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NintendoGal55
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the icon is so sad :(
~FlutterDash hints~ NOPE.AVI
That said, other people like it, so go ahead and read it.
Nice story. I thought it would be interesting if Rainbow interacted with Fluttershy during that episode. I think it would unfold in a similar manner. Fluttershy knows Rainbow so well that if she wanted, she could could easily hurt her feelings.
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More than hurt her feelings. As seen in Hurricane Fluttershy, Dash feels a really close bond to 'Shy. She could have destroyed her, more or less.
Now to the story: I LOVED IT!! You are great in describing the emotional turmoil that Dash goes through and the reconcelation with Shy was just heartwarming.
You get three out of four hearts. (my new measuring system for stories is, the better it touches me, the more hearts I give.)
Really sweet story, loved it.
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I'm glad I managed to get Rainbow Dash's emotional turmoil out pretty well.
Cool! Thank you for the hearts, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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You're right about that! Hurricane Fluttershy was awesome in how it portrayed Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy's friendship, and we could see how destroyed Rainbow Dash would be. So if she had appeared in the episode, I think there would've been something pretty sad to happen that it would leave RD in tears. :<
I thought the implementation of Tank into this story was a wonderful idea. All of the Mane 6's pets besides Angel Bunny seem to be ignored in the show and in fanfics! So you get a stache for that
Anyways, onto the story itself. I thought it was great. Though im not a fan of shipping, the shipping elements of the story were enjoyable to read. I liked the depiction of the weaker side of Rainbow Dash, and it makes sense why she would act like the way she did. Overall, 4.5/5 :)
THIs is what should've happened in the episode.
Oh, the cuteness! It burns!
I've always wondered where the rest of the Mane Six were during Fluttershy's "episode". Heh, I wonder if she'll act like that on her period... What am I thinking
Anyway, I like how you added Tank in there, it's just so cool! He's my favourite pet, and he seems to be getting the least love just because he's not funny like Gummy or Owloysius, or commonly seen like Angel. His silent act is brilliant, since I could imagine Tank doing that. One more thing... how could Tank stand on a cloud
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Hee! Thanks. xD
It just felt right to put Tank in there as I was writing that portion of the story! :D And well...he's Tank. He can stand on a cloud!
Okay, that's actually just me going with the fact that every indoor place within Cloudsdale and Rainbow Dash's home, it looks like solid ground. I like to think it's a material specially made to feel and look like solid ground but can maintain being on clouds and in the air. But that's just me. XDDD
Faved!
Holy cow loved the story! ^.6
I read this with an eye for Flutterdash and loved it. The two of them do complete each other...
Love the ending... I took it as being suggestive and well worded.
Aww, thanks!
Glad you enjoyed it! 
And you'll notice the bit with Rainbow Dash talking to Tank was carried over into Perfect On Paper, no less!
I always wondered what if RD was there in that epsiode
Great story, you made me Dawww
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Your loyal and super cool subject, <------------- Wow, you put a lot of rensponsibility in your work. I mean if different pony was writing this...
Rainbow Dash then it will be like "Your faithful student," or anything like that. Still great!
Wow, I find this really realistic. The way they acted, FlutterDash shipping were really great!
Even, if this was short. It made me convinced enough to feel that this ACTUALLY happened!
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It just felt appropriate!
Thank yoooouuuu!! Wow! That's quite a feat! Glad you enjoyed it!
I'm not a fan of Rainbow and Fluttershy as a romantic ship, though I do find their friendly interactions adorable.
Even so, this story is really cute and mostly true to their interactions in the show. I really think that episode could've been improved if Rainbow was in it in some way. Leave it to the pegasi to bring out each other at their best and most adorable....
Oh amazing story, I also like the ending, you perfectly made Rainbow Dash's signature like she would write it not in the Twilight or anything like that. What I'm trying to say is, I loved it!
I'm accepting this as canon. No matter what.