Great story as always please keep it up.

Awwwwww!! So adorable!

Only complaint is that the second half of the chapter is confusing when it comes to where it takes place compared to the first part.

Yay! New chapter!

...I say that exact same thing on everything I comment on, I know, I'm sorry...

Yay for a new chapter! It's good that Rainbow is beginning to see this whole thing as more than just having some fun.

I swear the teeth are gonna rot outa my head from all this sweetness. And I'm lovein' every minute of it! Keep it up.

788444 Oh! Sorry! It takes place later the same morning. I probably should have specified. I'll go and fix that. And thanks!

788848 Eeyup! You're right about that! Dashie's really coming around full circle, even if she's not quit realizing that she's falling in love.

789260 Sweetness is my specialty, so you might want to see a dentist about it by the time it's over!

I love this story so much, even if you skip the sexual parts. It's just so cuuuuute <3 Hnnnng! FlutterDash FOREVER! <3333

789474 Oh don't you worry, my friend. The next chapter is going to have quite the sexiness. But one of the bigger sex scenes will be a bit later on, too. You've got a lot to look forward to. FLUTTERDASH! Whoo!!

Cuteness is what I'm striving for in this, too. ;)

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I enjoy the sex scenes alright, but really, they pale in comparison to the simple cute affection between those two. <3 I half expect the others to all eventually catch on and somehow force the two to acknowledge that they're more than just "friends with benefits" XD Heck I can even imagine them all singing some song about it...

789576 XD Oh goodness, a musical number about that! It would be hilarious!

But there will be quite a bit of that though, with everypony pretty much blatantly stating "You love her" with some mixed results.

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Teehee! I just imagine them eventually getting impatient and sitting them down with eachother, then telling them "HEY! Look at eachother. You two are in LOVE. Get it?! STOP HIDING FROM THE TRUTH."

Sort of similar to an online roleplay I was in years ago, way before FiM was around. At one point, my character and this one other character basically had that happen to them. They were locked in a school library until they came to terms with their feelings. xD It was cute and fun. And it sort of became a tradition in this group of friends whenever they found out one or two of the group had secret feelings for someone or eachother. >W< Lock 'em in a library!

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xD Oh dear! Well then, we shall see what comes to be!

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Hehe, sorry for rambling off on a tangent there... xD

Looking forward to it! ^^

So Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash are going to do it in the audience at the play?...........KINKY even though that could get akward fast XD

791721 XDDD That's definitely tempting to play with!! But no, if anything, it would be sneaking away during intermission and then coming back. XD And hey, turns out Dashie actually enjoys the play! 8D

So excited that this updated and I can't wait for the next chapter. This is definitely one of the best Flutterdash fics I have read. Please update again soon!

I absolutely love this chapter! Now give meh moar! ლ(ಠ益ಠლ)

But in all seriousness amazing chapter. xD

“Well excuuuuuuuse me, Princess!" Only you could pull that off in a clopfic. Great chapter by the way, I can't wait for more!

Cheers,
jangledorf

P.S WHY WOULD YOU SPOIL WHAT HAPPENS IN THE THEATER ALLREADY AHHHHHH (actually I'm not that angry about it.)

798913 XD Thanks! I just had to do it! I'm not above inserting some silliness.

As for the play, well, I didn't really spoil much since I've yet to fill in the inner details of it. X3 I was actually just speculating, anyway.

“'I'm also full of magical powers!'

'An' Ah'm a champion polo player!'"

Shit just got real.

That part about "perfect synchronizing harmony" reminded a lot of Turbo Lover by Judas Priest.

810230 Yeah...I know. XD I just couldn't help but use that term! No worry, I need not use it any longer, though!

After yet another re-read of this I just want to note something. If Rainbow Dash enjoys the play I hope Fluttershy has a part in making that happen. We (well I) don't want the two of them sitting next to each other for no reason at all.
But I look forward to Reading it. I just wanted to add my last minute thoughts.

I do wonder when the big L word is going to hit Dash on the head. I can already picture the look on her face!

OMG this is a GREAT STORY! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE keep up the good work and I hope to see another chapter soon.
THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST FLUTTERDASH FANFICS EVER! But remember no rush or pressure.

Also Pinkie can't break her Pinkie promise, you saw how she behaved when applejack broke the pinkie promise in the last roundup
" FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF NO PONY BREAKS A PINKIE PROMISE!"

flat out demonic
I still have nightmares!

Just a question, are you working on this or are you working on "Perfect on Paper"?

you used a LoZ cartoon reference!

I wonder when Dash & Fluttershy realises that they aren't just friends with benefits, but friends with mutual crushes.

“And I'm a champion volleyball player!”

some volleyball was played that day

references by me

2882622 Flutterdash? Best ship ever? HA! Flutterdash is the only Mane 6 ship I will tolerate, but it still doesn't even hold a candle to VinylTavia.

Awww i really like where this is going :D

Soo....is this ever gonna continue? looks like it hasn't been worked on in a year.

3319652 You missed the fact that there were plenty more chapters that were added over the course of this year. I just removed all but the first five chapters because it wasn't working out. It's in the description.

WHAT?! this was by far my most favourite story on fimfic, it was long but it was SO LOVELY.. why would you delete so much of it?
I am legitimately upset.
I understand you have your reasons, but still..

3320830 It just didn't work out the way I had originally planned for it. I do apologize for upsetting you or anyone else. It was not my intention.

But I hope you guys will like the new stuff once I update it.

3319688 OH! ok. This just looked really interesting and I was thinking about reading it. But it would drive me nuts if I started reading it and . . . and then canceled lol. My mistake

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Regardless of whether or not the way you change the fic is going to be better or worse than the way you originally had it up, I have to applaud a writer's willingness to change what they've already posted when they feel it isn't right. Too many are afraid that it isn't right to the people who have already read and commented on it, while others simply want to focus on "the next story."

3322747 It's all good. Thank you for understanding!

3322864so does that mean that you have stopped updating this story

did you delete some chapters?

I'm glad I downloaded this before the chapters were deleted. Now this will be like an alternate storyline for me.

This story is so awesome, I hope it updates soon

heh, just had the urge to read this again came back to see alot missing. I liked the story how it was, but I will admit that as it continued Dash became...dramatically too syrupy sweet for my taste. Not sure if you're going to change that at all with the shift you're planning, but I'll see when you bring out new chapters. Till then I'll re-read what is here. : )

Wonderful story!!! Flutterdash is one of my top most favourite shipping pairs. They have a balanced set of similarities and differences that complement each other. Probably the closest couple (among the Mane 6 shipping) that has a strong Yin and Yang feel to it. I could go into more detail...but it would involve my astrology/zodiac head-cannons, unless people here would like to read about it.

Anyways, Awesome Story (involving two awesome ponies)!!!!
I shall now add it to my fav list.

I know I'm insanely late to the party, but still. This was fantastic.

By far, this is arguably my favorite FlutterDash fic, (no, not because of the smut) because it's such a neat story and I le emotions Rainbow Dash conveys throughout the fic. But, I will admit, I'm rather disappointed that this fic is on hiatus. Hopefully, the hiatus ends soon.

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I haven't read the deleted chapters as I did not find this fic early enough. But I will say, I like how Dash is right now, it's a perfect balance of sappiness and Rainbow Dash's outer personality.

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