617 1401771 well, i keep mine low(er) by going through it every so often, reading every one-shot in there i can find, else judging stories by their cover, description, and tags
soo... if i didnt do this, i probably would already be up there with you all... :pinkiecrazy:

I love splinter cell :D

would've been pretty funny if the boss came back in for his keys or something and saw the dude with his pants down

I agree...bad clopfic, good as a nonclopfic.

The problem with it as a clopfic, is there's no connection between the characters. The narrator is just a person who happened to be near a pony in heat. Essentially, it reads like a 'bad porno'.

To be fair, there are reasons for bad pornos. But, you have to have that fetish. For instance, I read plenty of bad fics with my specific fetish. I just know they're bad.

The thing is: There is a plot to this. There is interesting stuff...but it's all meaningless because it's just a clopfic! Who are 'they', why do they want the spreadsheets. Why is Twilight stealing spreadsheets! (And...heat as blackmail? Seriously?)

Still a well-written fic. If it focused on the plot, I'd give it a thousand thumbs-up. As of now, no thumbs up, no thumbs down. (And you're a good writer)

I shrugged. “It’s okay. As long as I’m still getting paid.” You chuckled.

I couldn’t believe what I was hearing. “And what would a filly like you need the spreadsheets for?” you asked.

The only problems I found were these two small lapses into second-person. Very nice.

Also, you know that scene where Spiderman is hanging upside down in the alley, and Mary Jane peels his mask up to start making out with him? If you plan on taking this premise any further (and you totally should), you could do that with Stalkerloo.:scootangel:

I guess this is how people really talk at their jobs

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Sorry bout the random second person thing xD I'm more used to writing Second person fics rather than first person.
Also, that could happen, that scene from spiderman xD
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Saves shit from getting boring throughout a boring day :pinkiehappy:

Loved the story, never expected this to happen though XD
I made a reading of this story go HERE if you wanna check it out :D

Woooo Tiesto!! Also nice fic :p

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I have 796 Read laters and 1698 chapters in my favorites list (some of that is from the days when there was ONLY the favorites list and I wanted to read a featured story or one that looked interesting)
I will never see the day that both of those lists are 0:pinkiecrazy:

1935083 Now it's 3115. .-.

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now there's 6450 unread chapters
My main account had to favourite a bunch of fics as well. I didn't really like using the read later option. I didn't like making a promise I couldn't really keep :applejackunsure:

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I know what you mean about the read later, especially when the fic description sounds good or original

Im currently at 1625 unread since Im putting effort into working that number down

Hurrah! One story down, 152+ stories to go! :pinkiehappy:

The only thing that glared at me was that two word combinations were used a bit too closely to each other. This is really picky, but if the same small bit of dialogue is used twice too quickly it can actually be fairly noticeable.
To specify: Two paragraphs right next to each other both used "on the other hand". "Increase(d) my pace further" was used twice in the same paragraph too, but clop synonyms are a bit tough to come up with so this one's excusable.

Sorry for being a nerd, but it's just what I am. I still enjoyed the story. :twistnerd:

I wonder how Ipsy is doing?

Stalkerloo is the best! :D
hehehe, nice job!

The next day the boss came in with a video recording from one of the security cameras.
Turns out, scootaloo was never there, and he just jerked himself off randomly.
He was promptly fired.

This was a interesting and fun story

That last line was what he should have asked right after he received revealed he knew who she was.... 😘

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