Oh how delightfully decadent! Also very fluffy and sweet. I feel like I'm reading more about a bonding of two close friends then a clop. Well done!

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Awesome! That means I'm doing my job! Exactly my intention!

I agree, I too feel that this is about a bonding friendship increasing in strength, a fitting way to keep to the shows theme goin in the off-season. They both stick very well to character too, a finewrk indeed. Keep up the good work, if you wouldn't mind.

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Thanks very much! That's exactly what I'm going for here, to really increase a bond in friendship and explore the angles of it all. Sure, the story has and will have a lot of sex in it, but it's more than that. I'm glad it's managed to come through pretty well so far!

I enjoy clop that has actual story most are just like random pony sex random human mixed in for no reason. And the only clop of FlutterDash thatthere seems to be is rough kinky sex in witch Fluttershy abuses Dash

That was sweet and cute :3. Hope you decide to add more to this

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I know, right? DX I've seen those, which I admittedly read a couple of out of morbid curiosity. Other than a few that were actually cute, there really is a severe lacking in FlutterDash clopfics that also has a story to it, as well as good emotional angles. So, I decided to try for myself to create something good.

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Thanks! Don't worry, I will be making more!

719556 YUS!

Something tells me that eventually, somepony (probably Twilight, seems to be a cliche) will walk in on them.

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Well, you'll just have to see! But if that is the case, I may make it somepony else.

Loving this story so much! >w< Hnnng~

Oh well, I'm not really into clopping, but it's too cute to turn away.

Clearly you are not a virgin :P

Good job on the story, I've been looking for a good x
I hope to see more of this.

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XD Actually, contrary to what you might believe, I actually am a virgin. I just get information from books and occasionally lemon fanfiction.

Anyway, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! That was my goal, to make some good FlutterDash!

719606 But Twilight would be the most socialy akward one, if she knew she be a nearvos wreck and try t to avoid Dash and Fluttershy the best she can but at the same time be worried this could destroy Fluttershy and Dashes friendship. But i do wonder how Pinkie would react it be more Akward if she little or nothing on the subject of sex and went to ask Twilight about what she saw. Lol Twilight explaining sex to Pinkie more more scaring then cupcakes

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XDDD Well, we'll see what happens with that! No worries!

Damn, missed the initial update, but it was worth waiting for.

On to Chapter 3!

This is the best thing I've read. I might as well take some notes. Congratulations!

i read chapter one of this story a wile ago and must have forgot to track it
im glad i refound it
i would love to read the rest of this now, but it is late and i need sleep
(made sure to duble check that i faved it this time)

Im waiting for the moment when somepony walks in on them in the process

1935998 that would be really funny... Awkward but funny.