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After picking up Tank from Fluttershy's cottage, Rainbow Dash rescues four pug puppies. She can't keep them nor abandon them, but names them the Wonder Pugs after her heroes: Spitfire, Soarin', Rapidfire, and Fleetfoot. She and Tank go into Ponyville to see which of the other Mane Six might be the perfect choice to take care of the cute little guys.

Read an MLP fanfic that is awe-inspiringly adorable, because the Wonder Pugs are just too lovable... too determined... too cute.

The following includes hints of SoarinDash (Soarin' and Dashie) and PipBelle (Pipsqueak and Sweetie Belle), plus references from Mel Brooks' The Producers, Don Bluth's Anastasia, The Adventures of Milo and Otis, Mouse Hunt, A Charlie Brown Christmas, The Lion King, and previous MLP episodes.

Chapters (10)
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Comments ( 63 )

>Milo and Otis references
I'm going to read the fuck out of this story.

Comment posted by DarthWill3 deleted Jul 19th, 2013

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You watch your language! :twilightangry2:

Anyway, thanks! Be sure to comment on each chapter. :yay:

Omg I loved this so much :rainbowkiss:

Oh come on, thats too much daaaaw :pinkiehappy:!

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Thank you very much! :yay:

Incredible nice story :pinkiehappy:

*Awaits more such storys from you (Happy, Rd maincharacter, and so on) :rainbowdetermined2:*

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Thanks a lot. Don't you just love pug puppies? :pinkiesmile:

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Well, Dashie will be one of the main characters in my next stories. :raritywink:

That's so cute. This was great.

Hey a Pug is a British dog right?

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Actually, they originated in China, but Queen Victoria keep a pug.

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Thank you very much! What are you favorite parts?

2903408 I like how Rainbow got attached to them, as well as the part where it goes to the point of view of the Wonderpups and Opalenence.

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Well, Dashie's not the only character with a view. :raritywink:

Now THIS looks familiar...

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It sure is, old friend. :raritywink:

Cute :)
I like the way you exressed how Rainbow Dash doesn't like to show her soft side

Yes, there is no doubt whatsoever that pugs are most adorable puppies ever >w<
Nicely written, I like your use of transition words

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You've got that right, pal. :raritywink:

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I concur. :twilightsmile:
Why thanks. I'd like to help move things along for my readers. :pinkiehappy:

Yeah! It's like Twi likes stallions but doesn't know how to date one.

3146314
Really now? Is there a fanfic on that? ::twilightsmile:

2966150 That's our Dashie, alright. :raritywink:

2966179 I agree! :pinkiesmile:
Thank you very much! Be sure to comment on the next chapters! :twilightsmile:

I finally took the time to read this since I had some spare time. Wow, what a very well written piece of work that you have made. I really enjoyed the use of italics letters in the story. I can only imagine how much time and work that took because I wrote a fiction where quite a few words were in colors and that took me about an hour to do. The italics really helped me feel that the words were being spoken in a sharper tone of voice and it made the story much more enjoyable.

Of course. I loved that you referenced my most favorite ship of all time. Soarin' and Dash. I like how you mention things from previous MLP stories and you seem to know much about this show like for example....you mentioned the line that Rainbow says in your story that came from that episode where Fluttershy keeps saying "Bite off more than I can chew." Many things like that made me happy when I read this story.

The ending was golden, but poor Derpy. She's not crazy...just a little on the Derp side. I can't imagine how she still has a delivery job when the law officials are constantly watching her like you said in your story. :derpytongue2:

Anyway, great job. Well written, and I hope you continue to write. The author's notes were very entertaining to read under each chapter as well. :twilightsmile:

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Why, thank you! :pinkiehappy:
Italics always help you along the way. :twilightsmile:
SoarinDash are a cute couple, I won't deny. And it's always good to look back at the past. :heart: :twilightsmile:
Well, nopony wanted to have Derpy cause trouble again. :rainbowlaugh:
Thank you very much.
What do you think of the Wonder Pugs?

3153314 I thought they were adorable. I realized that you must have given Rapidfire a made up color because there is never an appearance or any descriptions about him in the show. He is only mentioned. The pugs were adorable and made many D'awwww inducing moments.

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I'm glad to hear you say that.
For Rapidfire, it was a lucky guess. :twilightblush:

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You've got that right, pal. So cute! :scootangel:

You should have revered to Soarin' as Rainbow Dash's "coltfriend" or "special somepony" not "boyfriend" just saying. :rainbowderp:

That was great, this should be an episode. (I am guessing that this fan fiction's cover pic is the one that "Tabby Gums" took.)

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Well, the word "girlfriend" was mentioned in "Hearts and Hooves Day." That should be considered canon, right? :twilightsheepish:

3407142
Aw, thanks! I totally agree with you! Why not contact The Hub in my place? :twilightsmile:
That's "Gabby Gums" and yes, I suppose that would be the case. :pinkiesmile:

To be honest, I don't like dogs much.
But this looks too cute to not read.

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Aw, thanks! What are your favorite parts so far in each chapter?

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I honestly haven't read too far, sorry~!
I'm too swamped with Homework, but I will get around to reading all of it.

i will read thins one day in a few weeks when im on my vacation and im board at the hoteal but there is one thing i wanna say about this PUGGGYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MY FAV DOG!!!!!!!!!!!!:rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

3696769 Aw... Glad to hear you say that! Be sure to comment inside each chapter. :twilightsmile:

There was a picture book I read eons ago called Catzilla. Was about a Godzilla-sized cat attacking a city full of dogs, or some such thing.

5375272 - Yeah. Was weird, but rather funny.

5375821 Well, thank you for reading this story! I hope you've enjoyed it! :twilightsmile:

5378807 - Your welcome. Any chance of a sequel with grown-up Wonder Pugs? I'd be interested to see if anyone adopted them if they did not remain permanently with Fluttershy. In Filli Vanilli many of her animals were adopted.

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