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NintendoGal55


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Rainbow Dash borrows Commander Hurricane's biography from Twilight, and ends up reading about various aspects of her life. She discovers that the historical once-ruler of the Pegasi also had a VERY interesting relationship with her subordinate, Private Pansy. Seeking the company of Fluttershy, who had played Private Pansy, the two of them go to reading through the rest of what Commander Hurricane shared with her subordinate.

Rated for sexual content references. Hurricane/Pansy shipping, as well as hints of FlutterDash.

Changed the title, just in case, really. ;)

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Comments ( 32 )

FIRST POST. I NOW WEILD THE SWORD! Great story! Loved it and probely no other like it. Godspeed and goodluck.

583025 u didnt hear there gonna start giving out 1 day bans for "im first post" comments

583534 I didn't. Aw crap.

AAWWW!!!:fluttercry: Such a good story!

583677 i dont no when there gonna start u should be safe tho because i think they will only do it to the ones that comment it after they start

so buetiful i will remember you private pansey

583534Personally I think that's crap because I see no harm in them. To me they're one of those slightly annoying constants that you can always depend on. And the Ark of the Covenant ones were pretty cool.:pinkiesmile:

588075 ya i no lol...i guess there getting tired of people sayiong first all the time...the comments were made for giving you opinion on the story you no...but hey what do i no im new here :scootangel:

I enjoyed it, lots! Makes me want to have my own journal.

Very sweet, and I do enjoy open endings when they're done well and end on a happy note, which your story does, so great job. Hopefully Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash will think long and hard about their own relationship. Wink wink nudge.

Dude! You should definitely write more! this is awesome! And of course, ship Fluttershy and Rainbow because of it.

This is just... brilliant :twilightsmile: I didn't actually think that someone would expand on Private Pansy and Commander Hurricane. You made it sound so amazing!

You know, I would've thought RD would be okay with reading after reading Daring Do, or is this before Read It And Weep? I dunno, it's still sweet.

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Thanks! :D I'm glad you liked that!

It does take place after that episode. XD RD's just still reluctant to read something that's NOT Daring Do, and well, I figure she'd find reading History stuff boring. XD

714576 Yup, I think history is pretty boring too. Unless they manage to make it epic like in Doctor Who :pinkiehappy:

714607
True! XD

So Dashie goes into it 'cause it's the character she played, also with an Awesome McCoolname! XD

That was just, beautiful. An extremely good sad fic, which I always try to avoid because they are sad.:fluttercry::raritydespair::raritycry::applecry:

That was just, beautiful. An extremely good sad fic, which I always try to avoid because they get me like this. A job well done, if I do say so myself. .:fluttercry::raritydespair::raritycry::applecry:

That was just, beautiful. An extremely good sad fic, which I always try to avoid because they get me like this. A job well done, if I do say so myself. .:fluttercry::raritydespair::raritycry::applecry:

That was beautiful, I shed some manly tears to this :applecry:

This was very nice. Hearth's Warming Eve is easily my favorite episode in the series, and I love the way you explored it with this.

Hum... Are you aware that Hurricane is actually a male? Fluttershy as Pansy called Dash "sir" and not "ma'am" in the episode. And she said she disliked Hurricane a lot.
But, whatever. The very idea of this text was good, I presume, but there was way too much drama in it for me. Sorry.

5031104 Pansy also referred to Commander Hurricane as "she" and "her" later on in the play. As for the "sir", can either be interpreted as preferring it that way, or Fluttershy forgetting her lines because of how nervous she is. Either one works. But beyond that, Commander Hurricane's gender was never actually explicitly stated and was played by Rainbow Dash. I'd even say it's more likely that she was female, since a good number of leaders throughout the series are/were mares.

On top of that, to me, I think Commander Hurricane was a badass female leader, I liked the idea of that. Now, if you prefer him/her being male, that's your prerogative and I'm perfectly fine with that. I'm convinced she's female until proven otherwise by canon somehow. :pinkiesmile:

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Oh, well, it seems I didn't pay enough attention then. I don't have any preference though, and in fact I thought of Hurricane as a mare before I heard that line of Fluttershy.
Thanks for pointing that! :twilightsmile:

5031941 You're very welcome! :twilightsmile:

5031834 Copied from the My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Wiki.

http://mlp.wikia.com/wiki/My_Little_Pony_Friendship_is_Magic_Wiki

The leader of the Pegasus Tribe before Equestria's founding. Played by Rainbow Dash at the pageant in the episode Hearth's Warming Eve, mentioned by Rainbow Dash on page 91 in chapter 9, "A Head in the Clouds", of the book Twilight Sparkle and the Crystal Heart Spell, and detailed in the book The Journal of the Two Sisters. Referred to as female in the context of the pageant during Hearth's Warming Eve, but referred to as male in The Journal of the Two Sisters. His cutie mark, according to illustrations in The Journal of the Two Sisters, is a six-pronged star with four five-pronged stars surrounding it, matching at least the design of that of both Compass Star and "Ponet".

5348810 Well okay then! So he's male by technical elements of canon. All right, fair enough!

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I'm still sticking to female, though. I just like it better, honestly. XD I fully acknowledge he's male, but I think I'll stick to my own headcanon for it.

5349109 I too prefer Commander Hurricane being female because for the longest time, I thought he was a mare. Even now, when I know his true gender, it is strange for me to refer to him as a stallion. So my own headcanon has Commander Hurricane as a mare. Of course, I also like to say Rainbow Dash is Commander Hurricane ressurrected.

5349173 Same here! I feel the same way! It just feels kind of odd referring to him as a stallion. MAYBE I'll play with the idea someday, who knows. But yeah, overall, I just always saw CH as a mare! So I'll stick to that. :D

That's a nice way of looking at it! I can see Rainbow being something of an incarnation of Commander Hurricane. X3

:fluttershysad::heart: So much feels,,,,,beautiful story!

Wow...
So Sweet! :twilightsmile:
I always knew that the commander was a stallion, but now I just kind of want to make him a her and let rainbow be the very far down reincarnation of him/her

That was such a powerful tale of love and loss! Bravo!

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